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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Geeshani

Kiran's FF...😲..Yeh kab hua??? 😭

Where was I?? 😭


Geeshu..🤗I'm doonding here n there u..😕missed u so much...😭..love u yaar...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
Kiranwa...loved ur chappis yaar...😳
Comment nahi kar paayi...😭
u know i loved them...😳
mujhe ur gullu keliye bohot bura lag raha hai...she's sweetwa...😳n ur kesuda khadooswa..😲
Usne gullu ko hurt kiya...😭
Me waiting for next chappi...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Kiran want to thank you first of all for writing the FF.

I liked your FF which starts from repeating dreams which include chase by people and angels's eyes saving her from falling off cliff. You had set up the base for the storyline. Kesar keeps her hunting in her dreams. That actually happens in true life. 👏 Girl got sweat from top to toe and drinks water. You did not made her walk in the sleep. 😆

Woman had poor sleep and poor day to follow and making her day even worse by near accident by Kesar himself leaving rude remarks for making his car muddy. Kesar will be remain brattish. 😆 I cannot imagine how will you bring them together and most of all them in good terms. 😕

Dhani is only one who is talking sense while Gulaal is lost in her world and angel's eyes. 😳

only pleasant moment was to her chunar blown over his head and holding hands accidently. 😭

I want to know what is waiting for her at home. but does not sound good to me at all.


Waiting for your next update. 😍



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Posted: 14 years ago
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kiranwa loved both the chappis 👏loved then say u introduced kesu😳and gul kes milap was superb😃waiting for ur next update😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Arre yaar..mein 1st unreserve karu usse pehle 2 and 3rd updationg aa bhi gaya??? chal me again res...jaldi aaungi😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

(Note: The conversation by Gulaal vl be highlighted in Red from today onwards 😊)
kyun..ye facility kyun..😆
Why???

Why she couldnt forget those eyes? Why they keep coming in her dreams?? Was it just a dream? or Was their possibility of something else???

Why???ya Y
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" Becoz nothing is impossible !!! " exclaimed the young man.

The voice on the other side said something, n he started to laugh,

" Hahahahaha !!! I dont think so that u even know Kesar !!! Aisa konsa kaam hai which Kesar cant do? Kesar ka toh naam sun k hi saaray kaam ho jaatay hen n u say its impossible ? !! "oye..ye khudh ko praise kar raha hai..😕
His voice now reflected his level of anger, he continued while walking back and forth,

" Do din !! do din hain tumharay paas ! agar do din men mera kaam nahi hua aur meri company ko koi nuqsaan hua toh u urself vl be responsible for whatever happens to u !! "

And he cuts the call, while still speaking to himself,

" Idiots !! they say its impossible, nothing is impossible in this world !!"

and shouts:

" Driver !!! thats the limit ! aur kitna time lagega? Now such days have come when i vl have to stand here like this?? Salary kis baat ki letay ho tum? U know that i want perfection in everything ! Jao ja k foran dusri car arrange karo !! "oye..kudh nahin ja saktha kya..😆

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All this was happening near the bus stop where gulaal was standing and waiting for the bus . She was not in a good mood. She wanted her presentation to be the best but it was just average. She was really upset while thinking about the promotion thing,
" Hamesha aisay hi hota hai meray saath, jo cheez bhi chahun nahi milti, jab bhi kuch achay se karna chahti hun, garbar hi ho jati hai ! kya zaroorat thi mujhe conference room men us sapnay ko yaad karne ki ! Aik toh waisay hi kaam dhang se nahi hotay n mujhe woh do ankhen yaad agayen ! Ufff ! Zara mil jaye mujhe yeh ankhon waala, ise 24 hours sun glasses pehna k bithaoon gi huh ! Oho yeh kya sochne lagi main"🤣thu kesu ko sun glasses lagayegi...😆

n this was when she heard him, Gulaal turned around to see who the person was as he was talking very loudly, she exclaimed:

