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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Gman

Thank you Aarti for double treat.


Ofcourse Chappie was brilliant with introducing new twist i.e., her realisation and getting distant from Kesar and adding Dr Dushyant as catalyst to fire of love/ jealousy that is already kindled between two hearts.

Guessing that Kesar is on boiling point will burst anytime bringing them closer. These chapter has brought so much heartbreak, pain and grief between two but still it will result in positive as Kesar will understand why he feels way he feel for the Gulaal and Gulaal has already comprehend her emotions and feelings so it just Kesar has realised it.

So Gulaal staying away from Kesar will actually help Kesar to realise his love for Gulaal. I absolutely love his confession after she arrived from camp.

Kesar was hurt to hear it he said "haan sirf teen din the..kya farq padta hai un teen din mein 72 hrs , 4320 min ya 259200 seconds the...kya farq padta hai dil 1 min mein 72 baar dhakta hai...aur kya far padta hai k har dhadkan k saath meine sirf tumhe yaad kiya...kya farq padta hai gulaal"

And then he left the place

Gulaal was in tears she said "yeh baat mujhse jyaada aur kaun jaan sakta hai"and she was shattered

Yet guessing he has not realised his love yet. Plz correct me if I am wrong.

It is painful to see Gulaal suffering by keeping herself distant from Kesar unwillingly for promise she made to PB despite knowing she feels for him and even more hurting him when he wants to close distance between them. It is brutally killing self by hurting yourself and hurting your loved ones. I can not see them in pain.😭 Expecting reconciliation in new chappie between love birds.

Thank you for your brilliant writing and you know very well where to head your story line and keeping characters intact. Indeed great work Aarti.👏

ofcourse kesar has not realised the exact feeling for her...gulaal somewhere understands it and is maintaining the reasonable distance...there is burden of promise to fullfill not only with panba but she promised herself too not to accept this relation...it wasnt her intention of marriage she had a purpose to do deeyarvatto but now helplessly falling in love...this was my imagination for show too so desparately wanted gulaal to see falling in love naturally without all those extra efforts that kesar did for gulaal but its scared love purest form of love i cant reach that level not that creative so will keep it as a normal story
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Arti!!! Dude teach me how you do the updates so freaking fast! No, I'm not complaining at all, but I'm simply in awe! You're just like the CVs of this show - day after day you give us a new chapter, the standard is only ever rising, the story is engaging all the more - and well, there's no getting enough!


Thank you so much for the double treat - you deserve some kind of award for writing this FF for us - and not just writing, but keeping at it like its a priority - I know everyone tells you, but this means so very much to me, like all your readers! Thank you for being a wonderfully faithful writer!

ps: What can I say about the chapters? My favorite part of every love story is the rift and the angst and the pain - I like the happy times and love in the air blah blah - but tragedy is truly my favorite form of fiction, maybe I'm sadistic like that, but strains of characters leave me in awe, when well done - needless to say, you're carving out amazing characters here - more than ever, I look forward to tomorrow's update! Your chapters are my daily lunch time treat. The perfect mid day break, ever!

xx
JZee

noone gives me oscar 😭i didnt even get miss world title for writing my school assignment 😭but no probs your comment means a lot to me😛...its my oscar.😳..thanks a lot for liking...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kalika.j

@arti thank you for this wonderfull double treat. tum janthe ho hum sab ko (tumare fans ko ) kaise treat karna he. keep writing...👍🏼

thanks dear i m so glad u r talking to me needless to say i love ur DP😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
kiran siree and geesh res
res
res😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Arthi..I loved d 2 chappies..loved ur twists n turns..esp gul-kes. pain for each other.....u are developing kesu's character with care arthi..itz not rude n he is not a brat...a normal loving romantic person..n gullu also have nice characterisation...😳...n today mood thoda off thats y my reply may sound strange to u..😕n me also love my angel that is CC's neice..she is my sweet heart..😳akhir usne CC ka jeena mushqil kar diya..😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

kiran siree and geesh res

res
res😆


Dekho.maine unres karliya..😳😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
aray arti, loved loved loved the three chapis, three is liye k chapi 29 pe comment nahi kar payi thi, oh yar tujhe thank u kaise bolun main itnay achay chapis k liye yeh bata? wow kesar's pain, gulaal's pain, n the way u described it, beautiful 👏 the way kesu says about the hours minutes seconds, loved it 👏 the way he became angry, the way they both r fighting with the flow of emotions in their heart, lovely yar lovely 👏 oh i m desperately waiting for the next chapi, ya phir chapis now 😃 yeayyy arti wrote fantastic chapis 🥳 come here 🤗 love u my sweet arti 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

kiran siree and geesh res

res
res😆


maine bhi unres kar liya 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
you write extremely well arti, it has so much emotion and stuff in it.
thanks for putting in so much effort👏.
i will pray to God that you get your chii scene 😆.
cant wait for next chapter.
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Arti
Two chappis...thanku re...!!!!!
I luved both chappiii...too emotional chappiii re...BRAVO...!!!!
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