old FF till chapter 19 - Page 117

Originally posted by: Yash141

Waha waha Artii...
Kahaani kya likhai...👍🏼
Gullu aur Kesu ko..
Badhai ho badhaai...

Oh Arti pls dnt stop abruptly, yaar.. I can understand ke it could become a bit boring.. But dnt stop it without a great ending..pls.. This story is too good to be stopped just like that...

Originally posted by: bioinfo

aart aarti mai kar rahi hun dance , kya writing ishtyle hai aur kya mast hai romance.

hai yaar i am i love with ur kesar- he's so romantic👏

i am in love with ur gulaal-she's so beautiful 👏

i am in love with ur ff- its so touching 👏

i am in love with u- u are so creative.👏

now dear kabhi ff likhna mat chodna never😡

pls pls pls likhti rehna, forever and ever and ever.😃

wow kya chappi tha, me still not back to my senses u made be mad😳

reading this chappi was an out of this world experience 😳

thank u thanku, next chappi jaldi la tu😳

Originally posted by: kreas

@Arti
Kya Chappiii lekh dala tune
Aur sath me pyara gana bhi dala
Wah wah wah
Tune to gullu ke balo se bhi khel dala
Aur to aur gullu ko dher sare white lillies bhi de dala...!!!!!

Aarti ki bhavana ki kasam...i'll never post any ghatiya shair in Arti's ff thread...😳

pplz dont say that you lost your interest in your FF. Its amazing. Yeah i can understand it is difficult to cook up a story that too part by part, you have to spend a lot of time etc etc.. but you have a huge fan following including me, and we are following it like a daily and now a days whenever you update it equally I get curious on how many days I must wait to get the next one. It does hold me tightly to the chair. plz continue😊

Originally posted by: uniquebie

eventough it is predictable, nice kichdi , old wine in new bottle it is fun n entertaining FF to read nice attempt 👏😊

Geesh tune ye kya kah dala
Hum to ho jaiyenge berozgar
Peche peche dauregi Gulaal parivar
Karne ko lathicharge...!!!!!

Have to admit that I love it when they argue more than when they act all lovey dovey.

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Ghatiya shayars...Sarvaneee ne meri ankhein khol di..😲.

Note -this is my last shyari on Arti's FF😭

Humne kesu ki tarah..kha liya arti ka sar😡

Kaha chappi de na chappi dena..jaldi kar😭

Itna ki wo forum leave kar bhag gyi apne ghar(like gullu)

Picha humne bhi kiya uska wahan bhi🤢

roye chillaye aur kaha arti tu kahan thi😡

par mil gaya mujhe sarvanee(Talli avataar) se maha gyaan

pyaar selfish nahin..wo mangta hai balidaan😳

so maine kiya hai decide..nahi karungi FF pe ghatiya shayari recite

Dungi kewal Arti ko sacha pyaar aur dulaar😳

pakaungi 🤢nahi karungi bas satkaar👏

badle mein mangungi nahi kuch😳

wada karti hun...sach much🤣

Tabhi wo anjaane mein degi Naye chappi ka uphaar😉

sorry arti for overdose of obsession🤢

par we still absolutely love your creation🤗

waiting eagerly for next chappi plllz😍

jaldi se lao chappi no bees😆

Baki sabhi shyaron se namra nivedan hai k kripya ghatiya shayari..mahfile mushaira tak seemit rakhe..yahaan barsaye kewal arti par pyar...kasam khao..Arti k FF thread ko nahi sadaoge yaar.

Tabhi use Apne FF se phir se ho jayega pyaar😳

Originally posted by: alanta

pplz dont say that you lost your interest in your FF. Its amazing. Yeah i can understand it is difficult to cook up a story that too part by part, you have to spend a lot of time etc etc.. but you have a huge fan following including me, and we are following it like a daily and now a days whenever you update it equally I get curious on how many days I must wait to get the next one. It does hold me tightly to the chair. plz continue😊