Guddan - OS - Values and Trust Epilogue Part-b Updated pg 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shona1991

Yeah no even I want to read after gudiya ka arrival Wala scane....

I think you are gonna have to wait a bit for that..... I have zero ideas at the moment... 🥱

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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

Nice, good length & simple epilogue👍🏼Liked Akshan phone convo.

Loved it😛.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

Thank you very much

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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Amazing

Want to read akshat's reaction on guddan's arrival

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Posted: 6 years ago
#25

Thank you so much guys.... This made my day ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Hey guys,I hope you guys are well. So this is Part-B of my epilogue since you guys wanted an AkshAn reunion. So without further ado,let's go~

After 3 days Guddan is finally going to the Jindal Bhavan. She sure missed everyone, Dadi the most. But why does her heart say that she missed her Jindal-Sahab too as much as Dadi? No no... That's not right! She shouldn't even think about like that. They don't share a normal Husband-Wife relation. Besides, She's sure that He doesn't even remember her by now! Yesterday, it was just a coincidence.But why does the mere thought of their conversation makes her heart beat one step faster? She doesn't know.

Guddan had her breakfast and she was just packing her bags when the doorbell rang. Revti went to receive it.

"Are, Jiju aap yahan?"

Guddan gasped and turned around.There he was, Akshat Jindal. But what was he doing here?

Akshat (A): How are you revti? Where is everyone?

Revti (R): Everyone is here. Please, come inside!

Akshat came inside and saw Guddan. He doesn't know what is happening but he feels relieved. Like finding a stream of water after a long journey in the desert. Guddan came forward.

Guddan (G): A-aap yahan?

A: Haan... Mein Tumhein lene aaya hu.....

G: Iski zaroorat nahi thi! You didn't had to burden yourself....

Akshat thought why did he?

*Flashback*

Akshat had just finished breakfast and was still thinking about Guddan. He saw his mother talking to the driver. Apparently, His mother was asking the driver to go pick up Guddan from the Gupta House. But Akshat , didn't know what happened but said and insisted that he will pick her up.

Dadi (D): Par lalla.... You have to go to work,right?

A: Its Ok, maa.... Kishore and Vardaan are there, right? They will manage.... And I will go there after I pick her up!

*End of Flashback*

Akshat shook his head and sighed. That's when, Bhushan-ji and Kausalya-ji came.

Bhushan (B): Damaadji... aap?

A: Ji.... woh mein Guddan ko lene aya tha......

B: Accha.... ( Turning to Guddan) Is this why You didn't want us to call him?

Akshat looked confused while Guddan looked a bit embaressed.

A: Kya Hua Papa?

B: Nahi , woh... I actually wanted to call you.... if you will come or I should drop her myself.... But Guddan didn't want me to call you..... You knew he will come, Beta?

G: J-ji?.... Ji ji....

Guddan didn't really know what to say. She didn't want to call Akshat as she was sure he won't come get her. But, He really did surprised her today.

A: Haan.... Maa bohot miss kar rahein hein, tumhein.....

Guddan smiled a little awkward. She then went to get her bag.

A: Papa.... I'm really sorry for what Durga-Bahu did. I know that just apologising won't do any good.... but...

B: No Beta... Why are you apologising? Guddan too had apologised many times. From the time she came here... she was apologising and crying asking me to forgive her. We can't always hold a grudge and live,right? That's what my bacchi says....

Today, Akshat Jindal realised that Guddan is one gem of a person. She has cleared all his doubts. She could never cheat or deceive him. She didn't marry him for money or all that pleasures. From that moment, He Trusts her, Values her,Forever and Always!

Guddan came with her bag. She bid everyone bye and walked towards the car with Akshat. They both sat in the car,with Akshat in the driver seat and Guddan in the passenger seat,beside him. Guddan was thinking about her arrival back in Jindal Bhavan. Akshat looked at her as she didn't wear her seatbelt. Guddan was lost in thoughts. Akshat cleared his throat. Guddan looked at him ,her trance broken but didn't understand what he was initiating. Akshat shook his head and sighed. Guddan suddenly realising , got into her purse and took some strepsils and forward it to him. Akshat looked at her dumbfound.

G: Kya? Lelijiye... Your throat will get better after having this.... It works for me always!

"What was God thinking before making her?" Akshat thought.

He then proceeded to come closer to Guddan, startling her a bit. She saw his hand coming towards her.

G: A-aap kya kar r-rahein hein? P-piche hatiye........

And closed her eyes. She felt a movement and feels something tied against her. She opened her eyes and saw the seatbelt. Oh.... so that was it. Still, She could hear her heart going dhak,dhak,dhak......

Akshat's condition was not so good either. He was a bit flustered seeing her close at that moment. He wanted to do things...... that may embarress or scare her. Its a good thing that he has self-control.

A: Waise..... You are coming back.... to Our house. I miss---- I mean Maa... missed you very much. I hope you won't leave again. And I'll make sure that you won't get to leave too....

Guddan looked at her husband. There are many things to be done and many things to be taken care of. She was ready, for all the storms that would come.

And so that's it! Yeah, I know there's not really romantic in this but I wanted to capture that moment where Akshat Jindal realises his wife,Guddan is such a gem! I hope you guys liked it! Be sure to like and comment! Till then, this is Pooh, signing off~ Toodles🤗



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awsome but ye Dil mange more 😆

Mjhe aur ek part chahiye mil skta hai qa😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Awesome yrr

But can u continue this

One more part plz 🤗🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Nazar utar lu mere AkshAn ki ☯️

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Posted: 6 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Awsome but ye Dil mange more 😆

Dil mange more hadd hai yaar 😂😂😂😂😂

Mjhe aur ek part chahiye mil skta hai qa😃

humesha Hume sab ka ek aur part chahiye until we are satisfied🤣 bechare humare writers 😛

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