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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
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pehle to ye le Alanta🤗..see me not crying.😃.now..yipee that was such a cute and happy ending.👏.very very very cute and sweet..😍yipee keithu tera kajuda ayega re..😆..Alanta..pls start the new series ASAP😳..pls .😛..that was one beautiful ending👏👏

Happy to see your smile and thanks a lot..series ka tho patha nahin..lekin ek bahut hi chotta sa story hein mann mein..but I am in double minds regarding uploading it..Thanks once again...and return hugs🤗

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: Savz_uniqueblis
nice series,climax well written.thanks for giving them 😊.hope u come up with new one soon 😳

Thank u so much

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent
wow wow wow alanta lovely yaar 👏, loved both the updates 😃, the debt of a decade n the recent one, lovely yaar, i loved them, u have written so so well, wow yar aisi ending honi chahiye thi serial men, it seems so logical but ahhh star plus 🤢 n hey u have ended it 😲 y yar 😕 u have been writing fantastic then y ended it, yar u people write so good masha ALLAH, n i feel like watching the scene in front of me, superb work dear uptill now 😃 n by the way yeh toh bata k anay wala kajuda hai k kajudi 😆

I am so so so glad that u liked it..and also I am very delighted to see you here in this last update too, because you were the one of those who commented first on this thread..😳 and Kajuda and Kajudi..well decide your self..what about twins😛

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: Kesar04
wow alanta bacha bhi aanewala kyun why do you have to end this now i wanted to imagine how kesar would be as a father and take care of his young
very good alanta
hope you come up with another soon 😛

Thank u so much Kesar 4 ur lovely comments...😳

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: arti07
what a lovely end to this beautiful DS loved it alanta i loved how u put everything in words and gave the proper ending to the DS...thanks for sharing this lovely DS with us

I am so happy to see u here again😊 and glad that u liked the entire series...Thank u so much dear😳

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: prachurya
Aarey yaar Saru Fui ko bhi include kar deti😆
Aakhir kaar kajuda or chhota kesu aa hi gaya!
I loved how Gulaal broke the news!
Plz to write some more random scenes. I love reading ur writing

For there is no SF only Daiba..I always believed that the character of SF was included just for the sake..finally she too joined the chudails na...but I always liked Daiba...😳

THank u so much dear and for your constant inspiration

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: sauris
Now this is what i call as an abt ending,happy ever after.Really well written.why dont you write a new ff,i know you will do wonders

Thank u so much dear..and glad that u liked it