Guddan FF - What I Deserve (Part-12 UPDATED on Pg-20) - Page 8

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mrihika

Superb

Now what will akshat do

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you so much for the lovely comments everyone 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Itna chota 😭but bahot acha tha👍🏼eagerly waiting to see jindal saab manaoing his gudiyaupdate soon dear

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey guys, Hope everyone is doing well. Without further ado,let's get right into Part - 6.

It has been a week since Guddan had left from Jindal Bhavan. Akshat had again tried to call her after that conversation,but since then,Guddan had not picked up his calls. Dadi had called her with Lakshmi and Durga but she was not showing any signs in coming back. They had started to lose hope. Will she ever come back? They missed her very much.

Guddan was having breakfast with her family when she noticed the tensed look on her Papa's face.

G: Kya huva, Papa? Aap pareshan lag rahe hein?

B: A-ah.... kuch nahi hein beta......

G: Jhoot mat boliye..... Aap ka chehre par saaf hein ki aap kisi cheez pe pareshaan hein..... Kya baat hein?

B: Woh.... beta,mein Chutki ke baare mein soch rahi thi.....

G:( confused and looks at Revti): Chutki ke baare mein?

Kausalya (K): Woh... kya hein na Guddan, Chutki ke rishta.... uss ghar.....

G: Uss mein pareshan hone ki kya baat hein? Sab kuch toh teek hein?

Revti (R) : Di.... lekin aap.....

G: Kuch nahi..... pehle yeh batao ki kya tum Angad-ji se pyaar karte ho?

R: ...... Haan, Di!

G: Toh phir baat khatam..... Unse puchte hein baaki sab.... lekin kya woh bhi mansoor hoga iss rishte keliye..... agar nahi huva, toh mein wahan jaakar baat karuga.....

Whatever happened to her was another case. She can't destroy her sister's life because of her problems.

G: (to Kausalya) Maaf karna Mummy..... Phirse mujhse galati hogayi..... But You don't worry, I promise I'll make it up....

K: Kaise baat kar rahe hein tu...?? Iss mamle mein tumhari koi galati nahi....! Aur tujhe wahan unki peir pakadne ke koi zaroorat nahi.... They will all come here in the afternoon to talk..... And if things didn't get progressed then, we'll cancel it!

Guddan looked at her mother amazed. Never had she ever thought she will stand by her in such situation.

K: You must be thinking why am I behaving such a way? So weird and friendly to you?

G: N-nahi... ai-sa kuch nahi...

K: I'm sorry Guddan.... I have failed to see you as a person.... I've been so greedy for money that I forgot many things that a mother should do.....

G: Please don't say like that mummy.... You were just concerned for your own daughter. I'm not your own.... Its the ways of the world..... Apnom ko ek alag hi pehchan hein....

Everyone had tears in their eyes.

K: And from today onwards, You are also our own..... Me as a daughter and for vhutki as a big sister.

Guddan smiled and hugged her mother. Today she was happy as her mother finally accepted her.

*In the afternoon*

The doorbell rang continuosly.

G: Haan haan... Aarahi hoon....

When Guddan opened the door, she was a bit surprised. Sure she expected them,but not everyone....In the entrance,there stood, Dadi, Akshat, Angad, Lakshmi and Durga. Akshat stared at her waiting to atleast even look at him.But she didn't.Instead she just smiled a bit awkward.

G: Ji.... Andar aayine na....

Guddan moved so that they can all enter.

G: Ek minute ha.... mein Papa ko bulakar aate hein.... aap sab beitiye....

With that Guddan went to call her family.Here the Jindal Parivaar was debating themself on how to talk the matter out. If Guddan was with them, this would've been a piece of cake.

Bhushan came with Kausalya, Guddan and Revti. Angad was happy seeing her and Revti too smiled a small smile seeing him. They all sat on the sofa, bothof them not ready to talk. Akshat continued staring at Guddan but Guddan was hellbent on ignoring him. Guddan noticing the tension might be with her presence said,

G: Hum sab keliye chai banakar aate hein....

With that she went to the kitchen.Dadi decided to start.

D: Humein pata hein ki aap sab humse bahot naaraz hein aur woh jayez bhi hein.... Hum bas itna keh rehe hein, ki aap bachon ki khusiyaan bhi dekhe.....

B: Hum sirf apne bachon ki khushiyaan hi dekhte hein,ji.... Isliye hum ne aap sab ko yahan bulaya hein.... But can you promise that Revti would be happy there?

D: Haan Bhushan-ji.... Revti will be happy! Angad loves her a lot. aur sirf Revti ka hi nahi.... Guddan ka bhi......

B/K: Guddan ka bhi?/Matlab?

D: Guddan aur... lalla ki----

B: Humein mansoor nahi hein yeh rishta....

D: Bhushan-ji aap....

B: Mein apni bacchi ko aur takleef mein nahi dekna chate.... agar Guddan nahi kehti toh Humein Revti aur Angad ki shaadi ko bhi mansoor nahi hota.... Sirf uski kehne se aap sab yahan hein.... uski faida mat utayiye.....

Before Akshat can say anything, Guddan came with tea and snacks. This time too Guddan avoided looking at Akshat. Akshat wanted to talk to her. That's why he was even there. Yes, His brother's wedding was important,but this is more important.

G: Angad-ji!

Angad (Ang): Ji bhabhi!

G:(smiles sadly that Akshat notices) Mein ab aapka bhabhi nahi hein... Humein Guddan hi bulaiye....

Ang: Ji.....

G: Kya aap humari chutki se behad pyaar karthe hein?

Ang: Ji.... Mein Revti-ji se behad pyaar karta hu....

G: Sirf pyaar hi nahi... barosa bhi bahot karte hein na?

That question striked his heart and Akshat felt uncomfortable now that she is looking at him. That was indirectly towards him.

Ang: Ji.....

G: Woh kya hein na.... Ristey mein bharosa bahot zaroori hein.... kyunki..... To be trusted is a greater compliment than being loved.

Its at that moment, Akshat realised, that he messed the hell up!

And that's it for Part-6. Hope you guys enjoyed it! Be sure to like and comment!

What do you think will happen next?

Stay tuned to this FF for more updates. Till then,this is Pooh signing off~Toodles!🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#75

Amazing 👍🏼

Continue asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
#76

Thumbs up

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Posted: 6 years ago
#77

Superb update

Love it

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Posted: 6 years ago
#78

Awesome part

Nice part

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Posted: 6 years ago
#79

He really has created a mess.....but hmko pura vishwas h ki vo gudiya ko mna hi lega awesome ...luved it cont soon ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
#80

Wow awesome..loved Guddan’s attitude...

Plzz continue soon

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