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@Katyayani_devi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: minizz
Savz,you are too cute yaar🤗BTW forgot to mention I loved the "Piyu Mhaari" whenever this page opens.It feels heavenly when I hear that music.Thanks for that.ab jaldi se update kar ok😃

u r welcome mini 😃 i will try

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@Katyayani_devi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sauris
Savz quite a interesting start,ab jaldi se update kar

thanks sauris 😃

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@Katyayani_devi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Guyz this is OS on gulaal and kesar. bear with the mistakes n let me know ur views so that i can improve on writing thanks in advance 😊

Kesar! Ah! gulaal squealed as he picked her up from the bed, carrying her like a baby.

Kesar: 'no! you have to eat breakfast with us. no more sleeping in." he demanded, heading towards the staircase.

Gulaal: "please don't drop me,she looked up at him with puppy eyes,kesar i will kill you if you do.

A light chuckle escapes from kesar's mouth and squeezes gulaal in his arms gently.

Good morning, says rahul when he sees gulaal and kesar approach the kitchen table.

"you can let her go now." rahul opens kesar's arms, wanting a morning hug from his friend.but

gulaal didn't want to leave kesar's arms, she liked the way her head comfortably layed against his

chest with his scent roaming around her, and his defined muscles against her skin. she look

over kitchen table where indy & chaz(her best friends) are having a little food fight & just grinning

with their dimples showing.

Gulaal: i was living with the team what a perfect life it is! she closed her eyes slowly with her head

still pressed against kesar's chest,couldn't imagine anything better than this.

she suddenly open her eyes by her mom calling in the distance,her desk and computer infront

of her with her IF story on the screen.Just another daydream.

Edited by Savz_uniqueblis - 13 years ago

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minizz

@minizz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

oho,the whole thing was a daydream😆bechari Gullu or should I say bechaari Savz😆

well why don't you continue to build upon your last OS.That was an interesting start.would love to know more about that story😊

Edited by minizz - 13 years ago

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MR21

@MR21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Savz,,,sab kuch daydream tha 😆...gulaal toh bas kesar ke dreams dekhrahi hai...

wow...loved this dream...

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Sree

@Katyayani_devi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: minizz
oho,the whole thing was a daydream😆bechari Gullu or should I say bechaari Savz😆

well why don't you continue to build upon your last OS.That was an interesting start.would love to know more about that story😊

thanks mini bechari gullutha 😆 ya i will try

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Sree

@Katyayani_devi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: MR21
Savz,,,sab kuch daydream tha 😆...gulaal toh bas kesar ke dreams dekhrahi hai...
wow...loved this dream...

ya ramya it's gulaal's day dream, me too loved this dream 😉😆

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Savz, 🤗the first one was really beautiful, a very different and layered one which had the potential of becoming a long FF, I loved the Kesar there, a teasing, fun loving (with Gulaal), but yet so caring towards her even Gulaal knows it at her heart, but denies to accept it or more over her prejudiced mind had overpowered her, on why she kept silence when he asked her, why she not trusting him...and escapes from there at the very same instant she felt, will she start melting before him and ran away leaving poor Kesar all confused,..the ice eating Kesar though remind me the "Oond ke muh pe jeera" dialogue of him from the show...It was a great start and still a long way to go...I so wanted to read the rest too...

...

The second one was so cute, I was getting a feeling of it being a dream from the start, because the scenes were so, though enjoyed a lot ..Ah Gullu ki dream😍 this too felt like a parallel from the show, where in the second last episode, Gulaal kept dreaming of she and Kesar chatting at the balcony of badi haveli and that too a day dream, while she used to sleep till late in the morning on those days...

Edited by alanta - 13 years ago

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@Katyayani_devi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: alanta
Savz, 🤗the first one was really beautiful, a very different and layered one which had the potential of becoming a long FF, I loved the Kesar there, a teasing, fun loving (with Gulaal), but yet so caring towards her even Gulaal knows it at her heart, but denies to accept it or more over her prejudiced mind had overpowered her, on why she kept silence when he asked her, why she not trusting him...and escapes from there at the very same instant she felt, will she start melting before him and ran away leaving poor Kesar all confused,..the ice eating Kesar though remind me the "Oond ke muh pe jeera" dialogue of him from the show...It was a great start and still a long way to go...I so wanted to read the rest too...
...
The second one was so cute, I was getting a feeling of it being a dream from the start, because the scenes were so, though enjoyed a lot ..Ah Gullu ki dream😍 this too felt like a parallel from the show, where in the second last episode, Gulaal kept dreaming of she and Kesar chatting at the balcony of badi haveli and that too a day dream, while she used to sleep till late in the morning on those days...

alanta 🤗 thanks dear for liking the both 😃