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Sree

@Katyayani_devi

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#301

nice series,climax well written.thanks for giving them 😊.hope u come up with new one soon 😳

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

wow wow wow alanta lovely yaar 👏, loved both the updates 😃, the debt of a decade n the recent one, lovely yaar, i loved them, u have written so so well, wow yar aisi ending honi chahiye thi serial men, it seems so logical but ahhh star plus 🤢 n hey u have ended it 😲 y yar 😕 u have been writing fantastic then y ended it, yar u people write so good masha ALLAH, n i feel like watching the scene in front of me, superb work dear uptill now 😃 n by the way yeh toh bata k anay wala kajuda hai k kajudi 😆

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Faryal-Makhdoom

@Faryal-Makhdoom

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#303

wow alanta bacha bhi aanewala kyun why do you have to end this now i wanted to imagine how kesar would be as a father and take care of his young

very good alanta

hope you come up with another soon 😛

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

what a lovely end to this beautiful DS loved it alanta i loved how u put everything in words and gave the proper ending to the DS...thanks for sharing this lovely DS with us

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prachurya

@prachurya

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#305

Aarey yaar Saru Fui ko bhi include kar deti😆

Aakhir kaar kajuda or chhota kesu aa hi gaya!

I loved how Gulaal broke the news!

Plz to write some more random scenes. I love reading ur writing

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Keithuu

@Keithuu

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

unreswa on pg 40...

piu...kiranwa...dekh..mera kajuda aanewala hai...main khushi se pagal hoing...

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sauris

@sauris

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#307

Now this is what i call as an abt ending,happy ever after.Really well written.why dont you write a new ff,i know you will do wonders

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: MR21
res res

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Alanta...such a lovely update...all the ladies teasing him...n ofcourse the scene between kesar n gulaal...ohh me loved it yaar...
So..SF ki aakhri ichcha poori hui...magar where is she...uski 500 acre ka vaaris will soon arrive...

Such a lovely end...i just hope that you continue writing abt GulSar...well let me knew if you update...

Meri DS pe no SF...only Daiba😳..and as usual she went to pilgrimage..😆

Thank u so much yaar Remya

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: Keithuu
yaar..main idhar hi both reswas unres karun..?.kyunki main apne saare res ko dhoondte dhoondte thak gai...
ur ds is too good..Thanks.main kya bataun...ab jaake complete hua gulaal...😳 kaash ye sab serial mein hota...😳u actually made me feel better...😳Glad to hear gulaal ko aise hi end hona tha...but aisa hua nahi...😭
sab kuch theek hua...dushy mar gaya...😭 but accha hi hua...guilt mein jeene se tho accha hai ki mar gaya...😭wahin tho mein bhi soch rahi dhi
n last part tho...m fida yaar...😳😳
mera kajuda aanewala hai...🥳 mujhe tho iss ds mein saj dhajke aana tha...☺️blushing queen😉
yeaayyy...me so happy...
just lubbd ur ds...😳 it was really beautiful...😳 taaliyaan...👏
haan...kabhi kabhi update kiya kar...kuch bhi chalega...par tu likhna zarur...😳
finally maine unreswa kiya...🥳

At last u unresed🥳

Thank you so much kirthi..will surely let you know if I update

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: minizz

Thanks a lot Atlanta for the lovely present😊.I really enjoyed it a lot.This was exactly what I wanted.and whenever you write anything new I will there to read it promptly😊

Thank u so much dear for your lovely comments

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