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Posted: 13 years ago
Bina wajai res😲, I am just on the process of updating and yahan res bhi aagai, PT Usha bhi tujse kabhi nahin jeeth paogi😆
will bring the update in half an hour
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Posted: 13 years ago
Alanta.😍.Jaldi aavo..I am waiting😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kavach

Rewa: mein yahan aye hue bahut din hogaye hein na baa, mein soch rahi dhi ki waapas jau.
JK: Yeh kya beta, tu 2 din pe tho aaya dha, aur waapas jaane ki baath kar rahi hein...
PB(laughing):A re use jaane deejiye na jamuna (In a serious tone to herself) jab Gulaal yahan na tha tho...(sighed) tu ja rewa Kesar tuje chodega jaakar thayyar hoja beta.
(Rewa went inside and Gulaal was just passing through there was stopped by pb)
PB:Gulaal, Kesar kahin nazar nahin aa raha hein??
Gulaal:haan woh..
.[Kesar then just entered at the hall completely lost in some thoughts and with a worried face]
Gulaal:Kesar aagaya..
Paanba(called him): Kesar(Kesar couldnt hear her and walked in mechanically)
PB:Kesar(she urged)
[Kesar broke from his thoughts]
Kesar: h..haan..
PB:Kesar, kahan khoya hua hein thu, sunn rewa ko uski ghar thak chodke aana,..woh thayyar hone gayi hein..khaana khaane ke baath chali jaana, Gulaal ko bhi saath le ja, woh bhi kithne din hogaye apne maa baapji se milkar..(Kesar nodded his head and walked in to his room, Gulaal sensed something was wrong and followed him)
[In his room he was getting angry for no reason and pretended as if he is searching for something,he aimlessly messed all the books and files on the table, meanwhile Gulaal entered there]
Gulaal(confused):thu yeh kya doond raha hein Kesar?? khaana thayyar hein chal na..
Kesar(still kept searching and not looking at her, in a bit irritated tone):m..muje bhookh nahin hein, thu khaa le.
(Gulaal was sure that something was bothering him and she decided to talk to him later as she knew that he was not in a good mood to speak with and left)
[At the dining room]
(Gulaal and Sudha served every one, kesar was not there)
PB:Tu bhi khaa le Gulaal, thuje bhi jaana hein na..
Gulaal: PB mein khaalungi.
(Kesar arrived there with his jeep keys)
Kesar:(as to no one): mein gadi nikaal detha hoon jaldi aana.
[Kesar, Gulaal and Rewa setout to Rashipur]
...
[As their jeep arrived at the yard Poonam ba saw them through the window and learnt Gulaal was also accompanying them, she became extremely happy to see her, and walked towards the entrance, Rewa walked directly towards her, Poonam ba had an unfulfilled desire and called Rewa with her, Gulaal was waiting for Kesar to come after parking the jeep and before they could enter the house, PooBa came with an aarthi ki thaali Rewa too came with her]
Pooba:Ruk ja beta ruk ja...(she took their aarthi and put the thika on Kesar and showered a few petals on them, Kesar took her aashirvaad) anthar aa ja..
[They all entered the house, the tension on Kesar's face was still evident, he asked with concern]
Kesar:Yogesh ji??
(Pooba became a bit worried and was about to tell something but Rewa interfered)
Rewa:Yogesh bhi aagaya..
[Yogesh entered the house and passed a morose look at them and walked in, Rewa knew that he didnt like her staying at her maayka more than a day and she thought probably this was the reason for his anger and followed him]
[At their room]
Rewa:Aap mujse naara..z(she couldnt complete it)
Yogesh:Naaraz, mein naaraz kyun hunga.. mein tho bahut khush hun, aakhir meri patni ko phursat jo mili hein apne pathi se milne ko..
Rewa:Yogesh meri baath tho..(he walked out angrily)
[Kesar was sitting at the living room alone as Gulaal followed Pooba to the kitchen, and he saw Yogesh coming and he too was waiting for him to come as he had some serious matter to talk to him]