" Bas isi ki kami thi zindagi men, aaj woh bhi poori ho gayi ! Ab yeh pagal kon hai ??! "

She looked at that young man, his back was towards her so gulaal was only able to listen to his voice. First he laughed n then started yelling on the person present on the other side of the phone.
G: " Oh yeh kaisay road pe zor zor se chilla raha hai, psycho lagta hai bechara "
n she heard him say the name... "Kesar"tumne mujhse kahan ki woh kesu nahin ahi..
G:" Kesar? Lo yeh toh kisi kesar k peechay para hai... oh... kitni dhamki de raha hai kesar k naam per, us bechari kesudi ko toh pata bhi nahi hoga k us k naam pe yahan yeh sab ho raha hai "🤣oye..thu kesudi ko kithna love karthi hai..re yahan bhi..😆
That was the second ! That boy slightly turned towards her n now his face was half visible to her. It was this point when gulaal's thought process froze ! It seemed like the whole world had stopped n it was only him whom she could see ...

She didnt know him but it felt like she has always known him, it felt like she has known him from the time of her existance. She felt so much attracted towards him...haan..kaun kumb mela mein bichda hua..majnoo..😉😛

Rang, Badal, Hawa, Khushbu, Rishtay, us waqt sab Gulaal ko aik hi rang men rang rahay thay... lekin... woh konsa rang tha???

yeh usay bhi nahi pata tha !!

Time seemed to stop until that boy started yelling on his driver. Gulaal snapped out of her trance and her thought process again began...
G: " Yeh mujhe kya ho gaya tha, pata nahi kon hai yeh... lekin jane kyun aisa lagta hai jaisay main ise janti hun... ya shayad jaanti hi sirf isay hun..."haan..soch soch..u saw him in kesariya field.😉
" Gulaal !!! " called a voice from behind... she quickly turned around to see who it was... Dhani was standing there n saying:

Dhani (D): " Kab se awaaz de rahi hun tujhe, kaan kya ghar pe chor k aayi hai tu? n yeh bata ab tak toh teri aankhen bilkul theek theen, ab kya unhen bhi mobile k sath bag men rakh diya hai? "🤣good one..re...😆

" Aankhen... " exclaimed gulaal very slowly to herself...

n on this word, she suddenly remembered some thing n quickly turned her neck to see him ... but got very disappointed as his car had arrived n he had already taken his place inside...

Gulaal felt that something was missing... something was going away from her...
she said to herself:

" Pata nahi kyun... aisa laga k... "kya laga..😛

Next Chapter to come up 😊: Chapter 3 (The Perfectionist)


hey..dear..amazing chapie..tune sach mein kesu ko introduce karvaya...2nd chappiee..mein muaahhh..loved it...😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent



" Pata nahi kyun... aisa laga k... "

D: " Kya laga tujhe? k bus driver tere paas aa k kahe ga aayiye madam, yeh bus aur driver dono aap ki seva men haazir hen, batayiye kahan jana hai aapne? !! "

Dhani gave her a slightly angry but friendly look, n continued,

" Tujhe pata bhi hai do buses nikal chuki hen abhi tak, kya tu kisi private plane ka wait kar rahi thi? kab ki office se nikli hai tu n yahan aa k khari ho gayi, acha hua maine tujhe daikh liya n teri bina ankhen band kiye sone waali neend se jaga diya warna shayad kal tak tu ne yahin kharay rehna tha... hadh karti hai tu gulaal, aakhir kis ka intezaar hai tujhe...? "haan..kiska,..hai..😲

G: " Pata nahi, shayad... "

D: " Kya? kya bol rahi hai ab? phir khud se baat karne lagi, aik toh yeh larki bhi na, is k saamne kharay ho k bolo toh lagta hai deewaar se baaten kar rahay hen n tu apni hi dunya men gum rehti hai, chaliye rajkumari ji ghar jane ka waqt ho gaya hai, ap k ghar men toh ab tak world war 3 shuru bhi ho gayi hogi "gharwale soldiers hai kya..😲😲

G: " Oh, mujhe toh jaldi ghar puhanchna tha, dhani tu theek hi kehti hai, main pata nahi konsi duniya men gum ho jaati hun, lagta hai jese usi khayali dunya men koi hai..."

