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Posted: 14 years ago
kya?
chapter 7 is already there...me running to read it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
@kiran...
hey kiran ki bachchi...where is chapter 7...
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Beautiful chapter, Arti. I loved the detailing u went into wid the traditions and rooms, very gud👏 Is it just me or ne1 thinks dat Kesuda is obsessed wid beer??? Jokes apart, I was thinking since Dushy is a doc here, I hope Vasanth ko bahut hi dardnaak maut na miley.... Waiting for the next chappie and BTW did I tell I luved how cold Kesar was wid Gulaal, kya attitude hai!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Arti jaldi se next chappiii update karo...koi[kiran]yaha pe pagal hue ja raha hai...!!!!!!!use sare nos. Same dikh rahe hai...!!!!!!!!
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Originally posted by: nneeiill

@kiran...

hey kiran ki bachchi...where is chapter 7...




nitya 😳 shorryyy wo chaps likhne men mishtake ho gayi thi 😳 haye haye me shorryyy 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
chapter 7
Gulaal was sad and disappointed she knew that she and kesar were not sharing good vibes it was her first day in in her own house she was suppose to be happy but she was thinking about coldness and uneasiness that prevails wen kesar is around

Gulaal cooked food and served to the family member

Everyone was delighted..diaba and panba gave her compliment that's best food they have tasted

Everyone was there but kesar was in his room as he was not comfortable with the new member

After lunch everyone gave gulaal their blessing and gifts

Gulaal and vasant ate together meanwhile her cousin came for pagphera rasam

She packed her bag vasant enters their room

Vasant " tu tum pakka jaa rahi ho

Gulaal "tradition hai"

Vasant said jaldi aana I will be waiting?..i love u

Gualaal hugged him and takes a leave

Everyone accompanied gulaal and they gave her blessing

Kesar was in his room he knew gulaal wass leaving...he walked towards the window and lifted the curtain and saw gulaal leaving...for a fraction of sec gulaal looked upward kesar quickly dropped the curtain and hide behind and then after few sec lifted up and saw car leaving the premise he stands there for some time and then walked away

Gulaal was in her parent house she is happy but missing vasant

Next morning vasant left for office he did his usual day to day office works..he was sitting in his cabin... he received a call he started talking with the client while moving around and he climbed down the stair for a board meeting suddenly he slipped and tumbled down...and was injured...his colleagues rushed to him and took him to hospital

Kesar who was sitting in his college canteen got the news from one of vasant's colleagues...he was shocked and frightened and he rushed to hospital

In the hospital kesar saw vasantbha lying in the hospital bed...the nurse attending vasant told kesar that he had fracture in his leg bone and his leg is plastered for 15 days

Kesar was tensed and scared vasant looked at him and consoled him he is ok

In evening kesar and his friends took vasant home

Vasant was taking rest in his room aftersometime panba came in his room

She said "tum theek hona"

Vasant said "yes"

Kesar was sitting beside vasant he just wanted to remain with his vasantbha he cant see vasant injured he was in tears

Vasant looked at him and said "waise to bahut strong banta hai aur zara si injury kya ho gayi itna ghabra raha hai"

Kesar in choked voice said "vasantbha aapko pata hai na apko chot lagti hai to bahut takleef hoti hai aap sambhal kar kyu nahi chalte" he was complaining like a kid

Vasant was injured but he was consoling kesar "nahi kuch nahi hua plaster hai 15 din mein uttar jayega"

Panba said "lekin kal gulaal ko lene jaana hai pagphere k rasm hai use humne kuch nahi bataya hai"

Vasant said "ha baa theek kiya aapne par fikr mat kareiye kesar chala jayega"

Kesar said nothing as vasant wish is his command

Next morning kesar got ready to pick gulaal from her parent house

Panba said "ache se lana aur wanha jaakar sabke pair chuna"

Kesar said "kya.pair bhi chone honge"

Panba said "haan"

Kesar left

Gulaal was ready she wore green georgette saree and wore a diamond necklace that vasant has gifted her in her bday...she was looking beautiful as new bride

Suddenly a car stopped infront of her house she thought it to be vasant and she ran to the door

Meanwhile Kesar came out of the car and walked towards the door... gulaal reached the door and at the same time kesar reached the door they almost touch each other both were surprised gulaal who was still breathless looked at kesar with her increase breath and then drew back kesar took a step back gulaal regained herself and then searched vasant and she saw the empty corridor and walked inside disappointly

Kesar was still standing at door silently in few seconds revji came outside he welcomed kesar inside

Gulaal home is small 2 bedroom house build in old fashioned way...its not lavish but a cozy and confortable apartment

Kear sit on the sofa

Revji asked "tum kaise ho aur vasant nahi aaye"

