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Originally posted by: manzilmukul
Part 21
Tu magar hai bekhabar..hai bekhabar
His pulse raced and he could hear his own heartbeat as he walked towards her.There she stood with her arms stretched out and soaking herself in the soft drizzle.She was looking strikingly beautiful.,The rain had drenched her and was elucidating her Rubensque physique.This was the moment Kesar thought,The moment which he had yearned for..Now is the time..He thought.." I am going to hug her again"
bahoon mein chale aaohum se sanam kya pardahai aaj ka nahi milanyeh sang hai umar bhar kaGulaal was enjoying every moment and she looked at him who wasnow only a few metres away from him.Her eyes twinkled and she smiled innocently .He was captivated by her charm.He felt that nothing could stop him now..Gulaal said ecstatically.. " Kesar tub hi na..jaldi aa dekh na kitni achi barish ho rahi hai"go hug her tightly and give her 10-15 kisses i dont mindKesar snapped out of his thoughts and suddenly realized"What the hell am I thinking.?Get a grip Kesar!" kesar could not believe that he had such a deep and passionate desire to hold her in his arms again as he came very near to her.Thearoma of the first drops of rain drenching the earth seduced his heart.leja leja re mehki raat mein churake saare rang leja
raatien raatien mein bheegon saath mien tu aisi mulakaat deja
ni muiye maila mann mera
kya karna aisa rang gora
jo piya na rijhaye
ni muiye mann mailamann maila kya karnahai aisa..na bhaye piya ko tann gora kya karna..
hai aisa..
leja leja.. churake saare rang leja..
raatien raatien mein bheegon saath mien tu aisi mulakaat leja..
leja leja..al said mischeiviously , "pata hai mujhe barish kitni achi lagti hai.mummy humesha mere bhigne par gussa karti thi.Kesar said in a low voice?, " wo tum..tumhari tabiyat khrab ho jayegi andar chalo Gulaal",as he tried his best to hide his desire.
chahoon paas paas aana
koi dhoondh ke bahana
tumhe apna maana
chahe ruthe ye jamana
chahe maare jag taana
tumko hai paana
ni muiye saari raaton ki..
kahani koi to hogi..
jo jaage taare raaton ko..
ya jaage jogi..
Gulaal was overwhelmed ..This guy cared for her so much she thought as she looked at him lovingly.She stretched her hand and ruffled his rain kissed hairand then her hands traced their way to his cheeks and she pinchedthem really hard and said" Tu kitna cute hai Kesar",
And ran inside the palatial Patel Villa while still laughing on her way
ni muiye..
ni muiye hoti hia..
kucch batein hoti hai raaton mein
jo jaage hai jogi ya taare jage hai..
raaton mien..
leja leja re mehki raat mein churake saare rang leja
raatien raatien mein bheegon ...
Kesar stood there speechless,motionless still lost in his own thoughts . "Cute??Is that all what I am ?"He sighed and stood there lost in his own thoughts.as the soft monsoon drizzle added colour to his heart and life.shakal na dekhne se cute hua hai u should be happy naaKesar's room 4:30 am
" Itni der kyun laga di ane mein,ja jaldi se kapde badal le",Asked Gulaal As kesar walked inhis room soaked in rain.He was still in daze coz he did not knew for how long he stood there alone in the rain.Gulaal had changed by now and was already lying lazily on the bed and smiling at him..
omg yeh bed par kyu y not couch😳😳😳Kesar looked at her ..and couldn't believe his eyes.She was lying on his bed.Is this for real he thought."Kya hua..jaldi kar..waise bhi subah hone wali hai..sona nahi hai kya",Kesar snapped out of his thoughts as Gulaal called him..
jaldi kis baat ki???????He went to the bathroom and came back after changing.Gulaal saw him coming and got up and grabbed the badminton racket from the wall and drew an imaginary line with it dividing the bed into two equal halves.Kesar was amused and confused at the same time.He asked pretending to be confused..
K : " ye kar rahi ho ?"
