FF:Pyaar Ka Rishta Final Chapter updtd Pg 67 - Page 39

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Posted: 13 years ago

Mini...🤗

Chapter 50 part A

Mini I wanted to kill you for hanging the chappi before their most awaited reunion..Ah Bechara Kesu kitna tadping to meet Gullu and vice versa ..Hai hai Gullu must be looking like an angel na..and Kesu use dekhna band kar..ankhein bahar aa jaying...I must admit I lubb reva..She is really a sweet sister...Lubbly update...

Chapter 50 -part A...

I am tamatarmukhi after after reading that..☺️Awww Judai k baad milan..😳How sweet is that scene..Kesu k itne paas rahegi gullu to hosh kho baithega Awww sho shweet par ye kaya judai aayegi ans sudhi ..i hate her use bhaga ...😭ab kya hoga kesu ka..😭

mini pls update really soon pls..warna my nails nahi rahenge ..i am chewing them😭But I won't give you jhappi becoz u stopped the KG pappi😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: enchanted23

Chalo Tune muje pehle hi warn kiya tha isliye gussa to nahi ho sakti per woh kiss ho jane dena chahiye tha yaar bechar Kesu'.😉

So they start off as if miling after ages🤔'Ok Ok I know hota hai😆haan,haan mazaak udaale.main ro rahi hoon😭😆'and both can't wait to get married arrey Kesar tu apni chotti behen ke bare meine to soch😲"choti behen woh kaun oh Rewa acha" -bechare Kesar ki Gullu ke saamne yehi thought process hothi hai'..Ahh so Sudhi ko drama karne ke liye aur ek week mil gaya'yaar I am not liking this'I can understand that she had to be at her parents for a while but why does he need to go as well'I hope tu Kesu ko chappi se gayab na kare'aisa to bilkul nahi chalega😡'aur sidy like Talli, Dushy ko ek para se jyada bardaast karna muskil hai, chahe who kitne hi acchae kyu na ho duly noted.I will not give them more than one or maybe two paragraphs.ok.sorry for the drama.but I will try to resolve it soon'.and kya dramatic entry mari Reva ne'I never thought I will ever get annoyed with her in your FF'Pooba ko bhi abhi aana tha'..😡nahi nahi aise math bol rewa cute hai😳

Yeah Woman1 aur 2 ko kaha se pakad ke layi hai'bahut purane jamane ki lagti hai aaj kal kaun ye sab dekhta hai yaar, arre hain yaar .I have heard such talk.these women have nothing else to do but gossip about others.sudhi ko to mauke ka fayda uthana hi tha so she did what she is best at'Jalte pe iron marna'Per Gullu ki buddhi kyu bhrasht ho gayi hai'I am already anxious about Kesu leaving and now she is going to galool mode'satyanash'Jaldi se update karke sab thik kar yaar'per maine hi kaha na FF lamba chalna chahiye to shayad ye thik hi hai'see I am full of paradox too'don't worry bas thode aur chapters then sab finish...khallas.so drama jaldi khatam ho jaayega😆Gullu try tho karegi but dekhte hain ki Galool ban paayegi yaa nahi😕

Seriously mini, Lovely update🤗 and please, please don't end this soon'😊


Aditi,thanks for the lovely comments yaar.I missed them.hope all your laptop problems have been solved😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Mini...🤗

Chapter 50 part A

Mini I wanted to kill you for hanging the chappi before their most awaited reunion..please mujhe abhi aur jeena hai😆 Ah Bechara Kesu kitna tadping to meet Gullu and vice versa ..Hai hai Gullu must be looking like an angel na..and Kesu use dekhna band kar..ankhein bahar aa jaying...I must admit I lubb reva..She is really a sweet sister...Lubbly update...Thank you Piu🤗

Chapter 50 -part A...

I am tamatarmukhi after after reading that..☺️Awww Judai k baad milan..😳How sweet is that scene..Kesu k itne paas rahegi gullu to hosh kho baithega Awww sho shweet par ye kaya judai aayegi ans sudhi ..i hate her use bhaga ...😭ab kya hoga kesu ka..😭Kesu,bechara thoda tadapna padega😭

mini pls update really soon pls..warna my nails nahi rahenge ..i am chewing them😭But I won't give you jhappi becoz u stopped the KG pappi😆will try to update soon.


