~~ Mere Humdum Mere Dost ~~ Akshan FF || Part 7 on Pg 24 Updated || - Page 11

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: srain10

I really love title of this story☺️

"Naa jaa kahi ab naa jaa

Is dil ke siwa mere humdum mere dost...."

Thank you so much dear🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Thank you so much for liking😳

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Posted: 6 years ago

Update Kar do aaj....

Waiting for it...

Waise b apni stories he aaj Kal sukun deti hai ek dusre ko.....warna show me to sar dard he hota hai.....

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Update Kar do aaj....

Waiting for it...

Waise b apni stories he aaj Kal sukun deti hai ek dusre ko.....warna show me to sar dard he hota hai.....

Okay karti Hoon thodi der mein

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: TC_FA

Okay karti Hoon thodi der mein

Waiting...

Mere humdum mere dost k 1-2 part Kar do update aaj m loving it....

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 4

At night

Guddan is lying on her bed and crying again. She gets up and goes to the kitchen to have some water. Suddenly Akshat also comes to the kitchen.

Akshat- Aap yahaan Kya Kar rahi Hain??

Guddan- Woh hum glass dhoondh rahe the.

Akshat - Aap phir se ro rahi thi Kya??

Guddan- Nahi bus woh aise hi.

Akshat- Aap chaliye terrace par,main aapke liye paani lekar aata Hoon. Please aap chalein,main aata Hoon.

Guddan goes to terrace. Akshat also comes there with a glass of juice.

Akshat- Mujhe ek baat samajh nahi aati jab koi Insaan rota hai toh humesha Pani hi kyun peeta hai,juice kyun nahi. Isliye Maine socha ki main tumahre liye juice le aaoon.

She smiles a little.

Akshat- Tumhe Bura toh nahi laga ki Maine tum kaha??

Guddan nodes in negative.

Akshat- Waise bhi main tumse bada Hoon and laughs. So aaj se main tumhe tum kehkar bulayunga.

Guddan- Jaisa aap theek samjhe. Mujhe aapse maafi maangni hai apne behavior ke liye. I'm sorry,I was very rude to you. Aapki toh koi galti bhi nahi thi.

Akshat- It's okay Guddan,I can understand.Okay let's change your mood and play a game with me.Have you played noughts and crosses??

She gets confused. Then he draws it on paper. Then she understands which game is this.

Guddan- Oh,kaatam kaati it is.But mujhe achhi tarah se nahi aati ,main haar jaaungi.

Akshat- Why are you so negative?? Tum Bina khele kaise keh sakti ho ki tum haar jaogi?? Why do you have so many complexes??

Then they start playing and Guddan wins it. She smiles a little and says-

Guddan- Aap Jaan bhujkar haar rahein Hain na??Aapko yeh sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.

Akshat-Tumhe yeh kisne kahaa ki main Jaan bhujkar haar Raha Hoon. Guddan, please tum apne andar ke complexes door Kar do aur yeh sochna bandh Kar do ki tum kuch nahi Kar sakti. Meri nazron se dekho toh tum sab much Kar sakti ho. You are a very intelligent and talented girl.Bus Apni insecurities ko door Kar do aur phir dekho.

Guddan- Aap Mera Dil rakhne liye yeh sab keh rahe Hain na.

He holds her hand and says-

Akshat- Aisa kuch nahi hai. Tum Sach mein bahut hi achhi aur samazdaar ladki ho.

Guddan feels something with his touch and releases her hand from his.

Guddan- Raat kaafi ho chuki hai,I think ab hume Sona chahiye and they go from there.

Next day

Akshat is watching TV and Guddan also comes there.

Akshat- Arey Guddan,Aao na please baitho. Aur yeh lo remote aur apni Marzi ka channel laga lo.

Guddan- Rehne dijiye,Jo aap dekh rahe Hain wahi theek hai.

Akshat- Par main toh business news dekh raha Hoon. Tumahre liye thoda boring nahi ho jaayega??

Guddan- Nahi hoga.

Akshat- Okay, mujhe toh laga toh ki tumahri Umar ki ladkiyaan toh films ya serials dekhna pasand karti hongi.

Guddan- She smiles and say aisa kuch nahi hai.

Akshat- Kitni achhi smile hai tumahri,aise hi smile karti Raha Karo.

Meanwhile,maa comes there and asks about breakfast.

Maa- Tum dono aaj breakfast mein Kya khaoge??

Akshat- Maa,aaj toh Sunday hai, please kuch achha sa banwa dein.

Maa- Aur Guddan,tum Kya khaogi??

Guddan- Kuch bhi.

Akshat- Yeh kaunsi dish hai?? Maa aapne Suna hai iss dish ke baare mein?? And they both laugh.

Guddan- Mera Matlab hai ki main sab kuch khaa leti Hoon.

Akshat(teasingly)- Pehle kuch bhi,ab sab kuch. Mujhe toh samajh nahi aa Raha yeh kaunsi dishes hain??

Guddan glares at him.

