FFKya mujhe pyaar hai part 35 updt pg 143 - Page 66

Originally posted by: scarletthara

Piu !!!!

Hi Minks🤗

Wow, you are in a generous mood these days, double posts.. double dhamaal !!

LOL generous mood nahi..Just a little free nowadays..Also wanna finish this sonn.warna..The whole day I keep on thinking about the story line

So, the good buddies are showing some progress, thankfully ladai jhagda band and ab dosti surru. So, Kesar is feeling the pangs of love, but not realising it for what it is, and bechare ko ab Kunaal ke shaayari yaad aati rehti hai... but very apt lines for his life...

Yes Dosti ho hi gayi.And yes pangs of love is the word.Bechara suffering every minute😆

Gulaal to gulaal hai... she will be the last one to realise or accept I guess... at least both are laying good foundations for friendship, where they can trust each other.. are comfortable to share things like the bed and to be open and honest with each other, without worrying about hurting the other's feelings... isse kehte hai gehri dosti !!!!!

No she is not Gulaal but Galool.🤪Use ki batti itni jaldi nahi jalegi..

And yes they have now began a comfortable dosti..though the ahem ahem moments make her little jittery but they have now found peace and friendship😆

but Kunaal shayar badnaam to bahut ishmaart hai. Kesar ke saath saath apni setting bhi kar raha ai, woh bhi Talli ke saath.. usko kya pata ki woh kisi musibat ko dawat de raha hai.😉

My Chotu Govinda hates me for for Kulli But actually Kunal and Talli are made for each other😆

Bechara Kesar ek-tarfa pyaar mein akele saari mehnat karega? ye to achchi baat nahi hai.. at least Gullu should feel something... a tiny winy bit, at least...

Galool is a hard nut to crack.😡.you see Kesu ka bura haal hoga😆

So, it will be double date in the next chapter... hmm, interesting scenario hoga.. 😆

Double date.😆.haila..😲mujhe sab hill se dhakka mar denge...

Lubb you Minks and your comment too🤗

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Piyu mhaari🤗😆

Jzee

comments for the 2 chapters -

Haha, she was totally playing around with fire under the rain, when she went about ruffling his hair and being all cute. Good for her he didn't just grab her and have a go😆it was nice to see her make amends to her 24 hours of awful behavior for him, when she marked that imaginary boundary on the bed and subtly allowed the concept of sharing a bed. Kesar deserved that much compensation! And then the scene waking him, haha😆, these two are such kids, and then they go from moments of being cute and kiddy to aware and adults and ignore it blatantly and walk away ! Sigh, the tense ruffles of heart!

Word Jzee👍🏼 ..she is igniting such a passion in Kesar's heart while playing in the rain.Ruffling his hair and pulling his cheeks..tch tch Galool.You will kill this banda some day😆Yaar the beauty of The FF will be lost if I incorporate silly hugs😆Yes she kinda soothed all the anguish and pain which she made him undergo😳The concept of sharing the same bed signifies their comfort level and the trust which Gulaal has slowly built up now.😳The waking up..see Gulaal in my FF too believes in domestic violence.Poor bawarchi😆

Kunal giving Kesar ki gaadi a push on this 'love vacation'😆- geez! Kya din agaye hain baawarchi ke!😆Talli and him are a match made in heaven - Kunnu and Talli that is, ofc... would love to watch out for what excitement Kunal's birthday brings - Kesuda is peppy enough about the prospect - but can you pretty pleej not give us Kulli romance to interrupt?! Everytime they barge into a scene, I feel like Kesar from the mandir scene, where Kunal stops to greet him, and he's all get out of my way and view man -😆all eyes for Gullu and her 'changed' open hair☺️

Bawarchi has become a complete dabloo in Galool's love.bechara kunnu badnaam shayar will now advise him😆Well I really promise that Kulli romance would be bare minimum.warna wickedians will throw tamatars and mojris on me.*ducks*

ps: on a very random note, I wonder how Kesar would react to Gulaal giving Kunal a gift for his 'birthday'😲😆We haven't seen the jealous Kesar yet, have we?!😆

Jealous Kesar bhi ayega.😳..have patience and Kunal's gift Hmmm surprise😆

Thanx Jzee for reading and commenting..😳lubb you🤗

Originally posted by: MeySimi

HI Piu,

Hi Ganga..🤗

Forum Walon dekho Finally Mere FF pe kisne comment Kiya...

