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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chweetu

Arthi..what a sweet chappie dear...🤗n what will b his wish...😳n when he will return her necklace back..😉n will he ask her to accept his gift..that is her necklace..ya woh kudh hi pehenayega..😍.plz Arti..I want to be tamatarmukhi once more..☺️kyn ki yeah dil mange more..Aha..😛😉

he he he socho socho...mujh paapi writer se kya expect karti ho😉TongueEmbarrassed
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sauris

Aree bap re yeah to dono ko kuch kuch hone lagga hai.Very nice chapter Arti.Bas tu likhti ja bina ruke👏

thanks dear...will update soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
updated my comment 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07


Rewa blushed and went inside the kitchen'gulaal was in the kitchen

Rewa hugged gulaal and said "thanks gulaal bhabhi aapne kaha yogesh se isliye wo yanha aa paaye thank u"

Gulaal hugged her back and said "mein bahoot khush hun tumhare liye"

Kesar heard the conversation he complaint "acha gulaal tumhe pehle se hi malum tha to mujhe kyu nahi bataya"

Rewa said to him "kyu batau tujhe jaise tu mujhe sab batata hai"

Oh ho to Gullu ji ne yahan bhi baazi mar li...wo rewa ki love story bhi janti thi.


He then carefully looked at her in dim light with his moist eyes'.her inner glory was gently reflecting on her face'..his eyes were filled with gratitude and respect that he could ever had for any other person

Superb arti..this is arti style👏..very subtle and sweet...me also so emotional after reading this😭


In his room kesar took out gulaal pics and broke down infront of it.

He was in tears'.he looked at the pics and said "tum itni achi kyu ho gulaal'tum itne din tak apne saare ansoo chipati rahi aur chupchap Is ghar ko khushiyaan dete rehi'tumhe apni khushi apni zindagi is ghar liye kurbaan kar di gulaal'kyu tum itne achi ho'''mein tumhare saath khade hone k layak bhi nahi ho'kaise tumahre saath chalunga''yeh ehsaan mein kaise chukaaunga'kuch nahi de sakta tumhe" and he was chocked'..he was in deep pain

Oh thebacha..is in love.😳..Tujhme rab dikhta hai..yaara main kya karun..sajde sar jhukta hai..yaara main kya karun😛

After sometime he regained himself and then he held his pics in his hand and stood long time gazing her pics without speaking'the longer he gazed her image the more he felt her''he touched the pics.and traced down her smile with his fingertip'he said soflty" tumahri muskaan bahoot pyaari hai gulaal, mein inhe tumhare hoothon (lips) se kabhi dur jaane nahi dunga"'.

He looked determined he hold the pics close to his heart and slept.

Oh ho ye bhi original kesu ki tarah pics ko lekar so gaya...like serial wala..held the letters//kya kahun arti..just superb👏

Diaba looked at her and said affectionately "yeh to bahoot achi baat hai gulaal aksar pati patni dost nahi ban paate'.par agar pati aur patni apna rishta dosti se shuru kare to woo rishta bahut majboot hota hai"

..Oh ho koi gullu ko samjaho..ek ladka ladki kabhi dost nahi ho sakte hain..MPK style🤣I love how you've potrayed the sensible character of diaba..seems she is really worthy..of being the sarpanch of talsagra👏

Kesar just smiled and left the room..before leaving he glanced her back..and she kept wondering what is his wish?

Of ho arti..itna suspense acha nahi.😡..mujhe jaldi chappi chahiye

Oh meri chotu govinda cum yashchopra..🤗kya likhti hai⭐️..love how you've left no loose ends..like you popped up the necklace issue again..👏...Talli ko jaldi bhaga de pls😭It is brilliant storytelling..thanx for tha chappi and also PMing me so that I don't miss this..soulful love story👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bioinfo

☺️nice chappi nice chappi nice chappiaarti ab dai ba aayi hai matlab kesgul will stay in one room na😉then more hugs and unbutton shirt scenes hoge na😉😳

and next time make kesu break down on gulaal not on her pics😳 no no sharing the same room...daiba last time got the hint and even gulaal said she and kesar are friends diaba is a intellegent woman not a brainless creature...she will not force her again...she is just witnessing the tranformation in gulaal 😛

And gulaal kesar rewa and talli sat for the caromboard game'.rewa and kesar; talli and gulaal were partners'and the game started gulaal was good player and she leaded the game'.soon she pockted the queen and placed the striker to take the cover'she placed the striker and looked at kesar'.there was slight disappointment in his eyes to lose the game'..gulaal looked him carefully'.was it that she could see him disappointed or was it that she wanted to know kesar's wish'. What he wanted her to do?'..she thought and she lost the cover delibrately'.kesar looked at it and his eyes sparkled he quickly pocketed the queen and covered it'.and won the game'.

Rewa and kesar exclaimed in joy'.they were extremely happy talli was disappointed and gulaal was smiling quielty'.she got what she wanted'.she just looked at him with a content smile

Kesar was in joyous mood he looked into gulaal's eyes and said "haar gaayi gulaal ab"

Gulaal smiled and looked back at him and said soflty "ab jo to tum chaho"

And she paused and asked in low voice "kya karna hoga mujhe"

Kesar didn't said anything he just looked at her with intense affection and deep desire'..gulaal looked at him with fondness yet there was something there in his honest eyes that made her blush'

Kesar just smiled and left the room..before leaving he glanced her back..and she kept wondering what is his wish?-loved it👏

@red-oye jaan latka ke rakh di, batana tha na kya wish hai, now i'll keep thinking abt it day and nightaarti koi accchi wish dalna, u know na wat i mean😉...tell me kaun si wish fullfill karvaani hai me also thinking the wish kya karvaau gulaal se afterall me also a paapi viewers

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😳love you sweety and bring chappi 26 soon, me eagerly waiting for it😃and deary sorry i cant like your post for next 24 hrs😭 fivr still doesnt listen usCryCryCry

thanks chaitu for liking
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Posted: 14 years ago
Arti dearest,
👍🏼Now the show is only for few days. You should write one chapter each day. Itna toh banta hai yaar Please, yeh le advance hugs.🤗.I know tu mana nahi karegi😛
Waise I hope you remember that if Daiba is at home, Kesar and Gulaal will share a room again😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you Aarti for another emotional chapter. Now Kesar knows that she had sacrificed her precious ornament for family welfare or his studies to be specific. It must have hit him like lightning. Now he will be more determined not to leave her as she has gain deep respect from him and beside he has fallen for her hopelessly without realizing it.

It will great to see how sudha plans to get Talli married with Kesar will be shatttered.

Me too wondering what will be Kesar' s wish? Any idea guys?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aarti, Awesome chapter re !!! Padhke mazaa agaya. You have got superb creative skills. Dear the wish must be ek dam super good wish 😉... and in the next chapter again nice Kes - Gul moments.. 😳 OK !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Arti
Mast chappiii hai re...!!!
Next chappiii jaldi se lao,i m madly waiting ki kesar kya karwayega gulaal se...Jaldi Jaldi Jaldi...!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Another nice Chapter...☺️...Thanks Arti...😃
Waiting for ur next chappi...☺️

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