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Posted: 13 years ago
omg i missed it😭 thanks alot for pm😳😳😳 plz pm me if u update next chapii😛
abhi k liye res me running to read it😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
res waalon plz unres asap
tharaz gaye naina
comments barasao na😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

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Alanta...loved the name 'Kavach' for this update...
Very well going on events which are left unaddressed in the show...reasons for yogesh senseless behavior towards evryone especially kesar is so well addressed in this...loved how gulaal supported kesar even though she is unaware abt the issue...n also the way kesar changed his mood to make her come out of her upset mood...n loved loved the paratha scene..he feeding her😳...n they sharing the same plate😳...looks like we would have a full on kesar n gulaal scene in next update as kesar thought something to change her mood now😉...

Remya Glad that u liked it, I was really confused why they didnt disclose it so socha mein hi disclose karthi hun apne thareekhe se😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prachurya

Very nicely written. I always feel like I am watching Gulaal from where it ended.Luved how u brought out Yogesh's issue and Kesar handled it so maturely. I loved how Gulaal stood for Kesar not even knowing wat the reason was bcoz this is xactly wat Kesar had done for her(Title Kavach was well thought out).Plzzz kabhi kabhi mahaepisode bhi likh le naaa...😳

Thank u Prachu. But actually my intention was not to forward the story. First I just wrote some random scenes which I wish to see in the show then when the show ended it unintentionally became a series.
And ME😲, will think about it for the final chapter😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Yes that was certainly a neglected end - how all that money came to Yogesh's control and why he was being so unruly in between - apart from the obvious reasons courtesy Kesar ofc.


Well followed through Alanta ⭐️

Glad that u liked it Jzee and thank u so much for commenting and Jzee gave me a starthis is the first one I ever received 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sauris

Very well written wish they could have showed gulaal & kesars life after where they had ended

Thank u sauris.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

omg i missed it😭 thanks alot for pm😳😳😳 plz pm me if u update next chapii😛

abhi k liye res me running to read it😃

hahaha arti on that day when u told me about pneumonia I felt that u might have missed in b/w and Beyond life is on 7. Sorry for the mistake.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snehasri

very nice episode👏

thank u sneha
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Piu,Keerthi,Geeshu, Reshma,Arti
Waiting for you guys to unres , for me to update the next
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

maine unreswa kiya pg 17 par

jaldi update karo

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