D: " aray bas kar meri maa, woh dekh teri bus arahi hai, jaldi rok use"

Gulaal saw her bus was coming, she wanted to talk to dhani n told her that what had happened, but she had to give a halt to her thoughts as time was running short and she should have reached home uptill now.
She got in the bus, took a place near the window n closed her eyes... again those two eyes came in her thoughts, at once she opened her eyes,

" Ufff phir wohi aankhen !!! main tang aagayi hun is sab se... aakhir kab tak yehi hota rahega, lagta hai jese yeh ankhen zindagi bhar mera peecha karen gen !!! "ya..pichle janam..mein woh eyes donate kiya hoga isne..isiliye peecha kar rahe hai..😆

She came out of her thoughts as the driver pulled the brakes... bus had reached her stop. She got out of it n putting every thought aside, started to cross the road, the whole had been not good for her n she had not eaten properly also so for just a second, her mind became blank n the next moment she heard a shout n screeching sound of a car whose driver tried his best to pull the brakes on time...
"Aray dekh kar !!" was the shout
The driver had managed to stop the car on time.
Gulaal stood there on the middle of the road, frozen... n her eyes widened, with her whole body shivering...Arre..din mein dreamboy ko doondne ka nateeza...😆
A hand came towards her n turned her around in anger,

" Dikhayi nahi deta hai kya tumhen?! "

and that very moment, a part of her dupatta flew a little bit due to the wind n covered that person's face completely👏👏👏👏👏👏what a placing dear..my chotti kiran..

Gulaal got extremely shocked n at once tried to pull the dupatta back from his face, n at the very same moment, that person also tried to do the same... the difference was just of a few seconds, gulaal's hand reached the dupatta first n so instead of getting hold of the dupatta, he got hold of her hand !!oye..hand pakda..woh bhi first face to face meet mein..😛😉
The time stopped there !!! The world stopped !!! gulaal stood there with her hand in the stranger's hand, but it was not the thing that a stranger was holding her hand, it was something else which made gulaal shocked !! This was the same touch, the same touch of the hands which she had always felt in her dreams... yes !!! it was the same hand !!!akhir wohi ankhon ka malik hai na..😆
Many people had gathered around uptill now n unconsciously she was still holding his hand now, he shook that hand of hers n waved the other one in front of her eyes...
" Hey madam ! ab kya zindagi bhar aisay hi hath pakar k rakhogi? "Aha..first meet mein dhansoo dialogue..😍
Gulaal became so much embarassed n quickly left his hand, the people around started asking her that is she alright? The boy replied to them in a slightly angry n naughty tone,
" Agar in ko chot lagi hoti toh phir bhi theek tha lekin look she is all fine n look at my car, kya halat hogayi hai is ki, road pe jo yeh rain ka jama hua ganda paani hai, sab meri car pe lag gaya hai... Chiii !!! "U love CHII too..🤣
then he turned towards gulaal n exclaimed in an angry tone,
" Aur tum ! agar tumhen marne ka inta hi shok hai toh bhi meri hi car k saamne kyun ayeen ! Dekho next time aisa irada ho toh plz yeh dekh k road pe koodna k wahan meri car door door tak na ho !! Mujhe bilkul pasand nahi k meri cheezen zara bhi kharab hon !! "h rude..😡
Gulaal was shocked ! How could any one say like this? itna rude behavior? n woh bhi jab a person has nearly escaped an accident 😲 ! Suddenly she felt burning sensation in her eyes n the view became some what blurred... she was crying...Arre..ek laffa dethi.😡.y crying..
The boy didn stop after saying those words n he sat in his car n drove away, seeing that she is fine the people also started to get busy in their own works... she slowly started walking again n gathered all her courage to reach home... the day had been a complete disaster for her but she didn knew what more waited for her at home...haan..parivarwale soldiers the na.😕.
Next Chapter to come up 😊 : Chapter 4 (Destiny's Plight)



