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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent
yippyyy loved the chapi arti my sweet arti 😃 aray yar give me hugs, itna acha capi tha 🤗 n i know the wish i know the wish yes yes gullu ko yeh wish toh puri karni hi hogi kesu k, wese bhi kesu ki baat se inkaar nahi kar sakti gullu, i loved it arti, n specially whr he holds her pic n sleeps 😍 so so sweet 😃 waiting for chapi 26 😃

he he he thanks kiran...hell mein to abhi tak soch rahi ho gulaal se kya karvaau...

gulaal is sweet na in this FF wanha hoti to kehti "yeh paap k bhavna tere mann mein aayi kaise" and if kesar would have won the game he would have got a tight jhapaad😳😉...thanks dear jaara thodhi studies kar rahi hun will bring the chappie soon😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: rimjhim1
u write very well👏. im looking foward to the next chapter.
rimjhim.😊

thanks rimjhim and careful gal ur DP is quite attractive lots of mad phanka are here who are desparately waiting for kesar/neil to get shirtless...bach kar rehna😉😛

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Posted: 14 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: LoLali
arti..you r becoming professional with each chapter 👏
hai re caromboard therapy...lol...and gullu losing deliberately ...hai she wanna know kesu's wish...
Munda beshram kaise bataaei wish 😉
keep writing ,but one paapi scene per chapter to banta hai 😉
We r with you!! 👏

oye hoye bhavna...dont i understand your bhavna...😉 thanks for the compliment and thats a huge compliment though i dont read what have i written kaun itna saara padhe...as if my books aren't enough😛...i wanted i challenge and win game in the show...whats the purpose of playing a game if there are no challenges..this was the secret desire so put in the FF..now she has to fullfill his wish😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#264

Kya hoga woh wish...😉
aarti...nice chappie...
carrom board aaya...dil khush hua...😃
Kesar ko rulaaya...again main khush...
very nice yaar...😊
Ab wish ke baare mein sochte sochte main dablufied hoing...
jaldi next laana...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#265

Areyyy...the carrom competition reminded me of the Gol Gappa competition in Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi...Aap haar gayi Gullu partner, ab aapko wohi krna padega jo main kahun!

It was a very feel good chappie, Kesar's emotional breakdown was really well written. Ab aage kya hoga- yaar Arti u r a TRP puller-main point pr chappie end kr deti ho! Waiting eagerly for next chappie.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: AnveshaAT
Arti dearest,
👍🏼Now the show is only for few days. You should write one chapter each day. Itna toh banta hai yaar Please, yeh le advance hugs.🤗.I know tu mana nahi karegi😛

Waise I hope you remember that if Daiba is at home, Kesar and Gulaal will share a room again😉

i m writing one chappii per day me too want to complete the ff as soon as possible... thanks anvesha for reading...kesar and gulaal shared the room as diaba didnt knew about their relationship now she knows about heir relationship how akward they feel... infact she was the one who initiated the friendship between the two...she is strong and sensible woman gulaal had already said they are only friends and daiba acknowledged it...infact in my FF diaba's deeyarvattu happened not panba's...so she understands gulaal condition better than anyone...she understands her pain her dilemma her fear her state of mind diaba must have gone through this in her life..

i wanted panba to confort gulaal in the show as diaba did but cv made her pathetic..and kes-gul romances even without sharing the room no need of it😳

thanks anvesha😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#268

Carom to the rescue! You totally turn cliche around by making Gulaal lose to Kesar willingly, usually its the guys, lol!

As for Kesar finding out about Gulaal's magnanimity - sigh - he had to find out one day, better now than later! I wonder what the showdown will be like finally, when PB finds out Kesar wants to be with Gulaal! Maybe Daiba will be good idea to have around?! Your Yogesh is so much like the old one from the show, not the new ever annoyed and annoying version, thank god!

Thanks for the chapter Arti - love the progress with GK, and overall track...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: Gman
Thank you Aarti for another emotional chapter. Now Kesar knows that she had sacrificed her precious ornament for family welfare or his studies to be specific. It must have hit him like lightning. Now he will be more determined not to leave her as she has gain deep respect from him and beside he has fallen for her hopelessly without realizing it.

It will great to see how sudha plans to get Talli married with Kesar will be shatttered.

Me too wondering what will be Kesar' s wish? Any idea guys?

ya kesar is in love with gulaal so is she...sudha ka plan to thenga hoga hi...hey gina if u have any idea u can put forward

thanks dear for liking😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: vinolya
Aarti, Awesome chapter re !!! Padhke mazaa agaya. You have got superb creative skills. Dear the wish must be ek dam super good wish 😉... and in the next chapter again nice Kes - Gul moments.. 😳 OK !!!

yup dear ...thanks for liking hope so i bring the good moments😳

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