FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 - Page 6

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PrashT thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
And yeah...
1 more thing dear...the title of ur ff is superb!! "deewangi"..wooww
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
its very nice ramona
i liked it
i came 2 read ur ff😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sab2778

its very nice ramona

thanks Saba....
i liked it
i came 2 read ur ff😊 aww... sho shweet....

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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Thanks for the FF, I always wondered how Arpi's college life would be and you have given a great opening. It interesting to see all the characters in different shoes. Hopefully, Avi makes his appearance soon and proves RV is importance.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
hey ramona
i am waiting for next ch
jaldi karo bhai
avi ki entry karvao yaar
dil bekraaar huem jaa raha hai
hahahahahahaha😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sidda8

Thanks for the FF, ur welcome dear.... I always wondered how Arpi's college life would be and you have given a great opening. thanks... It interesting to see all the characters in different shoes.hmmm... Hopefully, Avi makes his appearance soon and proves RV is importance. he's on his way...😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: danno

hey ramona

hieeee i am waiting for next ch
jaldi karo bhai
avi ki entry karvao yaar Avi's cuming dear.... bas thoda aur wait karo... woh kya hai na he's lazy....
dil bekraaar huem jaa raha hai hum samajhte hai....
hahahahahahaha😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
thanks for all your comments...
I'll put the next chapter very soon....
lubb ya all....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hieee... everyone... Happy NEW YEAR.... I hope you all had a blast...
Okay... now this is the 3rd chapter... read and Comment...


Chapter 3

A well built handsome guy was sitting on a revolving leather chair. His P.A Chulbul was standing infront of him reading his appointments for the day. The person on the chair however wasn't paying attention & was engrossed in his laptop.

Chulbul: "Sir, today you have an appointment with Mr. Gupta and then you have ....... he went on Non Stop''' and now you have a meeting with Mr. Mehta at 4.00 pm"

The person on in front was least bothered about anything and continued on his laptop'' Chulbul sighed and asked,

"Sir, we have a meeting at 4.00 pm"

Man: " Oh' Err.. Yes'' Hey just look at her man !!! She looks hot !!!! " he exclaimed. "Chulbul just check this out''"

But before he could say anything further, Chulbul cut him in between and began'

" Sir, we will be late for the meeting.."

The Man who by now had got irritated said in a loud voice'

" What's your problem huh ??? Can't you see Im Busy on Facebook'' Get out or Else your Fired !!!"

Poor Chulbul walked awy without saying a word. Outside the cabin, his colleagues came up to him & said,

Rohan: Arre Chulbul, kya hua ??

Chulbul: Nothing happened' Actually Im not feeling well'

Jagat: Oh come on guys'. Lets go' The coffee-break will start any moment' You two go ahead, I'll be there in 5 mins'

Thus saying, Jagat moves towards his Boss's cabin

Jagat: Sir, May I come in ??

Man: Oh Yes' Come.

Jagat: Sir, this the Delhi Project file and this is the Paris Project File'

Man: ''' still fidgeting with the laptop''' Keep them on my table.

Jagat keeps the files on the table and leaves.

The phone rings and the Caller-id flashes 'Ranvijay'. Arpita attends the call'

Arpi: Looks like you've finally realized that you have someone waiting to talk to you, right ???

RV: Baby'' Im really SORRY' I was very sleepy' and '' Im SORRY. Pls forgive me' pls

Arpi: Forgive you??? Im not repeating my mistake' Every time I forgive you & you end up doing the sme thing over and over again' But this time' I wont give in'. GOODBYE'.

She disconnected the call & threw the phone on the Bed.


tel me how it was.... JALDI se likewa karbo and commentwa pls...


Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice buttt very small
well done ramona

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