Amazing chappie..kiran..it is catche..n captivating...😃Loved loved loevd d chappie..d first mee.n d almost jhagda..but gullu have lots of probs..hope she has time to enjoy other things too..but liked d sense of humor of d girls..😆n waiting for d next chappie...😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Where is the new chappi Kiran

Chappi jaldi la na pls

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice post dear 👍🏼
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Note:
Sorry friends I forgot to mention that in the previous chapter, Gulaal was not able to see kesar's eyes as he was wearing sun glasses 🤣




Mehra House (Gulaal's home):

" Aa gayi tu ! Shukar hai tujhe ghar aane aur hamen yaad karne ki fursat toh mili !"
Gulaal (G): "Jamna Kaki, wo sorry mujhe aane men thori dair ho gayi"
JK: " Lo aur suno ! thori dair hui hai inhen, yahan aasmaan pe taaray chamakne lagay hen aur inhen yeh thori dair lagti hai ! ab maharani ji sorry bol k chali jana chahti hen !"
Giga kaka: " Aik minute ruk ja jamna ! Pehle us se who toh puchne do jis k liye hum kabse us ka intezaar kar rahay hen... Han toh gulaal beta kaisa raha aaj ka din? Tere promotion ka kya hua? Dekh tu jaanti hai na k jab tak tujhe promotion nahi milta, tu loan k liye apply nahi kar sakti aur jab tak loan nahi milay ga hum talli k dahej ka intejaam kaise karen ge? "
G: "Ji Giga kaka main jaanti hoon aur poori koshish..."
JK: " Koshish nahi gulaal, hamen kuch nahi sunna, dekh gulaal ab bohot ho gaya, agar tujhe yahan rehna hai toh tujhe yeh karna hi hoga ! tu ne teen mahiney pehle kaha tha k jald hi tera promotion ho jayega lekin ab tak toh kuch nahi hua aur hum talli ko ghar bitha k toh nahi rakh sakte na, aik toh tere maa baap ji ki taraf se bhi tujhe kuch nahi mila hai, hum kab tak sambhalen tujhe, akhir hamari apni bhi beti hai, bas ab yeh sun le, agar tujhe yahan rehna hai toh loan k liye apply kar warna apna intejaam kahin aur kar le ! "
"Talli, tub hi kaan khol kar sun le, agar gulaal ne who nahi kiya jo hum usay keh rahay hen, toh usay is ghar se jana hoga "
Talli: " Per Ba... "
JK: " Bas talli ab phir se is ki taraf daari karne mat lag jaana, tujhe is ki kitni chinta rehti hai aur aik yeh hai k teri kabhi chinta nahi ki, foran jaa apne kamre men "
After listening all this, Gulaal guietly headed towards her room, Talli was very sad for her but she also didn notice those tears which fell from gulaal's eyes, travelled through her cheeks n fell on the floor.

The Past:


This was a daily routine, n JK n Giga kaka had always been like this. When her parents, Revji Bhai n Poonam Ba were alive, they used to shower their fake love on her in front of them n behind them, they always hated her n treated her badly. Revji Bhai n Poonam ba vr blessed with two children, yogesh n gulaal, while JK n Giga kaka had one daughter, talli.

Gulaal never told about her kaka n kaki's behavior to her parents as she didnt want to create rift between two brothers. From a very young age, she was a very mature person n really hated fights n all that. But Revji Bha n Poonam ba vr her parents, they realized JK n Giga kaka's fake love n finally confronted them. On being confronted, JK n Giga kaka forgot every relation n openly declared that they hated them so much. Still, some where she was tension free as her parents vr always there for her n to support her, but she didn't know that her happiness was not there to stay...

