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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you Aarti for double treat.

Ofcourse Chappie was brilliant with introducing new twist i.e., her realisation and getting distant from Kesar and adding Dr Dushyant as catalyst to fire of love/ jealousy that is already kindled between two hearts.

Guessing that Kesar is on boiling point will burst anytime bringing them closer. These chapter has brought so much heartbreak, pain and grief between two but still it will result in positive as Kesar will understand why he feels way he feel for the Gulaal and Gulaal has already comprehend her emotions and feelings so it just Kesar has realised it.

So Gulaal staying away from Kesar will actually help Kesar to realise his love for Gulaal. I absolutely love his confession after she arrived from camp.

Kesar was hurt to hear it he said "haan sirf teen din the..kya farq padta hai un teen din mein 72 hrs , 4320 min ya 259200 seconds the...kya farq padta hai dil 1 min mein 72 baar dhakta hai...aur kya far padta hai k har dhadkan k saath meine sirf tumhe yaad kiya...kya farq padta hai gulaal"

And then he left the place

Gulaal was in tears she said "yeh baat mujhse jyaada aur kaun jaan sakta hai"and she was shattered

Yet guessing he has not realised his love yet. Plz correct me if I am wrong.

It is painful to see Gulaal suffering by keeping herself distant from Kesar unwillingly for promise she made to PB despite knowing she feels for him and even more hurting him when he wants to close distance between them. It is brutally killing self by hurting yourself and hurting your loved ones. I can not see them in pain.😭 Expecting reconciliation in new chappie between love birds.

Thank you for your brilliant writing and you know very well where to head your story line and keeping characters intact. Indeed great work Aarti.👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Arti!!! Dude teach me how you do the updates so freaking fast! No, I'm not complaining at all, but I'm simply in awe! You're just like the CVs of this show - day after day you give us a new chapter, the standard is only ever rising, the story is engaging all the more - and well, there's no getting enough!

Thank you so much for the double treat - you deserve some kind of award for writing this FF for us - and not just writing, but keeping at it like its a priority - I know everyone tells you, but this means so very much to me, like all your readers! Thank you for being a wonderfully faithful writer!

ps: What can I say about the chapters? My favorite part of every love story is the rift and the angst and the pain - I like the happy times and love in the air blah blah - but tragedy is truly my favorite form of fiction, maybe I'm sadistic like that, but strains of characters leave me in awe, when well done - needless to say, you're carving out amazing characters here - more than ever, I look forward to tomorrow's update! Your chapters are my daily lunch time treat. The perfect mid day break, ever!

xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
@arti thank you for this wonderfull double treat. tum janthe ho hum sab ko (tumare fans ko ) kaise treat karna he. keep writing...👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sukriti19a

wow so tees maar khan arti is here... love u dear

love u too dear😛..i hope u got the passionate scenes u demanded...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Keithuu

Aarti...double treat..😊
Wow...m so happy...😊
Such intense chappies...my dhadkanein ruk gayi yaar...ya saans bhi...😳
Tera jaadoo chal gaya...
dunno wat to say about these chappies yaar...tu ne mera emotional attyachaar kiya...
too good dear...the real kesar is here...😊absolutely loving it...
thanx a lot for the double dhamaaka...waiting for next..😊

so happy u didnt sleep in between...i understand its so difficult for me and u to keep ourself awake ...y cant we sleep 24*7...yaa i too love our bratty kesu and cv made him kesudi sometimes i fear kanhi is bache ko makeup kar k sach mein kesudi na baana de...😉
thanks dear for liking
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nneeiill

Hi arts last three chappi were just wow

I really appreciate that you are continuing your FF..thanks a ton 😊

Wow u r really genius..u know how to lead a story

Loved the yacht scene..it was dreamy

Gulaal ignoring kesar and kesar getting all messed up ...so beautifully u have put up

Am loving this passion in the story

Uff idhar bhi dushy aa gaya apna pyaar lekar'

Chalo kahani main twist tho hona hi chahiye

Waiting for the next..i want to see kesar's pagalpan for Gulaal

oye hoye so sweet ... u read all three instantly tell me how do u read so much as i cant and...thanks for liking and i love u full stop no "for" "becoz" "as"... see i m not reasonable at all😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: alanta

Arti Ek ke jagah do. Wonderful and esp I liked the second one and the scene towards the end😉👏

thanks dear i know first was so boring but important so thought to bring the second one.too..thanks for liking.
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks u dear to read your bada waala comment mein chappii par chapii laa raha hun thanks to u...if u didnt inspired me i would have left it in middle...thanks for liking
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bioinfo

haila aarti do do chapii's ye to bonus mil gaya👏

very nice chappis ,as i told you earlier inne acche chapis ka kya pachka karun😭superbly written special mention-

Kesar was hurt to hear it he said "haan sirf teen din the..kya farq padta hai un teen din mein 72 hrs , 4320 min ya 259200 seconds the...kya farq padta hai dil 1 min mein 72 baar dhakta hai...aur kya far padta hai k har dhadkan k saath meine sirf tumhe yaad kiya...kya farq padta hai gulaal"

And then he left the place

Gulaal was in tears she said "yeh baat mujhse jyaada aur kaun jaan sakta hai"and she was shattered brilliant presentation of pain and grief😊

you are a sweetheart dear⭐️, fabulous chappis layi hamare liye.👏.

ishq ka rutba ishq hi jane, samajh sake na, samajh sake na

samajh sake na log sayane, ishq ka rutba ishq hi jane😳

oye hoye today cc is also present...wow so good to see ...thanks for liking and u lots of love to humari little demon and sweetest member of wicked gang ur pyaari nieceEmbarrassed
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved the bada waala commentEmbarrassed

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