DS-Gulsar:-Wahin Bathein2 part2onpg49NotePg50 - Page 35

res..😭pata nahi kab unres kar paungi😭

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Awww Alanta that was such a cute and dreamy Ds 😍Awww Acha Bacha Kesu😆..Ab tera hum kya karein...😆and Kesu is such a natakbaaz always na..😉.Biwi ka pallu nahi chod sakta..Awww Me kya khaun yaar it was such a romantic nad super cute one..Thanks Sharmishta for the wonderful request.Alanta🤗 ..I am so glad that you are back and with such a beautiful bang..👏Kesu boy is really cute..yaar..Biwi itni hints de rahi hai phir bhi dimag ki batti nahi jalti🤣

Thanks ...for the DS...I want more yaar🤗

Originally posted by: minizz

Alantaji,really are you saying this is not romantic😡This was so,so romantic.I had a dreamy smile through out the chapter.loved everything about it.The way Kesar gets all tensed up when MB says to Gulaal that she can stay in her maayka for a couple of days and the joy he feels when he realizes that MB wants him to go along.The return of the dramebaaz Kesar when he says that he won't be able to go because of the karkhana work😆l really loved the different expressions of Kesar.I could actually imagine Neil doing all of that.

The interaction between GK at Rashipur was so sweet and very romantic😳You have beautifully portrayed the period when the love is there yet there is that sweet hesitation.The mandir incident was interwoven nicely.Kesar teasing Gulaal and her answer to his question awww...very beautiful and I can see it happening on the show.

The khaat and farsh pe sonaa debate-that was funny yet very endearing.Gullu is now full on flirting na😳bechara Kesar kitna sharma raha hoga😆

my fav dialogues

Gullu saying "...aur tu haath mein haath daalkar baitha rahe aise mein toh tu mera Kesar nahi ho sakta na"She knows her Kesar well and this also showws that she loves him the way he is😳

and Kesar's "ab toh main acha bacha hoon na"🤣this just cracked me up😆

Thank you Sharmishta for requesting this scene😃

I want more scenes from you now.so please update soon🤗

Originally posted by: sharmishta

aww, alanta i'm on cloud nine... i'm nt gettn d rght wrds 2 express vat i'm feeln nw... nvr in my life vil i frgt dis cnsidrtn you hav bestowd on me... so happy, a mere thanks wn't be enough 4 vat u hav dne 4 me... u r such a swtheart... a cutie pie...
🤗❤️❤️
❤️🤗
This isn't a thank you note,
It's a hug with lots of luv ...😳

Originally posted by: MR21

Alanta...mein bhi res karthi hoon 😳...but i may be very late in unresing it 😭

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Alanta...just loved it yaar...

kesar's disappointment that he has to stay away from gulaal for couple of days..his excitement when mb ask him to go with gulaal..arey kithna bhaav khaatha hai..saying that he is busy with work...hmmm kesar n his nautanki..

kesar n his anger...just loved the convo between them 😳...kesar n achcha bachcha 🤣..loved the way gulaal said that if he is not angry then he will be not her kesar...as she said...she always knew it..but she never accepted it...bachaara ab bhi florr par s raha hai...it has to be gulaal who have to take that initiation...atlast she is successful to make him sleep on bed...

Alanta...me waiting for the next one already 😍

Originally posted by: bioinfo

wow lovely DS alanta u brought back so many memories , loved it and yes i agree with minni that accha baccha thing was so cute :)

Originally posted by: enchanted23

Alanta wow what a return😳 Garajthe badalo ke sath wah wah👏

Loved the reflection of Gulaal's thoughts intewoven with situations in past and present,brilliantly presented,I loved that raising of the bike which was always to draw her attention,this time lovingly I guess...beautiful piece Alanta but what else we can expect from you...

And this visit to Rashipur was ever so sweet, with bratty and naughty Kesu who wouldn't voulnteer to go initially although all he wanted was to be with her, work huh Dushyant Bha hai na and the relief he feels when MB asks him to go,oh my heart really went out to him then...Head I win,Tails you lose...typical...😊

Loved the parallel you have written to that mandir scene and accha baccha😆 ... rahega to woh baccha hi na,wife ke sath bed bhi share nahi kar sakta🤣 Really loved how you made Gullu take that first step,after all samjana to usse hi tha na, bacche ne to kabhi woh biologu ki kitab kholi bhi nahi hogi😉

Alanta brilliantly written yaar,waiting for your next update😍

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

res..😭pata nahi kab unres kar paungi😭

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Awww Alanta that was such a cute and dreamy Ds 😍Awww Acha Bacha Kesu😆..Ab tera hum kya karein...😆and Kesu is such a natakbaaz always na..😉.Biwi ka pallu nahi chod sakta..Awww Me kya khaun yaar it was such a romantic nad super cute one..Thanks Sharmishta for the wonderful request.Alanta🤗 ..I am so glad that you are back and with such a beautiful bang..👏Kesu boy is really cute..yaar..Biwi itni hints de rahi hai phir bhi dimag ki batti nahi jalti🤣

Thanks ...for the DS...I want more yaar🤗