old FF till chapter 19 - Page 32

Originally posted by: scarletthara

Hey Arti... I am becoming a fan of this FF kesar... he sounds like sooo much naughty... I especially love his dialogues... you give him the best lines... "trespaasers"... 🤣

well, this story is building up so nicely, I can't wait for the next part.. everyday I come online and check to see if the next part is up... and you never disappoint me... keep writing...

Originally posted by: krea

Arti dear,so niceo yaar...luvly n very sweet chappiii just like ur profile pic...so sweet yaar...!!!!!!
Maine socha Vasanthbha ko itni aasani se uper bhejne ki entijam kar lia but u saved him yaar...itni jaldi no...thora twist to hona mangta hai...!!!!
Then i luved the window scene yaar...so touchable scene...!!!!!!
Then i luved the green saree...thanku so much for the green saree...!!!!!
Then i luved the door scene of kesar n gulaal...!!!!
Then Gulaals word actually urs"ye mere aur kesar ke bich ka mamla hai,hamara to rista hi nok jhok ka hai..."
N here comes the Poster"TREespassers NOt ALLOwed"...nic poster n i think those words belongs to TEya or TAlli...!!!!
Wait my fav. Is coming...n here comes my fav.
Piyu mahari O piyari,
Kyu shuku dil paye na,
Tarse Zamin maan ke,
Next chappiii barsawo na,...!!!!!!
To be continued...

Originally posted by: nneeiill

oh wow i loved it arti dear...
its just superb...


revisit of piyu maari...my dil goes mmm mmm

i liked how gulaal said " muje kya pata aap ka bhai aeroplane lekar aayega"\
and then loved Kesar's description of how all the things are ulta pulta..u r really talented...


and yes I agee ...we should post " tresspassers not allowed for this forum"

U dint say na ki gulaal was sitting in front or back seat

i assume front seat😆



Chapter 8 waiting for you...😍

Originally posted by: chweetu

N u want to give vasant role to KSG..na...😆😆😆

Originally posted by: arti07

naa not KSG...the character he played...KSG is good human being and a sucessful actor y should i kill him i dont know him at all... its the character i love to hate...🤗

Originally posted by: chweetu

yaa..wohi hai..na...😆😆..I know..u DMG fans..na.so just got that..I know..that was his role..u r talking..about...😆😆.. me also not a fan of KSG nor Dr.A..n I swear..I never understood that character...😆😆

Originally posted by: chweetu

no uski probs nahi hai cv were complete nutter...we are fortunate... we have best ppl in the industry working for us 👏

Agree...we have really hard working...actors..in our industry👏..n yeah..I followed DMG for a period..but later cos of d storyline..left it...😕..but d actors are to good in DMG..😳

haan yaar i loved kw...and my kesu is tiny winy inspired by him...woh bhi pura nikaama hai...

Originally posted by: arti07

haan yaar i loved kw...and my kesu is tiny winy inspired by him...woh bhi pura nikaama hai...😳😳