Guddan - OS - Values and Trust Epilogue Part-b Updated pg 4

Hey guys, its Pooh! Its been a long time, hasn't it? The following shot was requested by "Akshananju" and I really took my sweet time in making it.🥱 I'm sorry "Akshananju" for being late and I really hope You will like this. Well, I hope every One of You will like this. Oh and here, Guddan might be a little bit bold and this shot is from where Durga accuses Guddan in the Christmas kaand! So without further ado, Let's go~

Guddan was standing there without any reaction, Akshat noticed. Today, Durga has crossed all limits. How can she just poke her nose in their business? Yes, its a known fact that he and Guddan doesn't really share a relationship like that of a husband and wife but Durga-bahu has no right to point that out,literally.

Durga (Du): Now what are you standing here for? Take this money and leave! Let us live peacefully.

Akshat (A): Durga-bahu----

Guddan (G): No Jindal-Sahab.... You don't have to say anything.

Dadi (Da): But beta.... She is wrong....

Guddan looks at Dadi and smiles. Then looks at Akshat. Akshat noticed a familiar spark in her eyes.

G: God has given Guddan the ability to speak so Guddan will speak for herself.

Guddan looks at Durga. For the first time in Durga Jindal's life, she felt a little fear..... no,it was something much more that.

G: So Mrs Durga- Jindal, You want me to get out of this house for something you have done?

Du: Look----

G: Now I have heard enough of your nonsense! So, you will listen to your "Saas" now whether you like it or not.

Everyone in the room gasped. They have never seen happy-go-lucky Guddan in such anger. Guddan turned to Dadi and said lowering her voice.

G: I'm sorry Dadi, but I'd like to have a few words with my Bahu!

Dadi smiled. Durga needs to learn a lesson anyway. Guddan turned to Durga who was still in shock.

G: Now where were we? Aah, That's it... You want to throw your Saas out of the house? Is that how is it supposed to happen? Weren't you the one who humiliated my father?

Du: You are the----

G: SHUT UP!!!

Everyone was shocked. Even Akshat. Guddan was angry, very angry! Guddan sighed.

G: Before, You talked a lot and I listened a lot. Now I will talk and You will listen. First of all, Who are you to give me this money? Are you my husband to give me this so called alimony? Second, Who are you poke your nose in Jindal-Sahab and my business? Whatever relation we share, it should not bother you. And finally, From where did you get the idea that I married Jindal-Sahab for money?

Akshat stood rooted in place. Things are getting out of hand. But he should trust Guddan.

Du: It should bother me because I'm the daughter- in- law in this house. And a daughter -in- law should keep her house safe from becoming a street market!

Da: Durga! You should know that you are talking to your Saas! Whether you like it not, Guddan is still married to Lalla, your sasur!

G: Dadi, let her talk... some people have their head way up in the clouds. They don't care about others feelings. Durga-ji, from the moment I have come to know that you were behind of my father's humiliation, I really felt like killing you!

Everyone gasped again. Guddan looked at dadi and signalled and apology.

G: I love my father the most in this world and You made him sad. He might have been humiliated but it was my heart whom you bled. You know, if you had done this kaand to me, I'd have forgiven you in a blink of an eye but this was too much and I will never forgive nor forget this, even if lord krishna tells me!

Durga was embaressed and angry. How dare this girl insult the daughter - in- law of Jindal Bhawan?

G: I know that You are the Bahu of this house and you seem way too proud for it! (Durga looked shocked) But let me tell you that your sasur has not given me any divorce and you know what that means right? I'm the SAAS of Jindal Bhavan! Till Dadi and Jindal-Sahab says!

Akshat looked at Guddan with a glint of pride.

G: Those who need to know the truth knows the truth. I don't need to beg my knees for you!

Guddan took the money bag and gave it to dadi. She turned to durga.

G: This is not your hard earned money that you give it and take it as you please. Everyone of this house has its rights. And for the love of God, Stop making your family cry!

Guddan took her bag. Watching this, The daughter - in - laws smiled. Was she leaving? Akshat didn't expect this. Was she leaving after all ?

Guddan turned to dadi and wiped her tears.

G: Don't cry Dadi! Guddan will not leave you.... ( Watches how the daughter - in - laws faces lost their color) Guddan will come back soon.... Now, my father needs me... I have to be there... But I promise.. I will never leave you.

Dadi smiled and nodded through her tears. Guddan left.The daughter - in - laws failed again. Moreover, now Durga-jindal was accused of the crime she did because of her ego. But, One person was still on Guddan, Akshat Jindal. She didn't bid him goodbye or a single glance. But Akshat jindal knew one thing... He was going to miss her badly, that's for sure! Hope she comes soon~

And...... yeah, that's it! Yeah, I know it was not up to the mark, but hey, I tried and this was a bit rushed! I just wanted to express how I felt for Guddan! I actually wanted her to react in some way rather than going out without saying anything and just crying. CRYING doesn't suit for our Guddan 🥱 Be sure to like and comment! Till then, this is Pooh, signing off~

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its amazing👍🏼

even i wanted guddu to react in the same manner bt anyways she was too hurt to react😒

please write one more part on how Akshat misses her😃

Originally posted by: Kammy02

its amazing👍🏼

even i wanted guddu to react in the same manner bt anyways she was too hurt to react😒

please write one more part on how Akshat misses her😃

Yes second part should be their.