Kesar:Yogesh ji ek minute muje aapse kuch zaroori baath karni thi..(Yogesh stopped )
...
[Gulaal and Pooba was talking while she prepared naashtha for them]
Gulaal:Baapji kahin baahar gaya hein kya??
Pooba:haan patha nahin ithna der kyun laga raha hein, baazaar gaya tha.
[Suddenly they heard Yogesh's shout and rushed to the living room]
Yogesh:MERI ZAARI MUSEEBATHON KA JAD SIRF THU HEIN KESAR..
(all were left shocked)
Kesar(helpless):aapmuje galat samach rahe hein
Yogesh:(fuming with anger)bas Kesar thu kon hotha muje gyaan dene waala, bade agaya seek dene, tera ehsiyath hi kya hein..sirf tere waje se dono pariwaaron ka izat dav par lag gaya dha, aur thu muje izzat sikha rahe hein, muje??tere himmat kaise hua..
[Kesar stood there in silence hung his head down]
Yogesh:(continued):sach kahun tho meine apne poore zindgi mein tuj jaise naalayak ko nahin dekha..
[and it was the limit for Gulaal,she interfered]
Gulaal(almost begging,but in a clear voice):bas kejiye Yogesh ba, bahut hogaya, ab Kesar ke baare mein aage kuch bhi nahin sunn paongi.
Yogesh:tu iss kesar ke keliye mujse bas karne ko keh rahi hein..tu shaayad bhul rahi hein Gulaal ki Kesar tera pati hone se pehle mein tera bhaai hun, aur issi kesar ki waje se kya kuch nahin sehna pada dha tuje?? bhul gayi sab??hum sab ke laakh kehne par bhi tu waapas uss ghar mein nahi jaana chahthi thi??kyun??sirf iske harqathon ki waje se
[Gulaal struggled hard to regain and control herself]
Gulaal(in a controlled voice):Kesar ki waaje se tho mein aaj bhi zinda hun...(leave that all) aap meri baath chodiye, kam se kam rewa ke baare mein tho soch lijiye, kya beeth rahi hogi uss par(Rewa sobbed at the corner, Yogesh looked away in anger)
[Kesar intrupted]
Kesar:Unhe kehne dijiye Gulaal unhe poora haq hein..mere waje se aapka jo nuksaan hua hein wo ek maafi shabd se chuka nahin saktha, mein sirf ithna kahunga ki inn sab chakkar mein padkar, apne aap, aur apno ko aur thaqleefon mein mat daaliega, Rewa aur Rohan ke zindgi aapke haathon mein hein, mein aapko hamesha apna bhai maana hein aur baapji aur ba mere liye motaba aur paanba se kam nahin hein..(he joined his hands and jestered Gulaal to come and he left outward,Yogesh too left)
Gulaal:Chalthi hun ba..
Pooba (worried):Gulaal mein kuch nahin keh paayi Kesar ko bahut bura laga hoga na..yeh yogesh bhi ab puraana yogesh nahin raha, muje kuch samach nahin aa raha hein, beta.
Gulaal:Aap chintha mat kijiye, Yogesh ba ko ek na ek din sab samach aayega, bas dar yehi hein ki sab samach aane par kahi der na hojaaye..(and she too left)
...
[Revji returned and fired at Yogesh]
Pooba: (unbelievingly):Yeh kya keh rahe aap.
Rewji:Mein tho kabhi nahin socha dha yeh paiso ke chakkar mein yeh ithna gir jayega,mein apne aankhon se dekh kar aarahi hun... mein iskeliya kithne baar, kithne mushkil se naukri ka inthzam karwaaya dha, har ek baar kuch na kuch kehke talthe raha, muje tho sharam aara hein tuje apne beta kehthe hue(Rewji broke completely)
Pooba:Ab yahin sun na baaki rehgaya dha
(Yogesh was moved a bit by now)
...
[Gulaal and Kesar in the jeep]
(the FBs of what he saw a few hours before still kept disturbing him)
**Kesar happened to see Yogesh at Talsaagara, in an unfair situation, on further enquiry he came to know that Yogesh was working as an agent in selling liqor in black for about past 2 months and he recieved a fair amount in return.It was the same place where once Kesar came and grabbed a bottle and drank and the person who handed it over to him were getting nervous of him drinking it in public as it was an illegal buisness and so an offense and that person was afraid of the punishment**
...

