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Posted: 13 years ago
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Felt like writting something in between,...
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So basically whenever I tends to write/say something, often I fail to express the exact thing in my mind, be it in any language, even my mother tongue, I leave the second person all confused. So for the same reason, I wanted to mention some instances of the DS, for my friends:
Tu Sirf Meri hein: The instance where Kesar takes her bangle in return to his service, here actually I tried to bring out a comparison between this and that of Vasanth wearing the bangles on her-----
ie; Vasanth gave her bangles and asked her life in return( he didnt intended to but it ended up like that, every now and then refering to the 'Uthaar" thing and relating his dreams to it, and Gulaal's one and only aim to fulfill his dream by sacrificing her life) but here Kesar dedicates his entire life for her and in return he asks for a bangle!!! anyway the bangle was there for a purpose that brought out towards the end, this was the underlyed meaning.

It is my right: The first part on Kesar becoming a successful person, and Gulaal being his greatest inspiration, Gulsar together fulfilling Vasanth's dream... and the later part Kesar is back to Kesar, although he kept himself aside for the sake of Gulaal, now that every thing is settled and clear between the two, he too is back.

As I said in Piu's reply post, I was a bit hesitant to post the latest one, as I felt it is not up to the mark, went a bit sappy??
Still I am having the thought...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Alanta.🤗.bole to u write so beautifully👏

I think it is brilliant and your views are excellent..⭐️

Now I want update ASAP..*throws tantrums*😛

Wanna see Kesuda's real zid😉

do you want me to fill your beautiful thread with ghatiya shayari..

So better update..me desperately waiting😍

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Alanta.🤗.bole to u write so beautifully👏

I think it is brilliant and your views are excellent..⭐️

Now I want update ASAP..*throws tantrums*😛

Wanna see Kesuda's real zid😉

do you want me to fill your beautiful thread with ghatiya shayari..

So better update..me desperately waiting😍

Thank you piu 😊 esp for the instant reply, actually I was not feeling that confident, so wrote it and also I wanted to point out the bangle scene. thanks again🤗 but pls no ghatiya shayari
...but I like it😉
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alanta


Thank you gina for the long comment😊 I am happy that I could convey it.



Thank you for the reply dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alanta

My views
Hi Friends.
Felt like writting something in between,...
...
So basically whenever I tends to write/say something, often I fail to express the exact thing in my mind, be it in any language, even my mother tongue, I leave the second person all confused. So for the same reason, I wanted to mention some instances of the DS, for my friends:
Tu Sirf Meri hein: The instance where Kesar takes her bangle in return to his service, here actually I tried to bring out a comparison between this and that of Vasanth wearing the bangles on her-----
ie; Vasanth gave her bangles and asked her life in return( he didnt intended to but it ended up like that, every now and then refering to the 'Uthaar" thing and relating his dreams to it, and Gulaal's one and only aim to fulfill his dream by sacrificing her life) but here Kesar dedicates his entire life for her and in return he asks for a bangle!!! anyway the bangle was there for a purpose that brought out towards the end, this was the underlyed meaning.

It is my right: The first part on Kesar becoming a successful person, and Gulaal being his greatest inspiration, Gulsar together fulfilling Vasanth's dream... and the later part Kesar is back to Kesar, although he kept himself aside for the sake of Gulaal, now that every thing is settled and clear between the two, he too is back.

As I said in Piu's reply post, I was a bit hesitant to post the latest one, as I felt it is not up to the mark, went a bit sappy??
Still I am having the thought...



I really like a depth in your thinking, even if you find difficult to words it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved your update especially gulaal saying her likes arent diferent form kesar and aso the comparison of vasant givng the bangles and kesar taking it of was brilliant
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh wow alanta👏👏👏👏👏 finally i can see oops read some chii moment on the real talsagra's kesar gulaal😳😳😳...loved it and i love how kesar brought green bangles and put it with all his haq looking forward for some more chii😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
arti you came here...😲, Oh i just cant believe...
Ok I am back to sense, Welcome dear🤗 and Glad that u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
alanta,read your story in one go.please do continue soon.really love your writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks Raunika for liking, will update soon

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