G: jaise kamre ka bantwara hua tha..waise bed ka bhi..udhar wala hissa tera..khabardar agar Ye line cross ki to ya mere hisse pe kabza kiya..chal ab so ja..mujhe nind aa rahi hai ,Gulaal said seriously as she pulled her blanket and lied down on her side of the bed."
ha ha ha so cuteKesar looked at heramazed and giggled at her silly argument .He came and also lied beside her in his portion of the bed.Gulaal dozed off within the next few minutes.Kesar turned around and looked at her.She slept peacefully .Her hair was still slightly wet and tiny droplets trickled from them.
bacha ko maar k hi dam legi..he is gone with the wind caseKesar was mesmerized.Suddenly Gulaal who was lying on supine position turned and was now facing him..He saw her radiant face.His heart missed a beat.He came very close to her careful enough not to cross the imaginary line.line cross karke sirf slap padega aur kya kar le tera hi bed hai" If only I could cross this line",Kesar sighed .He wanted to pull her and hold her in his arms like the night at the camp..Kesar kept on looking at her mesmerized and dazed.
rehne de sirf itna nahi soch raha hoga 😳😳"Oh how could she sleep so peacefully after creating upheavals in his mind and thoughts.How could she be so aloof and sleep blissfully when he was still finding it difficult to fight his desire.."Kesar thought..and said softly , " I really hate you Gulaal"even i ...she is blind or whatSilly he thought How much he hated Kunal's shyari which he said a few days ago and Now it made sense again..he thought..
"Dil gira kahin pe dafatan
Jane magar ye nayan
Teri khaamosh zulfon ki gehrayiyan hai jahan
Dil mera uljha hua hai wohin par kho gaya
Tu magar hai bekhabar hai bekhabar
" My heart is lost somewhere But my eyes know exactly where is it..It is captivated ,trapped and lost in the silently dark depths of your curls..But you are unaware ..just ignorant of my Plight?"
omg yeh kunnu k shayyari sochta rehta hai...daal mein kuch kaala hai bossGulaal slept peacefully as Kesar kept on fighting with this sudden new found desire that had made him so helpless and restless.Kesar's Room 9:30 am
" Kesar uth ..uth na..dekh college nahi jana hai kya",Gulaal was shaking up Kesar
He lazily opened his eyes and said , " sone do na" and buried his head under his pillow.
haan mein nocturnal prani hun...i dont like daylightGulaal was not ready to give up.. " acha to tu aise nahi manega"She got hold of the Badminton racket and started hitting him..hein killing spree sach mein mar gayaKesar got up from the bed and screamed " Ye kya kar rahi ho tum..ouch..ye koi tareeka hai kisi ko uthane ka"
G: " acha bachu ..teri late lateefi yahan nahi chalegi..chal ab nakhre band kar aur naha ke tayyar ho ja",Gulaal ordered
K: aur agar nahi mana to..to kya karogi
G: to to main teri aur pitayi karungi,"said Gulaal naughtily as she hurled the racket in the air and was about to hit him when he grabbed her hand..She shouted struggling to free her wrist from his hold. "Kesar chhod mera haath"
mat chodna...else i will throw u from hillK: kyun ab kya hua..maro..bahut uchal rahi thin abhi ..tsk tsk haar gayi na",Kesar giggled and winked.ofcourseGulaal flared her nostrils and started hitting him from her left hand.But Kesar grabbed that also and pulled her towards himself.Their eyes met and Gulaal felt uncomfortable as Kesar looked at her fondly .Kesar was dazed as she was so close to him..His grip loosened and Gulaal pushed him away..and said , " chal chal..ab jail kar..main chai lekar ati hunt u tayyar ho ja",Gulaal walked away.Kesar stood there..still having flashbacks of the incident that just happened a few minutes ago
yeh ladte ladte romance karte hain superlike😆😆😆
Originally posted by: manzilmukul
Part 22
The Plan
Kesar's room 10:00 am
"Kya baat hai kesar aaj kal to tu roz naha leta hai..tere Save Water mission ka kya hua",Gulaal jested with a wicked smile mocking Kesar who was now combing his hair
bhaad mein jaaye water saving mission waise bhi hill sattion mein rehta hai talsagra mein nahi k jyada use karega to drought aa jayegaKesar turned around and saw Gulaal was standing with tea and biscuits.Kesar just smiled and took the cup from Gulaal and sipped the hot tea..
