~~ Mere Humdum Mere Dost ~~ Akshan FF || Part 7 on Pg 24 Updated || - Page 13

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Posted: 6 years ago

Superrrr

So guddan start feeling something something ahhhh😊

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Originally posted by: Mishti24

Superrrr

So guddan start feeling something something ahhhh😊

Continue soon

Thank you so much for liking👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago

Read all parts in one go😃

Bhushan as an akdu man is kinda hard to imagine just as hard it is to swallow sweet kaushalya! Gives me tonsils🤔 😆*

And Akshat ka Guddan JI is painting his personality as so different, like a very modest man unlike serial ke AJ.

Glad to know we don't have chudail and dayan here

And this Akshat must not have any sense of personal space unlike serial ke AJ who rewarded dustbin with practically anything that Guddan touched😆. This one's a gentleman with chivalry overload.

Itne nakhre khakar guddan ko khana khilaya, usse baatein karta hai, TV dikhata hai, ghumane le jata hai...not bad!!😃

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Originally posted by: nish_vir

Read all parts in one go😃

Bhushan as an akdu man is kinda hard to imagine just as hard it is to swallow sweet kaushalya! Gives me tonsils🤔 😆*

And Akshat ka Guddan JI is painting his personality as so different, like a very modest man unlike serial ke AJ.

Glad to know we don't have chudail and dayan here

And this Akshat must not have any sense of personal space unlike serial ke AJ who rewarded dustbin with practically anything that Guddan touched😆. This one's a gentleman with chivalry overload.

Itne nakhre khakar guddan ko khana khilaya, usse baatein karta hai, TV dikhata hai, ghumane le jata hai...not bad!!😃

Glad that you are liking it Nish 👍🏼

I'm overwhelmed😳

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Posted: 6 years ago

Will try to update tonight if possible😳

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Amazing update👍🏼

Glad that you liked it sonal 😳

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Superb update

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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Superb update

Love it

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Glad that you liked it👍🏼

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Part 5

Next day, Akshat leaves for some business meeting out of the city.

Guddan and Akshat's mother are sitting in the living room.

Maa- Beta,tum itna chup chaap kyun rehti ho?? Baat Kiya Karo mujhse. Mujhe toh laga tha ki ab tum yahaan ho toh main bore nahi hongi. Par tum toh kuch bolti nahi ho.

Guddan- Aisi koi baat nahi maa. Woh bus aap toh jaanti Hain ki jabse meri maa mujhe chhodkar gayi Hain Mera kuch bhi karne ko Dil nahi karta aur na hi kisi se baat karne ka Dil karta hai.Par main aapse ek baat kehna chahti Hoon,aap bilkul Meri maa ki tarah Hain aur main aapko bahut pasand karti Hoon. Akshat bahut lucky Hain ki unke paas aap jaisi maa.

Maa- Phir tum apne aap ko bhi lucky samjho,kyunki main tumahri bhi maa Hoon. Saying this she hugs Guddan. Guddan gets emotional and hugs her back.

Guddan- Maa waise yeh Akshat kahaan Gaye Hain??

Maa- Beta,woh ek business meeting ke liye shehar se baahar Gaya hai, shaayad aaj raat Tak aa jaaye.Tumhe koi kaam tha Kya usse??

Guddan- Nahi bus woh aise hi. Chaliye maa,hum lunch Kar lete Hain.

Maa- Okay beta and they go to have their lunch.

Whole evening, Guddan thinks about Akshat and after sometime she goes to sleep. Akshat comes very late at night and directly goes to sleep. Next day,he takes a day off from the office.

Guddan is in his study looking for some books. Akshat goes there to meet her.

Akshat- Hello Ms. Guddan. Kaisi ho tum??

Guddan- Arey aap?? Aap kab aaye ?? Aur aapki meeting kaisi rahi??

Akshat- Arey arey,itne saare sawaal ek saath,thoda break lagayein madam. Ji main Kal raat ko hi der raat waapis aaya Hoon isliye subaah late utha. And my meeting was good. Tum batao,tum yahaan Kya Kar rahi ho ??

