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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: arti07

*darte darte*

sardar kar diya ...read it with gun down and dont shoot mein apki post par comment kiya hai

Oye hoye Arti.🥳..OMG I loved chapter 4 ⭐️...what an official introduction👏👏👏...Mogambo khush hua...😉

Piu seriously calls all Wicked Gang members and other fellow Gulaalians to join hands in this noble cause...so that we get the immense pleasure reading of Arti's FF chapter4,5,6,7 this weekend...Lets make it a point to eat Arti's head so that she starts caring for our bhavnas😆

To start with lets launch our NEXT CAMPAIGN

CHAPTER 4 PADHKAR DIL MARNE LAGA HAI PYAAR K SAAGAR MEIN DIVE

ARTI WEEKEND BONUS HUMEIN AB PLS DE DONA CHAPTER NO FIVE😳

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prachurya

@prachurya

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#202

OMG! U got me imagining the bike wala scene completely...brilliant dialogues sab ke thee...she threatens him varna aur zordaar thappad marungi...🤣 Uske alawa kucch aata hai madam ko???, another fav dialogue was mujhe bewajah thappad khaana pasand nahi...ROFLMAO!!🤣

That reminds me of a song...Thappad k sanam tujhe humne mohabbat ka khuda maana...

Plzzz try n update chapter 5 quick, its a request.

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Geeshu

@Geeshu

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#203

Thank u thank u Arti...Wow I like this chapter so much..

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He reaches his room and remember gulaal hitting him he loses his temper and throw his pillows and books in frustration and he hastly startspunching his punching bag remembering slap at each punch and the his anger grew in each punch : So gullu ki punching bag has a punching bag...👏...Great yaar...😆

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"Vicky tu mujhe yeh mat bata k tum log ek ladki ko Mumbai saher mein nahi dhoodh sakte ??..i told u I want that girl and I m damm serious" : Oops kya start hai...He wants Gulaal...😍...Now i'm dreaming about future of this story...

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"nahi madam itne asani se nahi kal tumne bina baat par thapad maara tha ?.tumhari frn galat direction mein thi aur tumne phir bhi mujhe thapad maara mujhe bina baat par thapad khaana pasand nahi hai" hehehehh...poor kesar...Mujhe uska future nazar aarahi hai

kesar "who r u to decide ki mein galat that ya tum aur mujhe thapad marne k right tumhe kisne diya now apologize aur jao" Hmmm I think this Kesar(ff) will manage Gulaal's future slaps better than original Kesar ...😳

"2 min deti hun mera raasta chodo nahi to is baar use bhi tez thapad padega": This is the same Gullu we already knew...

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gulaal was manging her precious and heavy lehenga her head was down kesar looks at her and gives his hand and say "welcome meri duniya mein aapka swagat hai"...😍...I love this line sooo much

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Thanks Arti i'm waiting here for ur next chapter...😍

Edited by Geeshani - 14 years ago

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krea

@krea

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#204

Arti...JUSt WOw...!!!!!!
N kesar in white serwani o my my...i can imagine yaar kesar in white serwani...lucking damn hot...damn cute...!!!!!!
N gulaal in lehnga...so beautiful... N vasanth in black...smart...!!!!!
Arti yaar...i luved it...!!!!!!
N finally we want next chapiii with bonus chapiii for this weekend...!!!!
So just go for that we r with u...!!!!Go Arti...!!!!!

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sauris

@sauris

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#205

Hey Arti You have written really good episodes,But beware some one might steal your idea to make a new serial.Really your story is too good,👍🏼

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: sauris
Hey Arti You have written really good episodes,But beware some one might steal your idea to make a new serial.Really your story is too good,👍🏼

he he he star plus 2000000 gulaal audience hone k baad bhi show band karne ke warning dete rehti hai my ff is liked by 20-30 members probability is like .00000000009 %😳

thanks for appreciating

Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: prachurya
OMG! U got me imagining the bike wala scene completely...brilliant dialogues sab ke thee...she threatens him varna aur zordaar thappad marungi...🤣 Uske alawa kucch aata hai madam ko???, another fav dialogue was mujhe bewajah thappad khaana pasand nahi...ROFLMAO!!🤣
That reminds me of a song...Thappad k sanam tujhe humne mohabbat ka khuda maana...
Plzzz try n update chapter 5 quick, its a request.

ya thinking to put some songs also ...thanks will update soon

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: nneeiill
OmG arti ka kesar tho bohut gussa wala hain...😆

loved chapter 4..

but ye dil maange more..now waiting for chapter 5...

we want bonus on weekends...

yaa we love kesu for his arrogance naa if vasantbha k tarah sharrif rehta i would have get eggs for sure