Gulaal anxiously asked , " kaisi bani hai..chai",as she had made Tea for Kesar for the first time..
poonam ne is paagal ko kuch bhi nahi sikhayaKesar just smiled,said "achi hai" and continued Sipping.Gulaal took the other cup and sat on the chair and continued speaking ," Wo maine soch aaj yahin chai piyun..main bhi late uthi .tab tak sab chai pi chuke the,"
Gulaal took the first sip of the tea and instantly spit it out , "Chii Kesar itni buri chai tu kaise pi raha hai ..isme to maine chini hi nahi dali..aur tujhe achi kahi?",Gulaal frowned and fumed at the same time.
kya ladki hai 27 years mein tea tak banana nahi aati and my mom scolds me if meri roti gol nahi banti ...pata nahi kaun sa tsunami aa jayega agar roti circle nahi hongi...and look at her tea tak banana nahi aati spoilt childKesar said in a low voice , "wo tumne itne man se banayi thi aur agar main ise kharab keh deta to tum dukhi ho jati na..isliye nahi kaha"arey baapre itne cuteness achi nahi lagti kesudiGulaal looked at him .She was surprised "Tujhe meri khushi ki itni parwah hai Kesar"
to itne dino se wo knal k peeche bhag raha tha kya...studies and brains saath saath nahi chalte gullu just proved itBoth looked at each other..Gulaal hesitated to speak ahead but continued, "Aaj ek dost ke hone knate main tujhe ek advise thena chahti hun ,dekh kabhi jhooth nahi bolte..kisi ki khushi k liye bhi nahi..Kyunki ek na ek din wo jhooth sabke samne ata hai aur phir sabko dukh k siwa kuch nahi deta..Isliye jhoot se hum thodi der k liye to kisi ko khush kar sakte hain..humesha k liye nahi
lo shuru hue galool k usoolKesar just smiled at her..
G: kuch samjha ya..,she giggled..
Breakfast table 10:15am
" Gulaal tu to 2-3 din Hostel rehne wali thi na..phir kab ayi",asked SF
G: wo wo?wo main subah jaldi aa gayi thi..meri kuch kitabein reh gayi thi..",Gulaal made a lame excuse..
Rewa was listening to all this and whispered , " mujhe sab pata hai bhabhi..Kesar aur aapko maine subah dekha tha bahar..aap adhi raat ko ghar ayi na.Kyun wahan man nahi laga na."she giggled
nanad ho to aisi u r damm goodGulaal rolled her eyes and ran away towards the Kitchen?College Canteen 1:30 pm
"Kya baat hai Kesar tujhekab se dekh raha hun,tu kuch bol nahi raha hai..bahut khoya khoya lag raha hai..Kya baat hai",asked Kunal who was sitting with Kesar for Lunch.
Kesar seemed disoriented and lost..He missed Gulaal a lot.Although he had seen her just 3 hrs ago.But he still seemed very lost and miserable.
kya baat hai 3 hrs bhi nahi jhele jaate ab yaa to tu phd k class join kar yaa isko chef k job dilwa de...both are impossibleKun: "are Kesar kya hua"However he replied to Kunal, " Hmmm..wo kuch nahi pata nahi Gulaal ke lectures kab over honge?
kyu phir se racket se peetna hai kyaKun: Tadap ke dekh kisi ke chahat meinto pata chale ki intezaar kya hota hai
Tadap ke dekh kisi ke chahat mein
to pata chale ki intezaar kya hota hai
yunhi mil jaye koi bina tadpe
to kaise pata chale ki pyar kya hota hai
Kesar was confused and said?, "Kya bak raha hai tu"
Kun: Kuch nahi..Wo dekh Gulaal aa rahi hai"
Kesar quickly responded" kahan".He was excited .His eyes twinkled as he saw Gulaal walking towards him..
K : Itni der kahan laga di? main kab se tumhara wait kar raha hun..,Kesar complained
G: wo Hostel chali gayi thi...thoda..
