FF-'DESIRE'--Part 12'the Prom night'part-2 pg 47 - Page 31

amazing ff... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
absolutely brilliant!! i just started readin it yday and have been hooked ever since.
the way u describe avitas deep rooted luv for each other is rlly over whelming... literally im tearing up... is tht the end??? plz dnt make it the end we need a happy ending... and avita scenes!!
but hats off to u the best writer by far!!!!

Omg, Neha, thanks for dedicating this update to me and Priya. I feel blessed this week to be loved so much, thanks for continuing the update. I will comment after reading the update.

Neha, thanks for this fabulous update. I actually forgot about RV and his situation but it's nice to see you close all loose ends. Arpi's father's behavior was not wrong he needs time to understand the situation. Both RV and Arshika must confess their deeds. It's great to see Shika again even for a minor dialogue. Avi is deeply in love with Arpi and he will do anything. Your ff flows beautifully, I love it. Arpi's cure will take time but Avi will be there for her. I can't wait for the next update. Avi has changed and grown so much as a character from the beginning of this ff, this is thanks to you and your creativity. I can feel the vibrations of their powerful love.

Hyeee,
my hye got to long b'coz of the jhatkas u all are giving.

For avita just can say
"ye zalim duniya wale kya jane pyar ko".
Bechari arpi hospital mein abhi-abhi thik hui hai and all started taunting her but no worries avi is wid her so together they can fight wid the world.

I just forget about devil rv he is still alive he he he.
Waise where is arshika now if she will confess everything will be fine.

Well jo these days are quiet hard for me a little busy so not coming on the IF much hope u understand
take care.

update plz eagerly waitng...😍

Originally posted by: 1qr4h

amazing ff... 👏
absolutely brilliant!! i just started readin it yday and have been hooked ever since.
the way u describe avitas deep rooted luv for each other is rlly over whelming... literally im tearing up... is tht the end??? plz dnt make it the end we need a happy ending... and avita scenes!!
but hats off to u the best writer by far!!!!

hey 1qr4h hehe i don't know ur good name 😳

first of all thanx for commenting dear, 😳 n then thanx for liking it, nop its not end yet few more updates in the way hope u will enjoy them too😳

hehe n about the best writer n all i really don't think so , i will sugges you to read other FFs n OS on forum they just rock i m learning from them, n for ur sweet n kind words i m really very greatfull , thanx once again n plz keep commenting here on each FF u like .😊

Originally posted by: Sidda8

Neha, thanks for this fabulous update. I actually forgot about RV and his situation but it's nice to see you close all loose ends. Arpi's father's behavior was not wrong he needs time to understand the situation. Both RV and Arshika must confess their deeds. It's great to see Shika again even for a minor dialogue. Avi is deeply in love with Arpi and he will do anything. Your ff flows beautifully, I love it. Arpi's cure will take time but Avi will be there for her. I can't wait for the next update. Avi has changed and grown so much as a character from the beginning of this ff, this is thanks to you and your creativity. I can feel the vibrations of their powerful love.

hey Siddu thanx for liking UD n about dedications u guys deserve much then this i was about to wrap it up but just bz of ur ques n Priya's order😆 i decided to make it bit long n solve all stories unlike Cvs 😡

about Avi yap initially he was hurt broken inside but showing strong face to world which Arpi's arrival disclose. n now with Arpi's love n trust he is actually strong n will fight with world for her as she desired , but will never leave her , ,

thanx for liking it dear , 😳

Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hyeee,
my hye got to long b'coz of the jhatkas u all are giving.

For avita just can say
"ye zalim duniya wale kya jane pyar ko".
Bechari arpi hospital mein abhi-abhi thik hui hai and all started taunting her but no worries avi is wid her so together they can fight wid the world.

I just forget about devil rv he is still alive he he he.
Waise where is arshika now if she will confess everything will be fine.

Well jo these days are quiet hard for me a little busy so not coming on the IF much hope u understand

take care.

hey Rups dear its compleatly fine about late n all😆

n about Arpi's state yaa 'ye zalim duniya' hehe

thanx for comment as i can understand u must be busy but plz try to come on IF when ever its possible . will wait for ur next comment on next UD .😉

Originally posted by: prash_t

Nehaa🤗🤗



Me First again🥳


RV and his father😡

New problems in Avita's life


Arpi's father shldnt have said like this to Arpi..She is first of all unwell...and secondly avi is d one who saved her😊


Now i dont want them to sacrifice their love..instead they shld try to solve the prob and convince their parents😊





Update Sooon

Btw its a good decision to continue with FF😉

Love ya😳


Hugs to you🤗

hey Prashu dear ,

at last u unres ur post hehe😆

well chalo itne appresiation ke liye itna wait to banta hi hai , n congo for being first again 👏

about Arpi's dad he is typical india father , n more over the matter is not of Arpi n Avi Arshi is also involved thats his prob

about Avita don't worry they will find some way anyhow , 😉

love ya too dear .🤗