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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Gulaalfreak

Have to admit that I love it when they argue more than when they act all lovey dovey.

thanks 😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow arti dear..loved the chappi like anything
wohooo kya unique idea nikaal kesarji ne gulaal ke liye
gulaal se jyaada tho mai impress ho gayi😆
and u put khulle baal waale scene..☺️
the way gulaal brought her hands to Kesar...OMG she is alreay drawing towards him
am loving this build up
please continue
pls do not mind our blabbering..and take ur own sweet time to publish chappi..we dont wanaa lost it...
ok back to paakau mode
chahiye mujhe chappi 20 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you Aarti for another lovely chapter, it was not romantic but the chapter has strengthen their bond and rapport between each other. They are really acting like true frens. Sharing other pain, cheering other person, joking, chasing etc.

You have hung all shaayar on other thread, wat an idea sir ji.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nneeiill

wow arti dear..loved the chappi like anything

wohooo kya unique idea nikaal kesarji ne gulaal ke liye
gulaal se jyaada tho mai impress ho gayi😆
and u put khulle baal waale scene..☺️
the way gulaal brought her hands to Kesar...OMG she is alreay drawing towards him
am loving this build up
please continue
pls do not mind our blabbering..and take ur own sweet time to publish chappi..we dont wanaa lost it...
ok back to paakau mode
chahiye mujhe chappi 20 😆

thanks neil dear ! anything for nithya😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Gman

Thank you Aarti for another lovely chapter, it was not romantic but the chapter has strengthen their bond and rapport between each other. They are really acting like true frens. Sharing other pain, cheering other person, joking, chasing etc.


You have hung all shaayar on other thread, wat an idea sir ji.😉

gina thanks...this chappi was about gulaal moving out of vasant memories...it was coming out of her gloominess and sadness...
thanks gina for liking and ya shayyar has to tie up somewhere😳 so tied in that thread
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Ghatiya shayars...Sarvaneee ne meri ankhein khol di..😲.

Note -this is my last shyari on Arti's FF😭

Humne kesu ki tarah..kha liya arti ka sar😡

Kaha chappi de na chappi dena..jaldi kar😭

Itna ki wo forum leave kar bhag gyi apne ghar(like gullu)

Picha humne bhi kiya uska wahan bhi🤢

roye chillaye aur kaha arti tu kahan thi😡

par mil gaya mujhe sarvanee(Talli avataar) se maha gyaan

pyaar selfish nahin..wo mangta hai balidaan😳

so maine kiya hai decide..nahi karungi FF pe ghatiya shayari recite

Dungi kewal Arti ko sacha pyaar aur dulaar😳

pakaungi 🤢nahi karungi bas satkaar👏

badle mein mangungi nahi kuch😳

wada karti hun...sach much🤣

Tabhi wo anjaane mein degi Naye chappi ka uphaar😉

sorry arti for overdose of obsession🤢

par we still absolutely love your creation🤗

waiting eagerly for next chappi plllz😍

jaldi se lao chappi no bees😆


Baki sabhi shyaron se namra nivedan hai k kripya ghatiya shayari..mahfile mushaira tak seemit rakhe..yahaan barsaye kewal arti par pyar...kasam khao..Arti k FF thread ko nahi sadaoge yaar.

Tabhi use Apne FF se phir se ho jayega pyaar😳



hain piyu, ur last shairi 😲 oh no yeh kya hui gava 😲
ok me bhi not doing more shairi in FF
mehfil e emushaira men vl eat sab k head 😆
n u also piyu, wahan jaari rakhen ge hum apna ghatiya shairi club 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 19 updated... yey !!! will be back after a while to read..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

thanks kiran nowadays romantic movies are so boring...i even dont remember which was the last movie i enjoyed thoroughly...
and the song is one of my fav song ...quite emotional... i always imagined someday gulaal will make rohan sleep and kesar will stand outside watching her in the similar manner...


han yar yeh toh u r so right, nowadays what they show, what they want to show kuch samajh nahi ata, aj kal ki movies toh normally i dont like 😕 oh its such a sweet song, obviously i heard it from u only but i have started to like it so much 😳 n i can also imagine it, oh what a scene it would have been 😍 but...


n arti i think u vl have to shift the FF to new thread, its on 153rd page now, 150 pages toh ho gaye...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

Chapter 19

Next morning gulaal was silent '.she was thinking about vasant she was not moarning but she was sad ''..Her heart was in one piece but the emptiness and the hollowness was still there she was sad in the way she hadn't feel before'she was feeling low, worn out and depressed'she didn't felt like working but she had important work at hospital so she quietly left for hospital'''.
Yes the silence is evident..loosing someone with whom you had dreamt of spending your life is extremely painful...no amount of sympathy can compensate for this loss..void cannot be filled so easily

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"That is the most beautiful smile I have ever seen"

he looked at her 'them he explained to her in sign language''. "That is the most beautiful smile I have ever seen", not that u saw in the picture that one which is on ur face right now'..keep smiling"'.he explained her and with a sweet smile bid adieu'..