" haan maine call kiya tha..Main to subah dar hi gayi jab dekha Gulaal room mein nahi hai..Phir call kiya to pata chala ki wo ghar mein thi?",said Talli who was accompanying Gulaal ,she continued, " Phir pata chala k wo lunch karne aa rahi thi tumhare saath,socha main bhi chalun..waise bhi Gulaal k bina mera man nahi lagta akele lunch karne mein?
Kesar was disappointed as he wanted some exclusive time with Gulaal.He could easily ask Kunal to leave,But How on earth would he ask Talli to leave..Kesar started getting irritated.He was about to blurt out something when Kunal interrupted..
oh no single date double date mein convert ho gayi i seriously hate u galool😡Kun: are aiye Talli ji baithiye sab saath mein lunch karte hain..Oh By the way Bhabhiji..I am Kunaal ,kesar ka Friend,Kunal introduced himself to Gulaal as they all sat together.kunal and talliGulaal felt hesistant and said , "You can call me Gulaal"
kyu y cant he call u bhabhi ema karne ka mood hai???Kun: nahi nahi..after all aap Kesar ki patni hai ,main to apko bhabhi hi kahunga..Kyun Kesar.chalo chandamama thodha to sensible thaTalli didn't like his statement.
u just suicide talliKesar was still upset about his ruined plans because of Talli.and slightly nodded his head.Talli: are Kesar tumhe pata hai aaj kadhi chawal hai lunch mein..chalo wohi order karte hain..
kadi chawal in college canteen yeh poori talli hai😕Kesar gave a disinterested look at Talli .They all ordered their meals and started eating.Kunal saw Kesar who was still angry and sulking?
He started saying.. " Oh by the way Bhabhi ji kal mera Birthday hai aur main aap ko invite karna chahta hun.."
Kesar gave a shocked look at Kunal..as he knew his birthday had passed last month.He blurted out , " par tera Birthday to",His statement was interrupted as Kunal kicked his feet and winked slyly and said, " Haan haan ab tu yahi kahega na ki tu mera birthday phir bhul gaya tha..Koi baat nahi..kaun sa tujhe har saal yaad rehta hai.Tujhe aur bhabhi ko kal ana hi padega"
Gulaal smiled and said, "par college aur phir kahan"
Kun:are bhabhiji aap to aise baat kar rahi hain jaise college k lectures ek din attend nahi karengi to ye college chalna band ho jayega..aur haan Talli ji ko bhi lekar zarur ana..
He then looked at Talli and said, "Warna aap ka man to nahi lagega bhabhiji k bina .
Talli agreed because she knew Kesar would also be there.
Gulaal promised to come and took a leave .
As soon as Gulaal and Talli left Kesar jumped at Kunal and asked, " Kyun re tune jhooth Kyun bola..tera birthday to pichle mahine hi celebrate kiya tha humne."
Kun: apni halat dekhi hai tune Devdas kahin ka,Tujhse to kuch hoga nahi?isliye ab teri kahani ko dhakka main hi marunga.."
K: MATLAB ?
Kun:Duffer..isi bahane Tujhe aur Gulaal bhabhi ko saath time spend karne ka mauka milega samjha..
Kesar was delighted and excited?But then he remembered Talli
He spoke in an irritated tone?, "par tune us chipkoo Talli ko kyun invite kiya .Har waqt Gulaal se chipki rehti hai."
Kun: abe gadhe tu wakai itna Duffer hai ya Gulaal k chakkar main hosh kho baitha hai..
Sun mera birthday hai to bhabhi expect karegi k main bhi hun..wahan pe aur agar main wahan Kabab mein haddi hounga to??Isliye Talli..samjha..aur waise bhi mera bhi kuch bhala ho jayega?",Kunal said as he gave an evil smile to Kesar.
Kesar was very excited and asked "par hum jayenge kahan"
Kun: wohi apni fav jagah par?"
