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Bioinfo_Chaitu

@Bioinfo_Chaitu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#681

aarti pls send PB to north pole, amma ne to love story ka pachka kar dala, what is that promise all abt, gullu-kesu saath nahi honge to PB ko planet chod kar jana hoga and long live daiba, i am so in love with her pls bring her a handsome DAIBHA😉wo happy to hum happy and we'll get more kesgul moments and as far as this chappi is concernedso lots and lots of thanks re, waiting for ur next banging chappi.

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Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#682

Originally posted by: scarletthara
Wow, Arti... that's an interesting twist... I was thinking ki ab dosti gehri hogi, wierd rishtey aayenge for Gulaal... and finally Kesar will get upset and just say that instead he will marry her... your twist is much more convincing... Ab aayega story mein maja... plz continue writing... we al love your FF...

sure dear will try thanks for liking

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@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#683

Originally posted by: Gman
Thank you Aarti for new chapter, loved it.

Yeh Panba ne Gulaal se kya promise le liya. How can she do that?

Humare Kesar ka kya hoga?

Revji and Poonamba did not even listen to whole story and left in an anger. Typical father and mother.

Dhaiba plz come to Mumbai soon,and Gulaal moving into Kesar's room. Thank you again for bringing these two close. How sweet ? Want to give you hug for that.🤗

Aarti Plz. make Dhaiba stay in mumbai as long as she live. Just request. 😉

Thank you again for your update.😃

thanks gina...😳😳

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Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#684

Originally posted by: sukriti19a
nice one... so u will continue...thats awesome ...

reall dont know...let see if ppl like it... i will continue else will revise my accounts chapter here mere notebooks and pen save ho jayenge...😉

Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago

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Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#685

Originally posted by: Keithuu
Don ek saath kamre mein...yay...
thanx aarti...waitin for more drama...😊

drama 😆mujhe laga u will ask for some kite flying 😉

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Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#686

Originally posted by: Geeshani

I have the same request dear...

thek hai hatao kes-gul lets go ahead with diaba "ek guzari hui love story"

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Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#687

Originally posted by: bioinfo
aarti pls send PB to north pole, amma ne to love story ka pachka kar dala, what is that promise all abt, gullu-kesu saath nahi honge to PB ko planet chod kar jana hoga and long live daiba, i am so in love with her pls bring her a handsome DAIBHA😉wo happy to hum happy and we'll get more kesgul moments and as far as this chappi is concernedso lots and lots of thanks re, waiting for ur next banging chappi.

panba is the real character according to me...i dont know y motabha and panba in the show readily accepted this marriage...its the most natural reaction any mother will give if her 20 year underage son gets married to 25 year old..eventually his bhabhi

dont worry about panba unko hum underwater mein bhi bhej sakte hain humara hi ff hai kuch bhi likh sakte hain😳

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#688

aray wah arti 👏 superb yar yeaaayyy arti aa gayi 🤗 oh arti i know kis state of mind k saath u have written this, hum to arti k kitna peechay par gaye na 😉 arti must be thinking aray y did i start to write the FF 😆 but yar superb superb, n abhi deeyarvattu hua hi tha k gullu ko room men puhancha diya haha superb 👏 fast forward mode men story going on 😉

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sauris

@sauris

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#689

Arti when you have such a good writting talent,why do you want to quit writting.Aree arti keep writing me hoona aur koi ho na ho,mein hamesha tere saath hoon