Hai..me all dancing shancing now..

kahin main sapna to nahi dekh rahi..*rubs eyes*😍

Haila main khushi se pagal na ho jaun

Finally I read your chapters. It is well written. I love all the description you have given. Makes me feel like visiting the places. I have never had the leisure of visiting places in these last 10 years. I did when I was in school as dad was in IAF but then those are distant cherished memories.

Thanx Ganga😳Actually I have spent a lot of time in Uttarakhand and could never get Over with its beauty.But it is just addictive and mesmerisingly beautiful😍

As for the pacing in your story, it is really good. I love the tent scene too, reminded me of olden days when we used to be subjected to such "preparations for the worst scenario" in our summer camp training.

Thanx Ganga😃 I tend to go overboard with detailings of the surroundings which may seem a tad bit slow.😛But then I can't help it .😆Thanx the tent scene is my fav too😳

I love this Gulaal especially since she is ambitious and more so I like the fact that she is pursuing Ph.D. I hope we get to see Kesar accompanying Gulaal for field trips. I remember how two of my seniors who were engaged during their study used to have maximum fun during such field trips and I used to be left keeping guard for them. Uff...those days of field work.Tedious but enjoyable.

Yes Gulaal in My FF is very ambitious and loves her studies which is a striking contrast TO kESAR who is fun loving and a does not have any particular focus.Well Field trip seems a wonderful idea .⭐️Will deffo work upon it😳

I like the way you wrote the scene in the tent where he eases her discomfort and hugs her and makes her go to sleep. It is lovely since even I believe romance is in such simple care and gestures and I hate how they showin the typical filmy version in most of the shows. Looking forward to reading the story.

Aww ..Ganga Thanx..🤗I also believe if something should happen ,it should happen naturally .so I try my best to keep away cliche crappy silly romantic scenes though I may sometimes fail but try my best😳

****Check your inbox. I have placed my scene demands******

Ganga checked and replied too😳..Ijust lubb them and lubb you too🤗

haila 😲😲forum walon I can't believe that Ganga just commented 😍and I replied her.😳.

OMG koi mujhe D.N.S ki I.V. drip lagao.main behosh ho jaungi

Originally posted by: MeySimi

Btw, Piu, I hope Gulaal of your FF does come to know that it was Kesar who had planned her birthday surprise and not Vasant. I was actually thinking if she will get to know this from the watchman because he has allowed Kesar in for the second time

OMG where is your charan..😲.How did you know I had planned this..😕Haila..ab mujhe kuch naya sochna padega.😆.Haila..Ganga aur uski parkhi nazar se kaun bach paya hai...Ganga...I just simply Lubb you🤗

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Ganga checked and replied too😳..Ijust lubb them and lubb you too🤗

haila 😲😲forum walon I can't believe that Ganga just commented 😍and I replied her.😳.

OMG koi mujhe D.N.S ki I.V. drip lagao.main behosh ho jaungi

Originally posted by: nneeiill

hi sajani..

Hi bache..padhai ho gayi kya

kya mast chappi likha hai tune..bhagwaan kare tujhe aise hi free time miltha rahe...

thanx..yaar mujhe laga kahin tu bhi mujhe dhakka na mar de for giving no hug scene

i loved the rainscene...it was really well written plus i liked how he went on sulking like.." cute ???? "

Thanx🤗..Poor kesu..all breathless and burning with passion and Galool finds him cute.🤣.Ye bandi kisi din jaan le legi kesu ki😆

poor kesuda ko kitha bacha jaise treat karthi hai ...

haan yaar poor bacha🤣

ek confusion hai piu..so now Kesar realises that he is in love.right ??????

coz he is not getting bothered when Kunal teased him for the same...

Yes yes Kesu is slowly realising..He is yet to blurt it out😳

btw i loved ur FF waala Kunal..his shayari is not at all Pakaau..i just love them...

haila.😲.my chotu Govinda hates him and his shayari😆 ..

Aww those are my fav shayaris..actually😳

and i love this Kunal and Kesar friendship which u have built up ...

Thanx they are very cool buddies

ab laao jaldi jaldi naya chappi :)

Aww bache 😳..rajni uncle nahi...😆chall ab tu so ja..😛.Subah chappi update milega..lubb you🤗

Originally posted by: sauris

jaldi se update kar😉

abhi still typing ..

will update by tonite.🤗.pls DB ko dur rakhna..😭