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The next morning, nobody came to kesar's room to wake him up. He laid there lazily on his bed, thinking that the door had not been knocked so its not 7 am yet but then after sometime when he looked at the clock, it was 8.30 am. His eyes widened with surprise n he jumped out of the bed. The events of yesterday n gulaal's words, all flashed before his eyes, he felt a bit restless.

"Main kya karoon... main ghusa nahi karna chahta tha per ... kal us inspector ne phir yehi kaha k kuch pata nahi chala, 3 saal se dhoondh raha hun vasant bha k qatil ko, use jisne yeh accident karaya tha lekin kuch pata nahi chal paa raha, akhir who admi gaya toh gaya kahan !"
He quickly got ready for his office n came down for breakfast. Usually at this time, gulaal used to be there at the dining table, serving breakfast to all with rewa n sudha, but today she was not there, she was not even in the kitchen.
"Main poori koshish karoon gi k tere saamne na aoon"
Gulaal's words echoed in his mind but he ignored them n sat at the breakfast table.

MB looked at him angrily and said: "Kyun kesar kahan tha tu kal !!"

PB: "Usay nashta toh... "

MB looked angrily at paan ba which was a sign for her to keep quiet. She didnt say a word.

"Haan toh kya pucha maine tujhse, kahan that u kal? Tujhe sharam nahi aayi itna dair se ghar atay hue !!! gulaal ne tujhe kaha bhi tha k jaldi ghar aana per tu ne toh kisi ki bhi baat na sunne ki qasam khaayi hai na !!"

K: "Wo mota bha, mujhe kuch kaam tha is liye mujhe dair ho gayi"

MB: "Kaam hum sab se jyada jaroori tha na !! tujhe pata hai kal hum sab ne kitna intejaar kiya tera, sab mehmaan aye aur kitna sharminda hue hum un k saamne !! ehsaas hai tujhe? !! who gulaal pura din rasoi men lagi rahi, sab teri pasand ka khana banaya, rewa sudha raman aur bachay sab ne kitni tayari ki per tu !! pata nahi tu kab samjhe ga kesar, kab samjhe ga !!!"

Kesar was feeling really sad now but he knew that where he went yesterday was more important than anything else n then he became so upset that he went to the beach where he n vasant bha used to go together n he spend his whole time there, crying n remembering his brother.

K: " I m sorry mota bha, maine ap log ko bohot pareshan kiya, I m really sorry"

PB: "Acha ab dono bas karo, aur sudha, yeh gulaal kahan reh gayi hai, ja usay bula k laa, subah se nazar hi nahi aayi"

Kesar changed the position in which he was sitting. He felt very sad n a little bit worried too.

Sudha went to call gulaal but came running after a few minutes:

"Ba ! Paan Ba ! who gulaal ko toh bukhaar hai aur us k ser pe chot bhi lagi hui hai"

MB, PB, Rewa, Raman stood up in shock. They asked:

"Kya hua usay, kesay lagi chot"

They all ran towards her room, followed by the kids as well. Raman stayed there at the dining table. Kesar lowered his head as he was feeling really embarrassed. He quietly stood up from the table n moved towards gulaal's room, he stood at the door of her room n looked inside. All were getting really worried for her n sudha was now calling the doctor. Kesar's head fell more in embarrassment n he quietly left the house for office, even without eating the breakfast.

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At the office also, he was not able to concentrate on his work, gulaal's face n her words kept flashing before him, he closed his eyes...

"Khana kha le kesar, tu ne kuch nahi khaya hoga na"

"Kya hogaya hai tujhe kesar, kyun itna ghusa hai tu"

"Kesar baat kya hai? Tu mujhse itna ukhda ukhda kyun rehta hai?"

"Aisa lagta hai k mera aas paas rehna tujhe pasand nahin"

"Maine tujhe apna dost maana hai"

"Tujhe mujhe aur bardaasht nahi karna hoga kesar, main jald hi yahan se chali jaoon gi"

"Nahiii !!" exclaimed kesar n immediately opened his eyes. But the very next second he got so surprised at his reaction,

"What was that, lagta hai I vl go mad, aj tak aisa kabhi nahi hua, gulaal ka chehra toh meri ankhon k saamne se hat hi nahi raha, maine bohot ghalat kiya us k saath, pata nahi mujhe kya ho jata hai, mujhe kisi pe bharosa nahi raha isi liye us se bhi itna bura baartaav kiya maine, who toh sirf mera bhala hi chah rahi thi aur maine use kitni takleef dedi" he hold his head in both his hands when his secretary entered the cabin.

"Sir? Kya baat hai? R u alright?"

K: "haan? Haan main theek hun, tum kyun ayi ho?"

"Sir I have come here to remind u that Mr. Verma must be waiting at the restaurant for us, v have a meeting with them"

"Haan main bhool hi gaya tha, tum chalo n review the files one more time, main ata hun"

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At the restaurant, after the meeting when they vr just about to leave, kesar heard two people talking who vr sitting just near to his table.