Guddan- Main aloo ka paratha kha loongi maa ji.

Maa- Theek hai beta and goes from there.

Akshat- Itni si baat kehne mein tumne itna time laga Diya. Guddan yeh tumahra apna Ghar hai,tum Jo chahe keh sakti ,maang sakti ho. Kisi se darne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Okay

Guddan nodes in positive.

Suddenly Akshat's phone rings. It's Bhushan on the other side.

Akshat- Hello, Bhushan Bhai kaise Hain aap and how's Kaushlaya bhabhi and angad??

Bhushan- They are fine,aur main bhi theek hoon. Meri Zara Guddan se Bata karwa do.

Akshat- Ji,abhi karwata Hoon. He gives the phone to Guddan and leaves from there.

Guddan with so much hesitation, finally speaks-

Guddan- Hello

Bhushan(with a cold voice)- Hello,kaisi ho tum?? I hope tum Akshat ke Ghar mein bilkul theek thaak ho. Agar kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh Akshat ko keh Dena,woh le dega tumhe.

Kaushlaya asks Bhushan to give her the phone as she also wants to talk to Guddan.

Kaushlaya- Hello,beta kaisi Hain aap??

Guddan (hesitantly)- Main theek hoon.

Kaushlaya- I'm sorry beta,hum aapko lene nahi aa paaye. Hume jaldi mein nikalna padha. Par aap chinta mat karein. Akshat ke Ghar mein aapko koi pareshani nahi hogi. He is a very nice man. Aur aap apna khyaal rakhiyega,hum jaldi waapis aa jaayeinge.

Guddan- Ji theek hai and cuts the phone.

In the afternoon

Guddan is standing in the lounge, Akshat comes there.

Akshat- Tum phir yahaan,akeli khadi ho. Aise gumsum mat Raha Karo baat karo mujhse. Har waqt bus main hi bolta rehta Hoon. Tum bhi kuch puchho mere baare mein.

Guddan- Main Kya puchhoon??

Akshat- Arey baba kuch bhi,Meri hobbies ke baare, mujhe Kya pasand hai wagera wagera.

Guddan- Aapki qualification Kya hai??

Akshat- Maine Harvard University se MBA Kiya hai??

Guddan- Harvard se??

Akshat- Yup.Aur tumne kahaan Tak padhai ki hai??

Guddan- Main B.Com final ke exams diye Hain. Result aane wale hoga.

Akshat- Aane Wala hai ya aa Chuka hoga??

Guddan- Pata nahi,Maine check nahi kiya.

Akshat- Check nahi Kiya toh karlo internet par.Aur aage me Kya plans Hain??

Guddan- Pata nahi . Maine uske baare mein kuch socha nahi. But I think I'll do masters.

Akshat- Achhi baat hai. Chalo aao baahar baithte Hain.

Guddan- Ji theek hai.

In the night

Guddan (in her mind)- Hum iss jagah ke bilkul kaabil nahi hai. Yeh high society ke taur tareeke hum nahi apna sakte. Humne toh humesha ek middle class zindagi jee hai . Yeh fork se khaana, table manners yeh sab cheezein toh humne aaj Tak nahi seekha. Yahaan hum apne aap ko bahut chhota mehsoos karte Hain. Aisa mehsoos hota hai ki sab hamara mazaak bana rahe hon. Par yeh Akshat Jindal aise kyun nahi Hain. Kyun woh humesha humein itna support karte Hain. Kyun Hume unki hansi se aisa mehsoos nahi hota ki woh hamara mazaak uda rahein Hain. Humein toh laga tha ki saare high society ke log ek jaise hote Hain,par Akshat ji waise nahi Hain. Woh inn sabse bilkul alag hain.Unhone humesha hamari insecurities ko door karne ki koshish ki hai. Par Kya pata unka yoon humara khyaal rakhna sirf isliye hai kyunki hum Bhushan Gupta ki beti Hain. Woh yeh sab hamare liye nahi, Bhushan Gupta ki wajah se Kar rahe hon. Par pata nahi kyun phir bhi unpar vishwas karne ka Dil karta hai. Wajah toh hum nahi jaante par itna jaante Hain ki woh ek bahut hi achhe Insaan Hain.

And with these thoughts, she goes to sleep.

Part 4 completed.

So how's it?? Do give your feedback.

PS- Ignore the typos


Edited by TC_FA - 6 years ago


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Posted: 6 years ago

Chalo Aj sahab aap se tum pr aa gye aur guddu ki rudeness unke liye khatam ho gyi😛

Yaha pr sb role reverse hai bhushan strict aur ksushalya itni acchi

Awsome update

Continue asap😛

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Posted: 6 years ago

Loving it

Aek aur part update karo na aj plzz

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Posted: 6 years ago

yeh AJ ke muh se aap sunnkar ajeeb sa lagta tha aur hasi bhi aata hai🤣 thanks Tanu aap se tum convert kardiya 💃💃

Chalo batao next part kab milega

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update❤️ craving for the next episode.. Ho sake to aaj hi update kar dena😃

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