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Originally posted by: Geeshani

LOL...😆...I love ur FF dear...

Kesar and gulaal are in corridor and they passes without seeing each other kesar walks away and in joyous mood whistles piya maari o piyaari tune: this scene reminds me Dilwale dulhaniya lejayenge...

"kitne boring lovestroy hai lovestory to tab great hoti hai jab thodi nokjhok ho zid ho paagalpan ho denial obseesion ho passion ho ?har ladki k great lovestory to hone hi chahiye right tammy"... :😆You got it...Haa yaar it was a boring love story(Vasant & Gulaal)😆

Kesar "ghabraiye nahi woh bhi poke beef venison apke kitchen mein nahi banayegi hum log uske liye alag se kitchen build kar denge aur woh sharab bilkul chod degi bas kabhi kabhi wine pee legi"

aur baa mini skirt to pehen hi legi ?..shayad??.. bus aap haan kar do"___________: WOW I totally love this scene...soo funny...hahaha Brazilian girl friend..."Bahut cute hai".🤣 🤣

She came near and slapped kesar really hard and said " tum bade baap k bigadi hui ladke apne aap ko samjhte kya ho ek to uska khoon bah raha hai maafi mangna to door ulta chila rahe ho u ppl are disgusting" : Yehh...first slap...🥳...Now tell me how many slaps are waiting for Kesar...🤢

I can't wait for ur next chapter......OMG i'm addicted to read ur ff...😍

Thanks Arti...

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Arti baby⭐️..you're lovely👏...chapter2 is too good👏...love how you've potrayed Kesar.😳...3rd part jaldi chahiye.😉.varna bhuk hartal...panchayat ka sahara lungi...panchayat k members WICKED GANG honge😆

Originally posted by: NivRen_1

Thanks for this. It is brilliant i loved it especiallythe dupatta scene. Cant wait for the 3rd chapter.

Originally posted by: prachurya

Plzzz Plzzz Plzzz update...I love the 2 chappies...Brilliant arti 👏

Originally posted by: scarletthara

Great FF... wow, I was impressed with the completely different setting and background of the story... yet the characters retain their personality and the bondings... I like it very much... continue on plzzz...

Originally posted by: docnuss

🤗arti such a sweet n nyc FF u ve wrote,,,,,but sad i ws nt aware of it!!!!!

oh MODI's such a familiar surname u ve given to ths family!!!!😉😆

chapter 1...

awsome start gal...😳

luvd d way u ve sketched d scene b/w kes-gul!!!!!kesuda throwing gulaal on gullu before any 1 else,,,,☺️ "yeh sindoor kanha se lagva liya "😍

chapter 2...

ohhh kesar is a rockstar!!!!!😳

hw u try to put gulaal's feeling during dat song is simply commendable...both wer connecting to each other sum how!!!!☺️

all in all both chapters wer awsome...cont soon,,,,,i luv ur simple writing style!!!!!😳

Originally posted by: sukriti19a

Arti dear ... plz update soon waiting 4 more...

Originally posted by: sharneil92

eh lo. all i get from arty barty is a mere

I LOVE YOU.

😡

edit - on second thoughts.. i shall forgive you cos the second chapter is AWESOME!👏😳

Originally posted by: krea

Arti...i love u yaar...awsome,so beautiful...i luved the pyaar between paanba,vasanth,kesar n rewa...it was so beautiful...what can i say yaar i luved the whole words in ur post...keep it up...!!!!!n lastly i will wait for the 3rd chapter please bring that as fast as u can...m waiting...!!!!!