Kesar "ji unhe koi kaam tha" avoiding the actual reason behind it

Gulaal listened whole conversation from her bedroom door she was really upset with vasant

Poonam and gulaal came outside

Poonam said "koi baat nahi beta tum aa gaye ho chalo khana kha k jaana"

Kesar said "nahi mujhe nahi khana aap bus inhe jaldi se vida kar dijiye"

Revji "kuch to kha k jaao safar lamba hai Mumbai travel karne mein 3-4 hrs lagenge"

Kesar said confidently "nahi itna time nahi lagega "

he said "jaldi kijye" and he got a call he went outside and stand outside his car

Poonam was upset.she had made wide variety of dishes for her son in law gulaal looked at her and said" koi baat nahi"

Gulaal took a leave and she headed towards car

Kesar was resting on the car door listening some music in ipod...he looked gulaal coming towards him...she came near and stood quietly kesar looked at her luggage lifted her luggage and kept it in the boot space meanwhile gulaal sat inside the car and locked the door unknowlingly that her pallu was stucked and hanging outside the car door

Kesar after putting her luggage moved ahead and saw her pallu

He looks towards the pallu took a deep breath and then unlock the car door gulaal looked at him...he gave her pallu back...gulaal took it and looked in the other direction

Kesar locked the car door put his sunglasses and walked to the other end and sat inside the car he started driving the car... he drove really fast at 120 km/hr gulaal was scared but didnt speak..Neither of them talked in between

Kear reached home he stopped the car he came out, looked at the watch and said disgustly "oh man I m such a loser mujhe 2 hr 05 min lage mumbai pahunchne mein I m really slow "and he walked in and asked a male servant to take the luggage from the car

Gulaal who was still unconscious and scared with kesar drive normally it takes 3-4 hrs to reach mumbai and he covered the distance in 2 hr?. She was was still nervous but tried to be normal she steps out of the car

Male servant greeted her and informed about vasant fracture

Gulaal was tensed she ran inside the house and reached her room and looked at vasant

She fall into his arms and said vasant "yeh kya ho gaya mujhe aapne bataya kyu nahi"

Vasant said "batata to tum pareshaan ho jaati waise I missed u did u"

Gulaal "baat mat badlo"

Vasant "ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya chodo 15 din mein plaster uttar jayega"

Gulaal was still not convinced but still she nodded her head

Vasant asked" tum itni jaldi kaise aa gayi "

Gulaal mujhe "kya pata tha apka bhai aeroplane lekar aa raha hai nahi to thodhe der aur ruk jaati"

Vasant laughed and said "kesar kya kare iska"

Afert gulaal returned life returned to its daily routine gulaal had build a good rapport with her mother in law and rewa...her manner and skills were appreciated by everyone.. the only person who avoided her was kesar.he was never present before her

Gulaal was cleaning her home.. she stopped at kesar room she entered inside and saw the room is a complete mess..she decided to clean his room it took half an hour to clean his untidy room but finally room was neat and tidy

Gulaal was looking at his room she heard rewa calling gulaal she replied "mein kesar k room mein hu"

Rewa came and saw kesar's room was cleaned

Gulaal is exited and she said "kaisa laga"

Rewa looked tensed "yeh kya kiya aapne"

Gulaal changed her expression "kyu kya hua"

Rewa said "kesar ko bilkul acha nahi lagta uske room ko koi touch kare wo bahut possessive hai apni cheejo ko lekar ab pata nahi who kaise react karega"

Gulaal was also tensed

After some times kesar returned his home he entered his room he looked at his room he was angry he came out of his room and shouted "rewa rewa"

Rewa and gulaal were in kitichen they came out of kitchen

Rewa said "kya hai kyu chilla raha hai"

Kesar angrily said "u alice in wonderland how dare u enter my room kisne kaha tha mere room mein enter karne k liye"

Rewa shouts back "mein nahi gayi gulaal bhabhi ne kamra saaf kiya hai"

Gulaal put her head down

Kesar looked at gulaal and in authorative way said "mujhe pasand nahi hai koi mere room ko touch kare" and he walked away in anger..gulaal stood their silently

Vasant was still resting his leg is fractured and he was regaining slowly

rewa told vasant about kesar behaviour...gulaal enters her room.. vasant looked at her and asked "koi baat hai"

gulaal said "nothing"

vasant said "kesar k attitude se pareshaan ho kaho to main baat karu"

gulaal said "nahi aap mat kijeye yeh mere aur kesar k beech k baa tai mein sambhal lungi...humara to rishta hi nok jhok ka hai haina..she said it to convince vasant as she didnt wanted to worsen the situation

vasant smiled and said "theek hai"

