FF:Tum Ho Toh...Final Chpt updtd on Pg-34 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Kesarmania

🤗 mini i wish, i was good at analysing and commenting. but i m not good with words yaar!Shradhaji please,let's just go and ask around in the DEK forum.I am sure many will disagree.You are a brilliant writer.That's why I keep pestering you to come up with a GK fic😃

i can't even describe how much i enjoyed reading this one. i was picturising the scenes in my mind. i have said in your previous ff too, that i really like your style of narration where you always give pov of each character for every scene.Thank you so much.I do remember and that comment really meant a lot to me😳

you know, i feel you should write a novel. sometimes i doubt , that you are already a professional writer. mini promise me that you will never give up writing, you don't know how much amazing writer you are.

don't look at me like this😕, itne taarif karne ki meri aadat nahi hai, you compelled me today to talk so much.Shradha😆thank you yaar but professional writer😆waise I started writing after coming to this form.GK ke pyaar ne itna paagal bana diya ki I tried my hand at everything.so the credit goes to this wonderful show and GK.and reading your comments I just can't stop blushing😳I don't know what to say but I am humbled and truly touched by your appreciation.and yeh le ek badi si jhappi for making me all senti🤗

what tospeak about ff, i will steal the comments of did judge,it was chumeshwari wala chapi.

aur bechara letter kesu usse kabhi shanti se sone nahi dega!😆.Kesar aur Gulaal ka tho patha nahi lekin haan Kesar aur letters ka janmo janmon ka naata hai😆 now story has become more interesting! i want knw if gullu was really married to vasant or not. coz looking at halat of kesu i feel he would have jumped in mandap and thrown vasant away before he could marry her😆ha ha ha...very true and well now you know ki shaadi hui ya nahi😳

now i will read next chapi

Originally posted by: MR21

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Mini..Ramya🤗first of all sorry for being late in giving the comments...this might be the case for the next 2 months or so...Ramya,no worries re.busy at work I can understand😊

Coming to the chapter...wow u started it with hostel scene where kesar reading the letters written by gulaal...gulaal letter letting him knew abt all the feelings of the family members but not hers...his reaction after reading the letter throwing it n making room resemble like a hell is so common as his room mate even confirmed it...n ofcourse after cleaning the room he has to go back n take the letter to keep it with him...bechara roommate na😆

So the engagement is done n he is trying his level best to ignore her in front of others but still noticing her each n every action...this is so kesar na...kesar is shy why with girls 😳awww I know hope you liked it....but this is gulaal...she can any ways patao him n she did it atlast...so she is all free bird in front of kesar...else she is the goody goody girl to family n vasant...he know how to make her happy with gifts n also they r sharing a very good relationship...he is so helpless when it come to his love for her...her treating him like a kid is the thing he never liked and also he never gave their relation a name How can he when with what he feels for her😭...he never call her as bhabhi...omg...how would have kesar felt seeing gulaal n vasant like this...but that is the truth now...how many days will he run from this...yep can't run forever and now the time has come to face the facts.

Coming to his out burst in front of others...he always have a bad timing na...even this...first of all the topic of bhabhi when he is so restless seeing gulaal n vasant together n then all the teasing n gulaal asking him why cant he call her bhabhi n her complaint to vasant n vasant reaction to it and ofcourse the last arrow when gulaal started treating him like a child...this is it..how can he handle all these things all of a sudden...so his outburst has come in front of others...which lead vasant to think that kesar hates gulaal.well hope you have the next chapter by now cause you will come to know more about Vasant's feelings...for kesar this hatred is far better reason to be away from gulaal than to let every one know that he loves her...

Gulaal point of vew...this is the typical gulaal...who will not show n reveal her true feelings to kesar...who will always keep them deep inside her heart...that tear show how she needs him...ohh kesar's looks n eyes are always a mistery to her...mission patao kesar n jhansi ki rani kabhi nahi haaregi when it comes to kesar...she is happy with his friendship n she can still stay the same gulaal with him...even she know that she is not the same girl in front of vasant n family..he has become her best friend...kesar is always like this na...he has always showed that maturity in him which is beyond his age...kesar playing guitar only for her 😳...n her reaction with tears in her eyes n a hug...so she treats him like a kid only when she want to get through her feelings n emotions yep she sometimes gets confused and to overcome that she starts treating him like a kid....kesar has made his place in her heart but she cant accept it...its very clear when she thinks abt what kesar will think seeing her in vasants arms...so she again starts him to treat him like a kid in front of others..but this time it back fired...even she dont want kesar to call her bhabhi 😳...she dont want vasant to talk between her n kesar but his words where a shock to her...she cant accept them as his eyes always said his true feelings for her...gulaal almost started being a galool in this chapter...looks like this will continue...well let's see.