Girl: "Uffo tum bhi na, bilkul khayal nahi rakhtay apna, dakho khana bhi theek se nahi khaya"

Boy: "Haan per tum jo ho mera khayal rakhne k liye, sach I m so lucky to have u, who log kitne lucky hote hen jin k liye chinta karne waala koi ho" and they laughed together.

Kesar became so restless, after coming back to office he was again not able to concentrate on his work.

"Mujhe teri chinta hai kesar" gulaal's words echoed in his mind.

"Mujh se ghalti hui kesar k maine socha main teri dost ban sakti hun"

Kesar closed his laptop, n banged the file on the table. Gulaal was doing as she had said, she was not interfering in his life now, the whole day had gone n gulaal didn even call him once to ask whether he had his lunch or not or whether he is ok or not. Kesar terribly felt that something was missing.

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Later on, at night, when he came back home, his eyes continuously searched for her but she was no where. He was worried now as she was not well n he was not able to find enough courage in himself to ask the others about her. Finally he asked rohan about gulaal. He told him that she had been in her room for the whole day, doctor had come n gave her injection n medicines n said that she got the fever as something was bothering her mind, n he had also dressed her wound properly n had said that she vl be fine soon. Kesar became a little relieved when he heard that she vl be fine soon.

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The whole next day also passed like this, gulaal didn't come in front of him. Moreover, he had not even heard her voice. 2 more days passed like this n with every passing day, kesar became more restless. He was getting really frustrated now n his anger was not hidden from the family member's as well.

PB: "Aakhir yeh kesar ko hua kya hai, jab dekho ghusay men hi rehnay laga hai, ab toh is se baat karte bhi dar hi lagta hai"

Rewa: "Ji paan ba, sahi kaha aap ne, pata nahi kya baat ander hi ander kha rahi hai ise, pucho toh ulta ghusa karne lagta hai, aakhir hamen kesay pata chalega k hua kya"

PB: "Rewa, sirf gulaal hai joy eh pata kar sakti hai per mujhe lag raha hai in k beech kuch tanaav hai, kya in ka koi jhagra hua? Pehle bhi kesar ukhda hua rehta tha per aisa toh kabhi nahi hua tha"

Rewa: "Haan paan ba mujhe bhi ajeeb lag raha hai, wahan gulaal ki tabyat kharab hogayi, yahan yeh ghusay men rehta hai, baat bhi nahi ho rahi in ki, pata nahi kya hua"

Kesar's frustration increased more. He had not seen her for 4 days now. He knew very well that she was angry with him. He was also surprised to find a sudden change in his attitude but he really really wanted to apologize to her. He was badly missing her.

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Kesar returned from the office, n entered from the main gate n when he saw in front, it was like his wish was granted. Gulaal was sitting in the lawn n watching rohan n varun play with their football. It had been one week now, n kesar was seeing her after 7 long days. At that very moment, rohan hit the football very hard n it went flying in the direction where kesar was standing n hit his head.

"Oh mera ser" Kesar hold his head n sat there on his knees. The football had hit him badly, the whole world was going round in front of him.

"Kesar !!!" was gulaal's cry n the next moment she came running to him n sat beside him with her one hand on his shoulder n the other on his forehead.

G: "Kesar tu theek toh hai na? bohot zyada lagi kya? Yeh rohan bhi na... dekh tu..." N with that she looked at him, he was already looking at her, their eyes met n she felt a little bit uneasy. She quickly withdrew her hands from his shoulder n forehead, stood up n turned to go. Kesar also got up quickly.

"Gulaal..."
Gulaal stopped. In all these 7 days, she had been very sad. She had decided to leave the house n was finding herself a place to stay. She had been totally avoiding him n tried her level best to not to come in front of him n was succeeding in this, till now. She remembered her promise to vasant that she vl keep kesar happy n vl take care of him n she felt that kesar's happiness was in her going away from the house.

"I m sorry kesar, maine tujhse kaha that ere saamnay nahi aoon gi but seriously mujhe nahi pata tha k tu is waqt ajayega warna main kabhi tere saamne na aati"

n with that she quickly went inside the house.

Kesar felt very sad n went inside the house too. Rohan n varun had already run inside as they had become afraid that they hit their kesar chachu.

Kesar was able to see that gulaal does what she says. She was exactly doing what she had said. The whole evening passed n night arrived but she didn't come in front of him.

MB: "Kya hua rewa, gulaal arahi hai?"

Rewa "Nahi mota bha, who nahi arahen, main ne bohot kaha unhen"

Sudha: "Pata nahi kya hogaya mota bha, ab toh gulaal kamray se nikalti hi nahi, n bas din men thori dair nikalti hai, n sham hote hi wapas chali jaati hai, subah bhi in log k office janay k baad aati hai kitchen men, mujhe toh samajh hi nahi araha hua kya hai"

PB: "Kesar, tere aur gulaal k beech koi jhagra hua kya? Main dekh rahi hoon tum dono aik doosray se baat nahi kartay"

G: "Nahi paan ba, aisa kuch nahi"

Everybody turned around to see gulaal was standing at the entrance of tv lounge.

