FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 - Page 24

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ramona..
Plzz let them unite..
There is already tragedy in GKD...Plz Plz...let Avita unite forever
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyyy Cherryyy 🤗

interesting promo 😳

i am sure nothing will happen to his Arpi 😳

Love ya 🤗
Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ramona babes. .
U didnt pm me???y???bt i found out d promo myself. .lol!aw!dat means arpiz gna die. .ramona,dnt do ths dr. .let them unite
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Ramona Darling 🤗 🤗 Priya darling... 🤗 🤗

This is sooo romantic 😍 😍 😍 haayeee... me too lubb it...

hehe... my first reader... CONGRATULATIONS

my heart was beating so fast when his arms were around her waist...now what is gonna do 🤪 dekho dekho...

Stupid RV he came between them here also 😡 he has to be there to protect her... nahi toh Avi will... ☺️



i love ur FF 😍

love ya sweety 🤗 Love you too my toofan...

PS munni i love only my Jaanu saku and don't get jealous yes Jaanu.. She is right... 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prash_t

Ramonaaa🤗🤗 Prashuuu my sweetheart... 🤗 🤗


Avi☺️ mera bhi yehi haal hai...

I cldnt help blushing ya😳 oh dont worry... I'll make you blush even more in my next update... 😆



Oh God He got angry you know na ki he gets angry very fast.. But thats the reason why I love him... ☺️



Loooved it😳 thank you...


Muaaahhh





Muaahhh my Sweetheart...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

hey Ramona Darling 🤗 My Toofan.. 🤗

OMG!!!!!! what's with Avi now? he is sooo Jealous same as Green eyed Monster... 😲 😲 😲Poor Arpi what's gonna happen with her ? 😭 😭 Something terrible..

ur Avi is juuussst Awesome😍 😍 I know that.. 😆

Darling knowing you this is just a trailer we have to wait for the picture and btw enjoy ur trip 😳 yup...

but u r making us to wait for long time 😭 but no worries i am wait 😉
dont worry.. I'll update soon..




love you 🤗 love you too my darling

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prash_t

Ramonaaa🤗🤗 Prashuuu...



Whoa!!!!

Wht an update👏👏 thank you love...


Loved all the lines said by Avi...!😊😉 I knew you would...

but wht is he upto???? I hope there wont be any misunderstandings na na... misunderstanding toh ho hi nahi sakti... Avi hai na... 😉

Update was...




Update it Soon Darling...😊 surely sweetheart...

Cant wait fr the twist😉 hmm... I know that honey...






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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Vistaa

My my, I am scared Ramona😲...hope she will be ok. dnt worry di.. everything will be fine..

Fascinating bit of writing...👏😊 thank you di...
Thanks for the pm that Priya sent on ur behalf. ur welcome di...
Vista

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sidda8

Awesome work Ramona!!!!!!!! Avi is rocking!!!!!!




thank you Siddu... 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

this update is dedicated to my Sweetheart Prashuu...

Chapter 11-

Erupted

Fear filled Arpi's eyes. His every stride told her that he intended to do sumthing terrible. Arpi managed to stand on the bed. "Dont come close to me." She tried getting off, but he anticipated her move and caught her by her waist.

"Leave me", she yelled. He placed her on the bed while she kicked & struggled to free herself from his grasp. He climbed on her & held her hands at the sides. His bare body on hers made her feel uncomfortable.

Arpi- "What are u doing?"

Avi- "Sshh.. Relax Arpita", he said sensually. His eyes admired every feature of her beautiful face. Avi bent forward & tried to kiss her luscious lips. But Arpi turned her face just in time thus revealing her slender neck. He softly kissed her on her cheek & nuzzled her neck. Arpi felt really uncomfortable.

"Please don't do this. Please let me go." she pleaded. But her pleas fell on a deaf ear. His kisses gained passion. His thirst for her grew rapidly. He enjoyed her soft skin under his lips. Poor Arpi couldnt do anything apart from crying & yelling. Avi kissed her on both sides of her neck. Slowly slowly he moved downwards. He loosend his grip on her hand & tugged at her clothes. Knowing that her one hand was free, she took her chance & hit him on his head with the vase kept on the table. "Aahh.." He yelped in pain & got off her holding his head. Arpi jumped off the bed, took her dupatta & ran towards the door. He desperately tried to open the door but it was locked from inside & Avi had the keys. "Damn it!!" Arpi was furious.

Meanwhile, Avi came searching for her. He knew she cudnt escape because the keys were with him. "I know where you are Arpita. So come out from hiding place." He knew she was somewhere in the house only.

On the hand, Arpi was hiding behind the cupboard. She kept praying that he doesnt see her. Avi had moved to the other side of the room. Luckily she wasn't spotted by him.

Arpita looked around if she could find any means of escape. She saw a window in the kitchen. A wave of happiness spread on her face & she without looking around she ran towards the window. But unfortunately, Avi had seen her running.

Just before Arpita could reach the window, Avi grabbed her & hugged her from the back.. "Where do you think you're going?"

Arpita cursed her fate for being caught.


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Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago

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