In eveining vasant walked slowly with the help of a stick to kesar's room

kesar who was still angry saw vasntbha and offered him chair

vasant said "kesar"

kesar said politely "bha lecture mat dijyega plz... meine nahi kaha tha mera room saaf karo aur mujhse mat kehna mein sorry bolo" kesar is always childlike infront of vasant

vasant smiled he said "par mein yeh sab kehna nahi aya"

kesar "phir kya"

vasant said "kesar ab yeh room dekh yeh kitna saaf hai rehne layak hai to aise kyu nahi rehta"

keasr replied back" nahi yeh room ab complete mess hai koi cheez apne jagah par nahi hai"

vasant said "kaise"

kesar mein "apne shoes aakar bed k pass pehkta hun aur ab wo shoe rack mein hai mera squash racket bed par rehta hai ab wo cupboard mein hai aur meri keys meri study table k pass hoti hai aura b yeh key holder mein hai sab ulta pulta hai"

vasant smiled and said "sab theek kehte hai tujhe meine hi bigada hai"

kesar" haa woh to hai "and he hugged vasant...vasant came there to discuss about gulaal but couldn't as kesar is too innocent infront of him he thought not to interfere

in the evening gulaal is walking in the house suddenly she stopped outside kesar room...kesar was standing infront of his door he was pasting something he turned back looked at her and closed the door...he then left the house to meet his friends

gulaal looked at the poster its written "Tresspasser not allowed"

gulaal couldn't resist but to smile

kesar and his friend hit the disco thek...everyone was dancing tiya also accompanied them.kesar was dancing...one girl came near and asked for a dance kesar didn't refuse and danced with her...tiya was watching this she was annoyed and decided to leave

she said to kesar "kesar mein jaa rahi hun"

kesr said "thek hai jao"

tiya said "mein sach mein jaa rahi hun"

kesar replied " to sach mein jao na"

tiya said "u don't love me "

kesar " what "

tiya "haan u always avoid me u never think of me aur tumhare saath hamesha tumhare frns hote hain we never have any privacy"

kesar was disgisted with her usual tantrums he sai ?."par tum mujhse kyu expect karti ho ko 24 hrs tumhare bare mein socho koi kisi k bare mein 24 ghante kaise soch sakta hai"

tiya said "sirf tab nahi soch sakta jab use pyaar na ho :and she left

kesar was confused he just said "gals"

kesar and tiya are in relationship since two months they are considered as hottest couple in the college but actually there is no bonding no chemistry between the two?..tiya liked kesar as he is heartthrob of college and kesar chose her as she is talk of the town?.they are infuatuated but they don't love each other

kesar returned home at midnight...gulaal was in her kitchen she was cleaning the kitchen and preparing some ingredients for the morning breakfast...kesar was tired he reached his room he looked at guitar he wanted to play it so he took the guitar and reached the swimming pool outside his house...kesar liked sitting besides the swimming pool...he took off his shoes he folded his jeans to knees and dip his leg in the water and started playing "piyu maari" tune in the guitar

gulaal who has just finished kitchen work and was switching off the light heard the tune...she was already connected to this tune...her soul was connected to the string of his guitar... kesar started singing slowly

piyu maari o piyaari.

Kyu suku dil paaye naa

Tarase zammen man ki

Saawan barsao naa

Piyu maari o piyaari

Gulaal was thrilled to hear the song...she cant resist herself to find the person singing the song kesr was still singing gulaal was searching him and finally she reached the swimming pool area kesar was still singing the song with closed eyes hear the sound of payyal and opened his eyes and stopped...he turned back and saw gulaal standing

gulaal was astonished to find the truth...the song the tune the voice that took her breath her heartbeat away was actually kesar's

for a sec she remained silent...kesar got up unfolded his jeans wore his shoes and took the guitar in his shoulder and started walking

as kesar walked away from her... gulaal in low voice said "nice song"

kesar stopped but didn't turned around he just walked away from her...leaving gulaal astonished surprised and in deep thought

Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow..Aarti..just an amazing chapter.👏👏.full of...repairing d things..n resulting...d Gulaal's pull towards..kesu..n vasantba..ka fracture...🤣...woh standby hai...kya...😆😆😆..in dono ke beech mein...but loved d comic punches..by Gullu..(aeroplane..😆😆)..n mending friendship between...kesu n gullu..n woh gf..talli hai..kya...😆😆😆...great chapter Aarti..loved it...😳
Edited by chweetu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chweetu

res...😆😆😆..will come back..n comment..🤣

hey bhagwaan i didnt even edited my post and u are here...😆🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

hey bhagwaan i didnt even edited my post and u are here...😆🤗



Aarti...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
This was the best chappie...its becoming more and more interseting. Keep dem coming Arti!

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