Piu,thank you so much yaar for the lovely comments😊so happy that you liked it.nails ko bacha ke rakho yaar .awww yeh kya, no jhappi😭 lekin pappi tho pehle ke chapters mein thi na.isliye aisa kiya😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt mini. i like how u play snake n ladder in ur story means some real n some light moments. nice going correct me if i was wrong.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Mini,I brought office ka laptop to write comments aur upar se itne saare damakedar ideas(page 50 pe) bhi diye... ff continue rakhne ke liye..but you are still hell bent on ending this ff so unfair yaar...Pls continue kar ya naya wala leke aana..😳Pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi i have read uptill 17 .kitna homewk diya hai minni tumne mujhe i hv 2 read till 22 nw . But jitna bhi padha hai i lubed it and i like ur style of narrating u alway explain both sides of main character . Eg if ur chappi end in kg scene were k enter gul room u will start explaining his thought before entry and u will start ur nxt chappi wid recap of last scene wid explaination of gul thought. I think ur writing has unique style which i luve Baki pt after reading ur remaing chappi. Bye
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: enchanted23

Sorry Mini kal comment linking laptop problems phone se lamba comment nahi likh sakti 😭

edit:Aditi,maine is comment ko kaise miss kiya.sorry yaar😭

Hey Mini, thanks for a lovely update. I just read that you want to complete in 5/6 chappies Kyu yaar, phir hum kya karege, I don't think you should end it so soon'Agar idea chahiye to maine do???Like Vasant can come back from dead🤣''Sudha gets sudden heart attack and is in hospital fighting for her life😆'.Dushyant and Talli running away and PB showing her true vamp colours'OK mojries rahne do'maine to sirf ideas de rahi thi'But you can't end it yaar w/o promising a new one'😊 kitne ache ideas hain😆actually Aditi I was planning to finish it in 15 chapters par patha nahi kaise ithna kich gaya.ab main aur twists laaungi sab mujh par mojris nahi sade hue ande aur tamatar phenkenge agar koi reader baaki bacha tho😆If I don't end this soon, the person who insists on calling himself my better half will finally go mad cause I test out all my ideas and twists on him and sometimes I swear he is holding onto a very thin thread of patience without loosing his cool.bechara😆

Now to chappi'I like the pining from both the sides and that cover up when Kesu is talking to Revaji was good, also the interruptions before they reach each other adding to their anxiety 'well well'.Both are making it terribly obvious for public na'.Reva is sweetheart and amazing sister I guess the bond both share after Vasant's death has lot to do with this, things they would do to make each other happy and here's another idea'Rev aka bhi koi chakkar ho..aur Kesu and Gullu supporting her'dekh kitna extend kar sakti hai tu agar chahe to'I to really want you too'😊

Sudhi that bin buddi ki to'Tu kuch kar uska'she is not good for KG and Talli too'I am looking forward to what happens behind the close doors with Reva as chokidar😳'.Thanks for quick update'🤗


Aditi,I am sorry for such a late reply.completely missed this.thanks for the kind words yaar.It means so much to me.love the constant support.ye le meri taraf se ek badi si jhappi🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Savz_uniqueblis

nice updt mini. i like how u play snake n ladder in ur story means some real n some light moments. nice going correct me if i was wrong.😊


Savz,thank you so much. snakes and ladder😆well that is true.Hope you enjoyed it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kesarmania

Hi i have read uptill 17 .kitna homewk diya hai minni tumne mujhe i hv 2 read till 22 nw . But jitna bhi padha hai i lubed it and i like ur style of narrating u alway explain both sides of main character . Eg if ur chappi end in kg scene were k enter gul room u will start explaining his thought before entry and u will start ur nxt chappi wid recap of last scene wid explaination of gul thought. I think ur writing has unique style which i luve Baki pt after reading ur remaing chappi. Bye


Shraddha(hope I didn't get your name wrong)you went missing from the forum for some days.what happened?Thanks for the lovely comments and awww I am so happy that you are liking it.
my face is all☺️ hopefully you will like the remaining chapters too though by the end of the latest chapter I have a feeling you will be more likely to hit me😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

arre yeh kya,why are you crying?awww don't cry Inayah sab theek ho jaayega😆bas thoda sa heart burn phir happy ending ho jaayega😃

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