And they both started laughing as Kesar said , " kya Idea hai Boss tu ekdum Genius hai"
par y to give the alag party to spend quality time mia biwi to ek room share karte hai they can share the talks after they retunr ek hi jagah to rehte hain?????but chalo ek nayi place dekhene ko milege plz post the snaps also i can connect myself as u did in the camp waali site..aur kunal or talli ko door bhaga dena
Originally posted by: prachurya
Yeh kya, I was away for 2 days and 4 chappies posted😭
Aww Prachu ro kyun rahi ho...Acha hai na...😉4 chappis padhe /jhele tumne😆
Read them all at one goHain😲hailaKesar ne toh official patni rap shuru kar diya(I loved the dialogue 'Tum officialy meri wife ho". But sacch mein yeh banda kitna care karta hai Gullu ki. Luved the way u described his adda, I must compliment u on the way u describe the surroundings, kinda feel like visiting there. Gullu and Kesu ki frndship reminded me of Ranbir Kapoor's dialogue from APKGK "No conditions no demands". Awww ur Gullu is such a sweetheart, Kesu toh gaya, full tym Devdas ban gaya hai. The bed division so reminded me of Jodha Akbar. I was happy to see Kunal in 22nd chappie, moreover he is playing cupid and I loved that he maintained dat he wud call Gulaal as Bhabhiji! Talli😡, ahhh she ruined a lunch date...i just keep insulting her in my fic😛...Hope she doesn't ruin the possibilty of any other Gulsar scenes warna apna Kesuda personally uska galla daba dega
Official Patni rap to karna hi tha.And Care yes he just cares a lot for her.The adda...😆
Oh thanx prachu for the compliment.But You know I am a weird person I have a huge fascination for Places in uttarakhand and when I write I imagine myself walking on the same place again so My vivid description.That Bed partition was actually churofied fromJA 😛.And my kUNAL is a sweetheart ,He plays a major role in this story.
Talli ki chinta mat karo main use jaldi bhaga dungi.😆
Prachu apna chappi update kar na😛
Hai Piu.. Loved reading both the chapters... 21 and 22 😃hi vino🤗Thanx😳Cahpter 21...OMG... No hug...yeh kya baath hui😲.. but am happy that Kesar ko cute sa pinch tho mila Gulaal ke haathon se...😆😆... I liked it. Aur what was he doing outside... sapne dekh raha tha kya forsuch along time 😆 😆by the time he reached Gulaal changed her dress and was lying on the bed...I liked the bed batwaara part... that was so cute and I loved the way you described Kesar's feelings and yearning tohold her in his arms.. too good.. 😳And their cute little fight was really cute...😃Vino actually I don't beleive in zabardasti ka hug .Are the beauty of the FF will be lost if I use trip and fall scenes and cliche eyelocks and silly hugs.Hug bhi ayega wait karo😆Gulaal still is stuck in her past and if you re read the tank scene chappi you will see that Gulaal is still not over the child Kesar.So basically she finds him cute and adorable.But not to forget that the ahem ahem moments make her conscious but she happily ignores them😆She is Galool after all the great ostrichChapter 22...I loved Kesar's attitude towards Gulaal.. that he never wanted to hurt her by saying that she forgot to put sugar in the tea. At the same time I loved Gulaal's reply to that, I too believe that way...( whatever it is we need to be honest... ) I actually loved loved loved that part.Thanx Vino..🤗Actually this was introduced with a purpose .so pls keep reading😳Arey wah bhai wah... Kunnu ne kya plan banaya hai.. wow... uski dimaag ki batthi aise kaise jal gayi... 😆.. Abhi tho hug milega na... 😳Kunnu is intelligent😛...Dekho hug ayega😆Now very eagerly looking forward to the next chapter... 😍Thanx for your comments Vino.😳.lubb youThanks Piu for these wonderful chapters... 😃😃lubb you🤗
hun next chappi mein kulli aaya to teri khair nahimai tujhse naraz😲 nahi bonu😳, aisa kabhi ho sakta hai bhala🤗
Ouch ..bachao ..Mamoni..meri choti khich rahi hai.😭..Are mamnoni main choti nahi banati re...😆
me lubb you too🤗
thanx my chotu govinda😳😳..lubb you and your bada wala comment😳
lovely chapii...so kesar has started liking her...missing her hell and galool does she as any feeling for him.?...i seriously loved the chappi and next date mein plz take care of that talli and kunal😳Thanx my chotu Govinda..haila..Liking.😲.banda is madly in love..bas use khud hi pata nahi hai abhi😆aur Kulli😆