Originally posted by: anu_j_menon
Hey
This is the first SS/FF/OS I am reading on this forum....
It's beautifully written🥰🥰🥰
Do continue soon.....eagerly waiting for the next part😍😍
Thanks dear🤗
Will continue soon
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Originally posted by: anu_j_menon
Hey
This is the first SS/FF/OS I am reading on this forum....
It's beautifully written🥰🥰🥰
Do continue soon.....eagerly waiting for the next part😍😍
Thanks dear🤗
Will continue soon
Thanks sonal🤗talen valent kuch nhi jo man mein aya likh diya maine😆
Will continue soon
PART-2
Everyone was agahst as well as confused because of what they just saw an old man is stopping their marriage not only this vikram who was supposed to be dead is also present sitting on a wheel chair anger and dissapointment was visible on their face Akshat was happy to see vikram alive but is confused about the person supporting him and how vikram is alive not only akshat everyone was happy but there was one face who was extramely scared and that is antra she realises that everyone's eyes is upon her so she started doing her acting and runs towards them while crying.
Antra-papa, bhai aap dono yha aap jinda ho main koi sapna to nhi dekh rhi akshat dekho na aaj bhagwan ne meri khushiya lauta di mjhe mera pyaar ke sath sath mre papa aur bhai v mil gye yes the old person is his father ha akshat he is my father prem rawat as soon as she hugged him she fall in the floor as he slapped her hard
P- door rho mjhse antra Tum meri beti nhi ho skti you stoop so low money that u kidnapped ur father and made him die infront of everyone so that u can get my insurance money and symapthy not only this u almost killed ur own brother when he tried to make u understand that u r wrong u even deceived the person who loved u with his heart and who was mourning over ur death and when u returned u again tried to snatch his happiness from him why antra why answer me?
Antra- she was now totally frustrated yes i did all this for money and u should be grateful that though i kept u isolated bt didnt kill u yes i tried to kill this brother of mine as he was supporting a stranger over her own sister bt i wonder how he is alive i gave him a strong poison how as she was shouting one more slapp she got she turns her head its dadi.
Dadi- bs antra bahut ho gya accha hua ham sb ne hamri guddan ke baaton pr viswas tha arey teri sacchai to ham pehle se jaante the lekin tu itna gir gyi chi mjhe sharam aa rha hai ki kv tujhe maine tujhe apni lala ki patni aur is ghar ki bahu banaya tha aur tune .
Antra-bas buddhiya bahut bol liya aur kuch bola na to as she was about to say one more slap land on her face it was durga
Durga-warna qa bhootni sasuma . Antra- durga bahu ye qa badtamizi hai
Akshat-stop it antra baar baar apne aap ko inki saas aur meri patni bolna band kro as only my guddan have right on all this and qa kami reh gyi thi mere pyaar mein jo tumne ham sb ko itna bara dhoka diya tadpa hu mai tmhare yaado mein khud ko tumhari maut ko zimedaar maan kr ghut gut kr mar rha tha main aue tum...
Antra-ha kiya maine ye sb aur koi option v choda tha tumne mere pass sirf pyaar hi sb kuch nhi hota i wanted money too upar se teen teen beto ko adopt krke khud to baap ban gye saath mein mjhe v maa bana diya i wanted love luxery and money but what u gave in the name of love is only responsibility isliye kiya maine ye sb aur aaj in property aur paise lene ayi hu main .
Akshat-aur koi umeed bhi qa krskta hai koi tum jaisi ghatiya aurat se i will not going to spare u for what u did to my family and my guddan ye akshat jindal ka vaada hai bt i m really thankful to u for one thing because of u i got my true love in my guddan only this much u have did a right thing ab tumhe jail jaane se koi nhi baacha skta he went to rawat and hold his hand but he is shocked to see that rawat is not responding he looked at prem for the expalaination
Prem- Antra ne jo poison diya tha uske wajah se mra beta maut se to bach gya bt iski ye halat ho gyi he is paralysed lekin mai shukraguzar hu guddanji ka uski wajah se mra beta kam se kam jinda to hai nhi to is dayan ne koi kasar nhi chodi thi ise marne mein .
Antra was now happy because his only proof of her crimes rawat is paralysed she is safe and if she gets arrested for keeping his farther isolated and for fraud she will be released soon after some year or can get bail
Prem cont- jb sb ne maan liya tha ki rawat mar chuka hai tb guddan ji ne uski hatho.ke movement dekhke pta laga liya ki vo jinda hai isliye unhone ise secretly hospital mein admit kiya ye sb unhone mjhse is baat ko chupa kr rakhne ko kha tha specially is antra se guddanji ne na sirf mere bete ko maut ke muh se bahar nikala balki mjhe v is dayan ke changul se azad krwaya . Aur unhone hi mujhe jindal bhawan mein ane ko kaha.
Akshat- but guddan hai kha
Hum yha hai jindal sahab everyone turns towarda her there she was bt wait she was with a middle age lady and police.
Who the lady was what is her role in the coming scene ?
Ps- ignore the typos and grammatical mistakes and do share ur view😛
Part-3 pg-5
It was amazing! Waiting for the next update!
Thanks sonal🤗talen valent kuch nhi jo man mein aya likh diya maine😆
Will continue soon
Don't underestimate youself
Hum toh itna bhi nahi kar sakte hai😕
Accha😈
Aap ek baar try to kijiye tb pta chalega ki apse qa na ho payega😆
Originally posted by: PrincessPooh
It was amazing! Waiting for the next update!
Thanks pooja🤗
Will update soon
Arey waah, you have also started writing now 😳
Soo gudd...guddan kiske saath h??u are a spectacular writer....do write more👍🏼
Thanks will update soon🤗