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Posted: 14 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent
jhappis from me too arti 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
n mood bas kabhi theek kabhi kharab, aj kal toh aise hi chal raha hai, bechara mera mood 😆

n wah arti what a chappi, kesu put sindoor in her maang, excellent way to play holi with wifey dearest 👏 n gulaal ka rang laga hai, aur jagah hi nahi yippyyy, han nahi hai jagah talli tu wapas apne ghar ja, wahan bohot jagah milegi 😆 i love u arti 🤗kitna sweet chapi laayi, n loved it how kesu being all brattish n trying to jalao dushy ji n saying all my patni my patni 😆

haye haye me and u same pinch...my mood is off...kitna pain feel kare... its dark gloomy lovestory...thanks kiran u liked it...🤗🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: kreas

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Thanx re...
Mindblowing chappiii re...i luved it...!!!!!Talli ki toh...usse humesa sab ulta hi samajh me aata hai...dabloo...😆
N HAapy HOli Re...!!!!!😃

talli ka koi kuch nahi kar sakta...god bless kunnu...and happy holi to u too😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: smitha2728
U R A SUPERB WRITER PLS CONTINUE I LOVE TO READ 😊😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: Savz_uniqueblis
oh ur ff is too fast again holi but yeh to only arti wala holi comes in aug 😆 u r spl u celebrate holi differently. same character to talli here also. what's role dushy here so calm. no durgesh in ur ff 😆 ur ff is nice khichdi.😊

thanks dear...it started with holi its has to be mentioned again😛

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Posted: 14 years ago

#595

Originally posted by: alanta
Hi Arti I enjoyed and about Talli, jahaan Gulsar hein waha Thalli tho hona chaahiye na...😕
I really felt like Kesar ragging Dushyanth lol, indirectly telling him "How dare you love my wife".

and the sindoor scene was just lovely. First time he put sindoor on her all under self pressure and this time with whole heartily and with fondness.

You know one thing Arti when I heard on Kullis wedding at the mandir and Gulsar the only persons invited, then I just started thinking: Mandir mein Kesar aur Gulaal saath saath honge, shaadi ka maahol hein, sindoor ka dhaali bhi honge aur zaroor aisa kuch hoga jis se Kesar Gulaal ki maang bhardenge...

Aur agar yein hamare pehle waale angry young man hota tho shaayad kartha, but this is all calm and quiet gulaalified Kesar, jo apni pyaar ke liye apni pyaar ka hi kurbaan kar diya. Aur waise bhi precap dekh ke muje nahin lagtha ki Kulli ke shaadi mandir mein hone waala hein as per they planned.

oh what to do with sar par nachiti chudail but atleast here she is miles away wen there is some romantic moment between them😉...kesu was angry at dushy' remark saying the marriage holds no importance and he is a kid...it is his way to make him understand...dude dont dare come between us...better stay out..ya he really ragged him...and the show wht to say cv always suprise us and now i really dont think about it...our lotsof time and enrgy is wasted thinking about good moment but we always ended up shedding tears...we know show is gonna end with gulsar union so just content..but not satisfied due to lack of some nice romantic scene...hard luck for us😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#596

haa mujhe pyaar hai haan
kaisa khumaar hai haan😆

OMG arti... i love you🤗

wat a beautiful chapter...
loved the holi in august like anything

wow kesar put the color on her maang😳..
and i loved how u mentioned his face was full of colors..no space for talli billi

and i am loving this pati waala attitude in front of dushy...hehehehe..it was too good

but ye kya on holi day K and G are 100m apart in ur FF too😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#597

Originally posted by: nneeiill
haa mujhe pyaar hai haan
kaisa khumaar hai haan😆

OMG arti... i love you🤗

wat a beautiful chapter...
loved the holi in august like anything

wow kesar put the color on her maang😳..
and i loved how u mentioned his face was full of colors..no space for talli billi

and i am loving this pati waala attitude in front of dushy...hehehehe..it was too good

but ye kya on holi day K and G are 100m apart in ur FF too😆

thanks neili...he grabed her hand and didnt let her go and he whispered in her ear and filled the maang aur kitna romantic chahiye... aur hota if he had drunk bhaang but talli all around meine risk nahi liya

😉😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#598

Aarti thank you for romantic chapter and could not believe when you brought chapter one here. loved it. brilliant writing.👏

I loved this section.

kesar came near and said "chalo gulaal "

gulaal said "nahi tum jao mujhe nahi aana"

kesar asked "par kyu nahi"

gulaal said "bas nahi aana" and she started walking away in anger

kesar called her from back "madam colorless aaj bhi holi nahi khelogi"

gulaal looked back in amusement

kesar continued "ab to hum strangers bhi nahi hai ab to holi khel lo"

gulaal said in amusement "peechle saal….woo tum the"

kesar noded his head 'haan"

gulaal was surprised she was thinking about her destiny….her destiny that

always travelled towards kesar….

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Posted: 14 years ago

#599

Originally posted by: Gman
Aarti thank you for romantic chapter and could not believe when you brought chapter one here. loved it. brilliant writing.👏

I loved this section.

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