Guddan- Woh actually mujhe bus ek book chahiye thi wahin le rahi thi.

Akshat- Oh ho,toh madam ko books padhne ka bhi shauk hai. Waise kaunsi book padh rahi thi tum??

Guddan- Woh microfinancing se related.

Akshat- Oh so you are interested in business. Good,it's a very good book. You should surely read this. Waise Mujhe tumhe kuch aur bhi Dena tha.

Guddan- Kya Dena hai aapko??

Akshat(forwarding a packet)- This is for you. Woh main meeting ke liye Gaya hua tha toh socha ki aate waqt tumahre liye gift hi khareed loon warna tum kehti ki main khaali haath hi waapis aa Gaya.Raat ko Dena chahta tha par tum so gayi thi.

Guddan- Aisa kuch nahi hai. Phir bhi shukriya gift ke liye.

Akshat- Waise agar koi aapko gift de toh use fauran kholkar dekhna chahiye. Toh jaldi se gift kholo aur mujhe batao ki tumhe kaisa laga.

Guddan- Ji theek hai and she opens the gift. It's chocolate box. Chocolates ?? She utters.

Akshat- Mujhe tumahri pasand toh pata nahi tha but phir socha tumahri age ki ladki ko chocolates toh pasand hongi hi so khareed li.Achha ab jab gift kholo hi liya hai toh taste karke bhi dekh lo.

She unwraps one and eats it.

Akshat(teasingly)- Kabhi kabhi saamne wale ko bhi puchh Lena chahiye,Kya pata uska bhi khaane ko Mann Kar Raha ho.

Guddan- Sorry. Yeh lijiye.

Akshan- Bahut bahut shukriya madam and smiles.

And they both leave from there after sometime.

In the evening,all three are in the living room

Akshat- Kyun na aaj hum baahar coffee peene chalein??

Maa- Beta tum Guddan ko le jao.

Guddan- Nahi maa,Hume nahi jaana,hamara mood nahi hai.

Akshat- Arey aise kaise mood nahi hai. Aur maa sirf hum dono nahi,aap bhi chal rahi hamare saath. So aap dono jaldi se ready ho jaayein. Hum thodi der mein nikal rahe Hain.

After sometime, they all leave for a restaurant.

They order their coffees and start talking with each other.

Suddenly Akshat's phone rings and it's bhushan.

Akshat-Hello, Bhushan Bhai kaise Hain aap??

(Guddan gets sad listening to her father's name)

Bhushan- I'm good Akshat. Maine tumhe yeh batane me liye phone Kiya hai ki main aur kaushlaya parso waapis aa rahe Hain aur aakar Guddan ko apne saath le jaayeinge.

Akshat- That's great Bhai and cuts the call m

Maa- Kya keh Raha tha Bhushan??

Akshat- Maa,woh log parson aa rahe Hain Guddan ko lene.

Maa- Itni jaldi waapis aa rahein Hain woh log. Unka toh lamba plan tha na.

Akshat- Pata nahi maa, unhone trip cut short Kar Diya hai.

Guddan gets worried as she is going to meet her father for the first time.

On the other hand,in America

Angad- Maa aap log itni jaldi kyun ja rahe ho. Mujhe pata hai yeh sab papa ka hi plan hoga. Unhe bahut jaldi hogi na apni beti se Milne ki. Mujhe toh USS ladki se Bina mile hi nafrat ho gayi hai.

Kaushlaya- Don't say like this beta. She is your father's daughter and your elder sister. And I expect that whenever you will meet her, you'll behave with her politely.

Angad- But maa..

Kaushlaya- Beta please,aap toh itne samajhdaar Hain aur main jaanti Hoon ki aap Meri baat zaroor maaneinge.

Angad- Okay mom only for you,but main use apni behan vehan kabhi nahi maanne Wala.Saying this,he leaves from there.

Kaushlaya starts their packing for going back to India.

Part 5 ends

So, how's it?? Do like it and give your feedback

PS-Ignore the typos



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Posted: 6 years ago

Awsome

Chocolate scene was cute👍🏼

Continue soon partner😛

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