Hey just came up with another poem...Hope you all like it..Well the situation is that there were two turning p[oints in the story of Kes -gul...
1.Gulaal's saying that her love for him will never change..after the drowning and saving
2.when kesar confessed his love for gulaal...so those three words ie I love you changed everything bw them..
So focus is mainly on these two points..so I start with Gulaal's love ..confession(though with a different meaning)...then move on to kesar's softening...then his confession and then turmoil..and finaly their reconciliation..and the DV breaking finally and it is my imagination how kesar will remember the word Love..from Gulaal's POV...
Hope You like it
Those three words❤️
By those three words my life took a turn
love blossomed in my heart brought lots of fun
People say that LOVE is the best word
and they made me fly like bird
(This was after gulaal said that her love for him won't change)
Sometimes my love made me fly
sometimes flambouyant ,sometimes shy
Of all the words she said to
love you was my favourate
(This was kesar's change in rude behaviour)
By those three words again my life took a turn
Fire was in my heart without any burn
People say that they are the best three words
But they made her vision blurred
(Kesar's love confession)
more than love more than care
different relations got prepared
Heart began to dance and enjoy
Life was beautiful as her eyes sparkled with joy
(Their reconciliation after kesar decides to call off the DV)
Now the heart is again in deep pain
life is stagnant eyes do drain
echo of those words now echoes in my ears
dreams got washed away by my tears
(Finally the DV breaking)
Now my love makes me sad
Earlier I was happy and heart was glad
Because out of all the lies she said
I LOVE YOU...is still my favourate😭
(Kesar remembering gulaal's love)