Wow Mini...this is amazing...the way u are giving the feelings n story from both kesar n gulaal is too good...no talli n kunal..thats great...looking forward to see a full on triangle love story between kesar, gulaal n vasant...do update soon yaar...ya there will be no Talli or Kunnu.This will be only about Kesar,Gulaal and to a certain extent Vasant.Hope you will like the next update.

Originally posted by: enchanted23

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So you start off with Kesar hostel and letter 'ab main kya bolu bolti bandh kardi meri meri theen kamjori ek saath'arre yeh maine kya kiya.Aditi ki bolti bandh kar di phir vishesh tippani ka kaya hoga.I hope it's just temporary.oh well it is😆Thank you so much yaar.I am happy you liked it😳I just love the description of crumpled letter and then the ruckus that he creates in the room which seems to be norm and is taken as such by his roommate'ahh Kesar'.I know Kesar😳

So the love at first sight lover boy cannot give up his feeling merely because she is engaged to his brother na,so what uska haq to tabhi establish ho gaya tha jab he saw her for the first time na'.and that intense look and following her every move and gesture typical Kesar, so encompassed in his own world, unmindful of surroundings'..awww beautifully put😳

Kesar had to relent if Gulaal is determined of getting her way no one can stop her,not even me first Kesuda'and once he throws in the towel he will go out of his way to make her happy by finding out everything and anything that pleases her and will also jalofy all her nakhras and anger as he starts that journey towards being her Kesar'.yep Gulaal can be very persuasive and enchanting when she wants to be and Kesar never had a chance did he?woh tho pehle se hi fida hai and Gulaal ke determination ke aage uski kahaan chalne waali thi.oh ya he really did gift her a lot of things na.Even in the show har time gift hi karta rehta and in return Gullu ne kabhi koi gift diya kya?...*scratching my head trying to remember*

So Kesuda is surprised at her multi dimensional personality a complete on the guard Gulaal who will put on shy and sweet act to please his family members especially Vasant,Kesuda you have seen nothing yet, she will also deny and shun her feelings, desires and wants and will sacrifice yours too in the name of family togetherness'dekhte jao'.awww Aditi just for you,I will try not to make her too much of a Galool😊

Ahh'he walked on to some intimate moment and Kesar being Kesar will definitely not take kindly to this even if he happen to accept the relationship between his Gulaal and Vasant bhai'ahh she has come that close to him that I have to put her as his Gulaal and not his borther here sigh! oh I loved how you put this in words.Thank you so much.and after that whatever occurred was definitely unstoppable, Kesar unleashed '..Bringing only tornadoes in his wake''.so you liked it.I was worried ki kahin thoda unconvincing tho nahi tha😕but now I am relieved.

Gulaal being galool will definitely deny and shun her feelings thinking as she would all "paap" how could she even think of someone who makes her happy, who she can be herself with, who will do anything for that smile, who would always know her needs and likes when her family have already chosen her prince charming'..why will she try and understand pain of those eyes that speak volumes to her, why should she not turn away from that intense glare which only attracts her magnetically, why she shouldn't trade the path that's chosen for her, why should she listen to her heart that pulling her away from her chosen prince and pushing toward this guitar playing, sensitive, shy and reserved boy on whose music she loses all her senses and becomes completely oblivious and devour of her surrounding'why'.once again too good.now what can I say.Hope you will be able to warm upto her in the upcoming chapters.but one thing I can definitely assure you she will not be using the word "Paap" here😉and yaar in her defense let me just say...what can she do?I mean she is engaged to Vasant and now she is having all these feelings for his younger brother.She is young, just 19 so naturally she is confused and sometimes overwhelmed.Hope I will be able to express her feelings properly in the upcoming chapters😳

Mini🤗-lovely chappi yaar 👏 defines their individual characteristics so well...I am looking forward to this triangle unfolding...amazing start...please update soon😍thank you so much