Originally posted by: vinolya
Hurray !!! I completed reading all the three chapters in a go... 10, 11, 12... ( basically I hate reading looong looong posts but your FF holds my interest in it 😊 )
Very well written Aarti. Loved the way how you describe each and every character's mood as per the present situation.
Ch - 10 was very touching.. As I read it really made my eyes wet... especially the lines where Paanba comes to Raman for help..
Ch - 11 was again bautifully written... I loved the description on Gulaal's tears, that was superbly done. 👏.. These lines were just too good.. "...and then was gulaal who always had tears in her eyes but she never cried infront of her family member There was a sacredness in tears. They were not the mark of weakness, but of power.. They were the messengers of overwhelming grief... and unspeakable love...she never cried infront of everyone but cried all alone...only one person to witness it... kesar, who noticed her from distance who saw her breaking down who saw her in bereavement in grief in pain..."
Ch - 12, Like everyone, I also loved the description regarding widows and how society treats them.
Absolutely wonderful... pls keep writing, we all love reading it.
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