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Present:


Gulaal opened the door of her room, n went inside. She had no strength left in her now, the pain which she had to bear every day was out of her control now, she was not able to bear it any more, her confidence n her strength vr completely shaken. She completely broke down n sat on the floor in a way of falling down.

The past started to flash before her eyes like a filmstrip ...

Past:

It was ten years before... Gulaal was a young girl of 17 at that time. Till then everything was fine becoz she had her parents with her, although they vr having problems with JK n giga kaka after the confrontation but still she was happy with her parents n her brother.
They all used to live in a village called Rasipur. From some days gulaal was continuously observing that her baap ji's forehead always had some wrinkles on it. It was very clear that he was very worried about some thing. After some days, when she found poonam ba also behaving awkwardly, she decided to ask them the reason behind their worry. As she was young at that time n her parents loved her so much, they didn't tell her anything n behaved as if everything was absolutely fine.
One day, she was outside with her friends. She was so happy, again she had defeated her friends in Pagathia. She reached home being all happy n her face glowing with the pride of victory, but, the news which waited for her, took away all her happiness ! She was forced to come down to earth from cloud nine !
Revji bhai had met with an accident n it was so severe that their was no chance for his live. Yogesh was also not at home but coincidently returned the same time as her. They both rushed towards the hospital n reaching there they got the news that their baap ji was in I.C.U n in a very critical condition, there was no chance of his survival. Poonam ba was also not in a good condition after hearing this news n finding her children in the hospital, she completely broke down n cried very badly. Just when gulaal was consoling her mother, doctors came out of the I.C.U n gave them the bad news of revji bhai's death !
Gulaal n yogesh vr completely shattered, the days after this incident, without their father with them vr very difficult. Yogesh used to become angry at very little things, he was close to his father n was not able to bear this pain, Gulaal was also close to revji bhai n she was more mature than yogesh. Things had started to change n poonam ba n gulaal can easily observe his behavior changing very rapidly, one day they gave them the news that he wanted to go outside the country. They vr so hurt listening to this but yogesh had made up his mind n he left, leaving his sister n mother alone. He had really become so selfish.
Days passed by n poonam ba's health started deteriorating n one day she also left gulaal alone in this world. But before her death, while taking her last breaths, she called gulaal n told her some important things...
" Gula..aall bai...ta mere paa..sss ab jyada waqt nahii rah.aa, main tujhe yogesh k bharosay chor k nahi ja sakti... Ab tujhe majburan giga aur jamna k paas hi rehna hoga, dekh baita jab tu umar k us mor pe ajaye k khud apne pairon pe khari ho toh sab se pehle giga aur jamna se bachana apne ap ko.. yeh pata choray ja rahi hun mai..n tere paas... yeh Talsaagra k sarpanch mota bha ka pata hai... tere baap ji k bohot achay dost thay lekin kafi saalon se hum unse mil nahi paaye.. Tu jitna jald ho sakay un k paas chali jana, who jaroor tera khayal rakhen ge... Yeh tere maa baap ji dono ki akhri icha samajh, bol gulaal, karegi na aisa?"

n gulaal completely shaken by the pain of loosing her mother also agreed to this... n poonam ba breathed her last !!

Present:

Gulaal snapped out of her thoughts, it was 1 a.m.

" Oh mere dimagh men yeh pehle kyun nahi aaya, sab tensions men mere dimagh se yeh baat hi nikal gayi, mujhe mota bha ka pata lagana hoga... itna toh pata kar chuki thi k who ab talsaagra men nahi rehtay per ab un k current address ka toh pata karna hi hoga... kal hi yeh kaam karti hun main, ab toh mujhe is ghar se jana hi hoga ..."

Then she slowly got up n walked towards her cupboard, tears still flowing from her eyes. She tried to find something in the cupboard n then took it out, it was a picture.
Gulaal sighed n exclaimed:
" Vasant !! "
Next chapter to come up 😊: Chapter 5 (Game of Fate)
(Sorry friends for this boring chapter but had to tell the details na 😳)
Edited by kiran_trudecent - 14 years ago

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