Those three words

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Hey just came up with another poem...Hope you all like it..Well the situation is that there were two turning p[oints in the story of Kes -gul...

1.Gulaal's saying that her love for him will never change..after the drowning and saving

2.when kesar confessed his love for gulaal...so those three words ie I love you changed everything bw them..

So focus is mainly on these two points..so I start with Gulaal's love ..confession(though with a different meaning)...then move on to kesar's softening...then his confession and then turmoil..and finaly their reconciliation..and the DV breaking finally and it is my imagination how kesar will remember the word Love..from Gulaal's POV...

Hope You like it

Those three words❤️

By those three words my life took a turn

love blossomed in my heart brought lots of fun

People say that LOVE is the best word

and they made me fly like bird

(This was after gulaal said that her love for him won't change)

Sometimes my love made me fly

sometimes flambouyant ,sometimes shy

Of all the words she said to

love you was my favourate

(This was kesar's change in rude behaviour)

By those three words again my life took a turn

Fire was in my heart without any burn

People say that they are the best three words

But they made her vision blurred

(Kesar's love confession)

more than love more than care

different relations got prepared

Heart began to dance and enjoy

Life was beautiful as her eyes sparkled with joy

(Their reconciliation after kesar decides to call off the DV)

Now the heart is again in deep pain

life is stagnant eyes do drain

echo of those words now echoes in my ears

dreams got washed away by my tears

(Finally the DV breaking)

Now my love makes me sad

Earlier I was happy and heart was glad

Because out of all the lies she said

I LOVE YOU...is still my favourate😭

(Kesar remembering gulaal's love)



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Posted: 14 years ago
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wah wah ye hui na baat, loved it👏
my favorite-

Now the heart is again in deep pain

life is stagnant eyes do drain

echo of those words now echoes in my ears

dreams got washed away by my tears

(Finally the DV breaking)

love you bonu , the poem is excellent ⭐️ 👏😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow..just beautiful..⭐️piu..love u...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Piu
I lub u remeri piuwa...kya poem likha hai re...butiful...!!!!!❤️❤️
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👏 Very very nice Piu...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😒 because of all the lies she said - I love you is still my favorite!

Sigh... !

Well portrayed Piyu 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice poem Piu. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res res, vl come back piyu to properly comment, but i loved the poems yar 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh piyu, excellent excellent excellent, i dont have words to explain how beautifully u have written these lines 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 i loved the poems n specially how u related them to different situations in the show, excellent piyu, n specially when kesu brings her to panchayat to break DV for her happiness only n after that when they become friends, n DV breaking n kesu remembering her love, excellent piyu 👏 i love u yar 🤗
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Originally posted by: bioinfo

wah wah ye hui na baat, loved it👏

myfavorite-

Now the heart is again in deep pain

life is stagnant eyes do drain

echo of those words now echoes in my ears

dreams got washed away by my tears

(Finally the DV breaking)

love you bonu , the poem isexcellent⭐️👏😃

Thanxs bonu😳..Actually I was feeling miserable since two days..so decided to vent my thoughts through this poem😭

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