That was one whoosy whoosy scene thank you dear for remembering my request..😳.You are such a sweet heart...brat turned lover boy😳..so loving this.brilliant👏

gulaal was speechless she was happy''and all the day she did what kesar has told her'smile''she smile wen she saw the patient taken care by their friends and relatives outside her cabin'she smiled as she walked inside the children's ward seeing the children refusing to take medicine and nurses struggling to make them take their medicine'she smiled looking at her junior staff having a gala time at canteen'

🤣you made me remember my hospital.normally I get nightmares about work specially when I am on leave😆.bravo..these activities exactly occur in the hospital...brilliant girl good obs👏



.in the afternoon she travelled back home' she looked out of the window of the taxi as it passed the bandra worli sea link 'the scenic was splendid'the sky was clear'wind blew gently and the sunrays hit the still water of the ocean and twinkled like the thousand christimas light on the surface'.gulaal was watching the sea'the sea in which the river merges '.her form her consiousness her individuality is lost in the sea'..there is no particular existence of her'sometimes wonder y the river wants to loose herself her identity in sea..But then is sea different from the river? From whence the river comes'. it surely comes from the sea'and as it merges with sea it doesnt merge with stranger but with itself its true existence is sea...it flows to sea to attain the oneness and immortality'gulaal was looking at the sea thoughtlfully

This scene is sooo beautiful..It was as if I closed my eyes and just crossed the sea link..Omg I am so mesmerised..by the beauty of the mumbai beaches and sea...I am nostalgic now...Thanks for taking me back there😳And the comparison was awesome...I think you too have split personality like Nithyaa..errr Neil. you crack the funniest jokes and also at the same time write such meaningful stuff...Jzee dekh na Arti has the best of talents...

Kabhi govinda to kabhi Yash chopra😳


Kesar came there'.he gently took the baby bird in his hand and climbed the tree and he put back the baby bird into her nest'.


Gulaal smiled and said "haan shayyad kesar dusaro ko khushi dene ki k aadat hai"

Ohho//owww the chotu bacha puts chidiya ka bacha back in the nest..That was shooo shweet...He will make a cosy nest for Gullu and put her in that...haan😛


He then looked into her eyes and said "thanks plz sorry se rishte banaye jaate hain''par wo majboot tab hote hain jab hume inhe kahne k jarurat hi naa pade"

Devi.👏😳..apke charan kahan hai.😲..*Bows and salutes arti*👏...ha ha..itna acha kaise likhte ho⭐️..such a meaningful thought..jhoothi kahin ki don't give us false news that you sleep during romantic movies.😡..you are such a hopeless romantic.😛.loved the lines⭐️

Gulaal retorted "gulaal"

Kesar replied "doctor"

And he went away

Hai hai...bacha has become a bimaar...doctor kuch to ilaaj karo iska😆

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Gulaal complained "dekho na rewa mera sketch kah kar billi ka sketch banaya hai"

Kesar was smiling he playfully said "arey maine to tumhara hi sketch banaya hai'ab mein kya karu agar tum billi jaisi dekhti ho"

Hain bole to ye kya kiya Arti.😲..I thought Talli was a bhukhi billi.🤣.tune gullu ka sketch hi billi jaisa banwa diya..bole to ye Talli billi k fans k saath nainsaafi hai...Talli billi bhajiya khao..apni bhuk mitao gang kahan ho..dekho Arti ne kya kiya😕

they were opened and slid on her face and over her shoulder'..gulaal always fastened her hair with rubber band but today her beautiful hairs were free and careless they slid over her face and gust of wind as her hair opened flowed right through Kesar...wind blew sunrays fell on gulaal and she was smiling' trying to hold her breath and manage her hair and kesar couldn't takes his eyes for her he was smitten by her'he looket her with his increased breath'but then he quickly colleced himself and started walking'.

Before leaving he said to gulaal "waise khule baalon mein tum billi nahi lagti"

Gulaal looked back and asked carelessly "kya"

Kesar blushed and said in low voice without seeing her "achi lagti ho"

Ahem ahem..Khule baal Kesu floored...


Oh finally the lori scene*speechless*.⭐️..Bole to kaise aate hain dimaag mein itne ache ideas..😕..Bravo Keep up the good work..brillliant..next chappi pls Jaldi lana🤗..dekh I have stopped Arti ko pakao mission...Kesu ki tarah.😳.main bhi achi ban gayi..maan ja na,,can't wait😍

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Posted: 14 years ago

Arti humara naiya chappiii kab aayega...????

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