[These thoughts were haunting him like anything as he felt for Yogesh and Rewa and the honour of Rewji in the society.
Suddenly he noticed Gulaal and she too was terribly upset though she was unaware of the real reason.Kesar kept his worries aside for her sake and drove to town.]
...
[He stopped at the same restaurant where Talli insisted him to eat the special bajiyas]
Kesar:Talli kehthi hein ki yahan ki bajjiya bahut ache hein, chal ab
Gulaal:(in an upset tone) muje..bajjiya pasand nahin hein Kesar..
Kesar:patha hein patha hein...waise muje bhi uthna pasanth nahin hein, kuch aur khaathe hein.
Gulaal: Muje bhook nahin hein...
Kesar:Muje tho bahut bhuk lag raha hein, Subah se kuch nahin khaya hun..ab aur bardaash nahin hoga..tu yahan beit mein jaa raha hun..
[Gulaal was still lost in her thoughts, suddenly a plate of hot paraathas appeared before her and she was surprised]
Kesar(laughing);Kya dekh rahi hein...muje patha hein thu bhi subah se kuch nahin khaya hein, ab nakhre dikhana band karde aur chup chaap khale.. warna..
[Gulaal raised her eye brows and looked at him as if asking him back if not??]
Kesar:(with a mischieve look):Acha teek hein chal ab tuje mere hi haathon se khaana hein tho phir aisa hi sahi, ab tho kha (he pinched a bit of the paraatha and extended towards her, she couldnt resist the wide smile on her face and she ate it from him)
Gulaal:Lekin yeh tho sirf ek hi thaali hein..
Kesar: haan (so what??) hum tho uss samay bhi (DV trial period) ek hi thaali mein khaatha tha na..bahut dino baad ek mauka mila hein, kaise gawa detha..(winked and smiled mischievously)
(They both ate from the same plate, Kesar was glad to see Gulaal happy)
[After a while Kesar learnt that Gulaal was not still completely out of the upset mode, he thought for while and took a deviation]
...

Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

RES 😆sabko thenga😛

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Alanta.🤗.pehle mujhe maro.😡

..maine itni der baad unreswa kiya..

Choory...

Alanta..👏I liked the way you took up a very important issue of Yogesh which they left unsettled in the serial.It was a very unique thought of Yogesh minting Money using unfair means from alcohol smuggling in a dry state..Kudos to that unique and interesting yet credential storyline..⭐️👏👏

OMG tune mujhe Talli k bhajiya scene ki yaad dila di.😆

And Kes -Gul eating from the same plate is sooo romantic...☺️

Jaldi update karo..pleesh..😍

Choory maaf kar do for doing such late unreswa😭

Edited by manzilmukul - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res😊

Edit:

Alanta...loved the name 'Kavach' for this update...
Very well going on events which are left unaddressed in the show...reasons for yogesh senseless behavior towards evryone especially kesar is so well addressed in this...loved how gulaal supported kesar even though she is unaware abt the issue...n also the way kesar changed his mood to make her come out of her upset mood...n loved loved the paratha scene..he feeding her😳...n they sharing the same plate😳...looks like we would have a full on kesar n gulaal scene in next update as kesar thought something to change her mood now😉...

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for taking a long time to edit but pls do comment😊
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
No comments??😭 pasand nahin aaya kya??
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nicely written. I always feel like I am watching Gulaal from where it ended.Luved how u brought out Yogesh's issue and Kesar handled it so maturely. I loved how Gulaal stood for Kesar not even knowing wat the reason was bcoz this is xactly wat Kesar had done for her(Title Kavach was well thought out).Plzzz kabhi kabhi mahaepisode bhi likh le naaa...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yes that was certainly a neglected end - how all that money came to Yogesh's control and why he was being so unruly in between - apart from the obvious reasons courtesy Kesar ofc.

Well followed through Alanta ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very well written wish they could have showed gulaal & kesars life after where they had ended

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