G: "Paan ba, bas meri tabyat hi theek nahi lag rahi isi liye zyada bahar nahi aati warna hum dono men koi jhagra kyun hoga... Haina kesar??"she asked him while avoiding to meet his eyes.

Kesar was so surprised that he just managed to say: "Haann..."

N after clearing the family's doubts, she again went into her room.

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The next day kesar came home early but with a box of sweets. From the past few days he had been working hard to get a new contract n today he had got it. He wanted to share his happiness with everyone.

MB, PB, Rewa, Sudha, n the kids, everybody wished him, but gulaal was no where to be seen. Raman had not arrived home yet. Kesar was happy to get the contract but still felt that something was missing so he asked varun about gulaal n got to know that she had gone outside as she had an important work. He was so surprised that all these years he had yearned for his family's support n appreciation n now when he was getting these, he was not at all satisfied. His guilt was taking over him. He impatiently waited for gulaal to return. He wanted to know her reaction about this news now as in the past few days, she had been the one to support him always, infact, more than his own family members.

The night had fallen when he came downstairs from his room n heard gulaal's voice from the tv lounge. He quickly moved towards that room.

Next Chapter 😊: Chapter 12 ( Will U be my Friend?? )


Edited by kiran_trudecent - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey friends, chapter 11 is here 😃 i hope u like it 😕 its a bit long i think 😳
Edited by kiran_trudecent - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice chapter Kiran 😃...

Chapter 10...
Loved the confrontation bwn Kesar and Gulaal as it was much needed. Hope Kesar would change his attitude towards Gulaal hereafter...and woluld love to see how they become friends and how their friendship blossoms into love and... am looking forward to this 😃. I really could feel the awkwardness among the family members when the birthday party was on and the birhtday boy for whom the party was arranged, was missing... well written !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by vinolya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ithne jaldi... 😲
res... 😃
res walon sabko thenga... 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
res😉

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Jagda ka asar agle hi din se on affect😉...ohhh kal ka gussa ka reason yeh tha😭...ohh MB gussa on kesar...pB ko bhi chup kar diya MB..aret wifey ka baat toh sunta..waise khana khane ke waqt koi aisa sawaal poochtha hai kya😡??? Kesar how sad...ohh he cries on his birthday remembering vassy😭...
Gulaal ko bhukhaar...achchi baat hai...kesar will feel sad for her...this is good for both of them😉...just loved all the FB parts😊...n also "nahi" bit...loved the talk of girl n boy in restaurant😳...ohh he is missing her already...abey ek din nahi hua hai jagda hokhe...
Kesar frustrated...ek haftha bhi hogaya...he neither seen her nor heard her voice...me liked that football scene...good throw rohan..keep it up👏😉...oye touching and eye locking bhi ho raha hai...and gulaal stands on her word...kesar realised it...achacha hai ab toh dosti karle usske saath...gulaal clarified that everything is ok between them not looking at kesar...
Kesar ko contract mil gaya...he is sharing his happiness with every one...he want to share it with gulaal...me liking it...aage kya hoga???

Wiating for patch-up between them and friendship chappie😳...Kiran upadte sson yaara🤗

Edited by MR21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh wow kya tension buiild kiya hai i m having goosebumps loved it abhi res
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Posted: 14 years ago
arre yaar...me so late...😭
super chappi yaara...😳
kya confrontation tha...n gullu ne kya dialogues maare...👏
kesu W ke W reh gaya...😆
accha hua usne itna kuch sunaya...kesu beta sudhar gaya...😳
bechaari gullu...😭
n me kaise comments de rahi hun...
shhooorrry yaar...me giving chotu comment...
i lubbd the chappi...😳😳😳
Edited by Keithuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
two chapters r good too much drama 😭kitna pyar hai kesar pe uski dard ko dhek kar apna dard bhool gayi😉i think i will drink coffee now😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
alanta u wanted to throw stone at gulaal or u felt that kesar vl throw stone at her? me confused 😳

n res walon jaldi jaldi unres karo 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Keero 🤗 aa hi gayi tu!!!


I love how we're getting confrontation pe confrontation between these two - sadistic much 😆 - but finally Kesar has his first jolt of reality ... too bad Gulaal had to literally shed blood to prove a point, but I hope he's going to start realizing at least that he's really ruining his own life, and that shall pave way for a lot of other revelations eventually.

Most importantly - I wonder how Kesar will absorb, whenever he comes to know, about Gulaal being Vasant's Gulaal.

I hope your internet will behave and we'll get our second chapter for the day Keero 😍 Thanks for updating!

xx


JZee 🤗 yup me here finally 😆

oh u r loving the sad confrontation, thank u so much n thank u so much for liking the update 😃oh yes gulaal had to shed her blood but atleast now kesar is realising his mistakes n his extra bad behavior towards her, oh yes thats an important point that when he vl come to know that gulaal is actually his brother's widow, what vl be his reaction... that vl also come but when, i also have no idea about that 😆 n oh i really want this internet n electricity to behave properly from now on, it has given me so much of heart burns n chapter 11 is here my dear 😃

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