Hi poooooohhhh.......

Welcome back......

It was amezing..

Kash kabhi aisi guddan Hume show me dekhne mile Jo Durga ki band bajaye.....

Write some more os on bold guddan

Nice OS I liked it 👍🏼

I like how u made Guddan speak up for the insult her father faced. She shld have really done this to keep Durga in her limits.

Awesome

I really like it.

Good one👍🏼

Plz write next part, about Akshat's thinking & feelings.

👍🏼finally updated

Next part try karo

Thanks a lot everyone! 🤗

Hey Guys! Pooh here! So some of you guys wanted a second part on how Akshat Jindal misses his Guddan! Since you guys are so nice and lovely, I couldn't ignore your wish!I tried my best and I hope you guys will enjoy it!

Akshat Jindal finished his work and closed his laptop.He took his glasses from his eyes keeping it on the bed and looked towards the balcony.It has been 3 days since Guddan Akshat Jindal had left to her house. And in these 3 days our Jindal-Sahab was troubled. He doesn't know what it is but he feels..... empty without her.He misses her. Her talks, Her laughs, Her lame jokes, Her cute face expressions..... Even Her whole being!. But why? Why does he feel his way? They didn't have a relationship which a normal couple does,but then,why does he feel like he want to see her? Why does it make him uncomfortable that she is not here with him ? Akshat began to remember their moments. From their first meeting to the last.

Akshat (A): What is happening to me? Why am I thinking about her now?

"Because You miss me, Jindal-Sahab!"

Akshat gasped and turned to the voice.

A: G-guddan!?

G: Haan? Kya huwa?

Akshat blinked his eyes. What happened? Really? She has been gone for three days and she's asking that! Does she have any idea how much he is troubled?

A: Really Guddan? You are really an idiot!

G: Hey! Don't call me an idiot! Hum bohot Intelligent hein! Teek hein!

A: Right..... So, You decided to finally come after making me wait for three days!

G: You know my reason right? I had to go! Besides, you must've been very happy that I've been gone for these 3 days.....

A: Are you out of your mind? Why would I be happy with you leaving? I never even wanted you to leave!

G: Uh-huh.... That's not what you said during the christmas party!

Akshat sighed. Why does this girl always remember the unnecessary stuff? He placed his glasses between his eyes.

A: Dekho Guddan-------

Akshat blinked. She was not here. Was all that his imagination?

A: Great Akshat Jindal! You have officially gone insane!

He wanted have some water. He looked at his jug. It was empty. He sighed again. He thought of calling one of his bahus and then thought otherwise. He thought of what they did to his wife. He went out of his room and was passing by his mother's room to get to the kitchen when he heard his mother talking to someone, in the phone.

Dadi (D) : (in the phone) Beta, Teri bohot yaad arahi hein!

Was Ma talking to Guddan? He doesn't know why but he felt a little envious that his mother could talk to Guddan so freely. Akshat knocked on her door. He heard a "ek minute beta" and " Haan andhar aajao". He wasted no time and entered the room.

D: Aree Lalla... tu is waqt?

A: Wo... Ma.... mein, kitchen mein jaa raha tha.... aur yahan mein aap kisi se baat kartha suna..... toh...

Dadi smiled.

D: Haan... Guddan se baat kar raha tha...

Dadi then said to guddan.

D: Beta ek minute.... Tum Lalla se baat karo......

Saying so, without hearing Guddan , she passed her mobile to Akshat and went out to give her son some privacy.

G:(from the phone) Aree, Dadi... uski zaroorat nahi-----

A: Kyu nahi hein zaroorat?

G: J-jindal-Sahab?

Akshat bit his tongue. He sounded desperate. But he feels relived hearing her voice, real this time.

A: Woh..... Kuch nahi! Tum.... kaisi ho?

G: Hum teek hein, aap kaise ho?

A: Teek hu.

G: Accha......

Both were silent after that. Akshat didn't know what to ask and Guddan didn't know what to say. It was awkward.

G: Toh phir hum rak------

A: Tum yahan kab aaogi?

Guddan's eyes widened. Jindal-Sahab was asking her when will she be there? What happened to him? It was unusual.

A: Hello?

G: Ji!

A: hmm.... It has been 3 days since you left....

G: Ji....

A: Everyone is missing you.......

G: Ji......

A: So, when will you come back?

Akshat didn't know what happened to him but he wanted to know when she will be back.

G: Hum.... kal.... I'll be back tomorrow!

A: Alright then..... Good night!

G: Ji.... Good night!

Guddan felt the phone hang up. What has gotten with Jindal-Sahab? She doesn't know but why does is her heart beating a little bit faster? She shook her head. Nothing is wrong. Besides, she's going back tomorrow!

Akshat looked at the phone and smiled a bit. His heart felt at ease. She will be back tomorrow!

And that concludes the epilogue. I hope you guys will like it! Be sure to like and comment! And I have a new FF coming up...... Its been brewing on my mind recently. I don't know about you guys, but I am absolutely heart broken on seeing Antara's character in the show!😭 I mean, Jindal-Sahab had always pictured her picture perfect in the past but now..... Well, The show will heal me. Anyways, I'll see you guys in the next FF , till then this is Pooh, signing off~ Toodles!🤗