FS- YEH ISHQ NAHI AASAN EK AAG KA DARIYA HAI. part 3 updated on pg-12

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Update kab milega ????

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pata nahi yaar kab milega 😒shayad subah mil jayega

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Shona1991

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Part-2

After 5 years ....

Guddan mene tumhe kitni baar kaha he kMeri bedsheet PE ek b crease nahi honi chahiye??

Guddan yeh mere cupboard me white aur red shirts kahase ayi?? Tumhe pata he na mujhe sirf black aur blue kapde pasand hai.....

Guddan tumne aaj firse Mera black cat Wala statue chupa Diya?? Kya karu main tumhara...tumhe pata hai na mujhe wo kitna pasand hai.....

Guddan:- are bus....bus b Karo....kitna bolenge aap Jindal Saab.....thakte nahi he Kya??

That's when akshu ask ..

Akshu:- guddan yeh tum mujhe Jindal Saab q bulaya rahi ho??Mera naam Akshan hai Akshan aur tum mujhe pyarse akshu bulati ho na to aaj q Jindal Saab bulaya???

Hearing this from akshu....yes akshu her and Jindal saab's son ...total carbon copy of akshat....both father-son never met but akshu is so like Aj...he love blue and black...he is very strict and possessive for cleaning and dusting....at the age of 5 he has grt test in food....he even like to cook but he is small na so guddan not allowe him...but ha kitchen ki safai he does perfectly but under the guddan's guidens...and guess wat he also like that creepy black cat statue....he wear spaces...and fitness band at the age of 5....hai na chota akshat???

Akshu:- guddan kaha kho gayi....

Guddan:- kuch nhi akshu...wo to bus aaj Hume tumhare papaki yaad AA gayi....waise tumhe pata he aaj unka bday he....

Akshu:- yes guddan mujhe yaad he....aur tumne wo papa k favorite black forest cake b banayi hogi na?? Jo Meri b favorite hai....Lao do na mujhe???

Guddan:- ha akshu humne banayi hai na....abhi late hai....

Akshu:- accha suno...janese pahele yeh batado k tumne Mera cat Wala statue kaha rakha hai??

Guddan:- nahi akshu firse nahi....tumhe pata he na wo Kali billi mujhe jara b pasand nahi...fir b mere lakh Mana Karne k baad b tumne kharid li....aaj to kuch b ho Jaye hum tumhe nhi denge...

Akshu:- nahi dogi guddan mujhe tum?? Pakka soch lo...warna yeh Jo tumne apni diary chupaki rakhi thi na wo me padh lunga....

Guddan:- are wah...tum itne b bade nhi hue k tum yeh dairy padh Sako samjhe to yeh blackmail karna band Karo....

Akshu:- accha Aisa hai??to me ek kaam krta hu yeh dairy na buddy ko de dunga wo padh Kar mujhe suna denge....bulaun buddy ko......

Buddy.....

Buddy......

Guddan:- accha suno...thik hai hum dete he....plz rawatji ko mat Dena....

Akshu smirk at his victory....and wink at guddan saying

Akshu:- Akshan jindalse jitna namumkin he guddan....

Guddan:- yeh lo apni Kali billi aur Lao humari dairy...aur ha bete sirf 5saal k ho tum aise khaduso wale dilouges mat Mara Karo samjhe....

Akshu:- whatever guddan.... saying he handed her the dairy and took the Cat statue and place it back to his table....

Accha suno ab cake dogi ya nhi???

Guddan:- ha ha late he.... saying she went murmuring yeh Kali billi to humari picha he nhi chodegi na?? Waha b Roz samne dikhti thi aur yaha b yeh Mr. Chote Jindal Saab ko b billi he pasand ayi aur wo Kali...billi b carbon copy nikli Jindal saab ki billi ki....huh....

After sometime she bring the cake to akshu...

Akshu:- guddan tum pure 5min derse ayi ho....

Guddan:- ha to wo cake ko sajane me time lag Gaya...accha Chalo kha k batao kaisa bana he... saying she serv him the piece in plate...

Akshu:- he took a bite and after eating he replied to her it's good guddan but usme 100gm chini Kam hai...aglibaar dhyan rakhna...

Saying this he started eating the cake while guddan just wipe a lone tears from her eyes and wish happy birthday to his Jindal Saab....

After sometime when guddan was watering plants in garden rawat come to her....

Rawat:- guddan....humne tumhara tohfa pahocha Diya he akshatko...aur humare sutr Bata rahe the k Saab tumhe dhund rahe he...5 saalose lagatar unki koshish chalu he hai...aur badi to humare upari adikari Tak b pahochayi gayi he...tumhe nahi lagta k ab tumhe wapas Jana chahiye....aur akshu ko b to akshatse milvana chahiye.....uska haq he guddan...

Guddan:- hum jante he rawatji...par humse unk samne Jana na ho payega ...humne unhe galat samjha...wo to antraji ko humare rishte k bare me Bata rahe the aur hum samjhe k unhone antraji ko Chun liya....aur Bina kuch soche samjhe humne Ghar chodne ka faisla le liya....yeh b nhi Socha k akshatji ka Kya hoga humare Bina....bus wahi guilt Hume unk pass janese rok Raha he rawatji....humne ek baapse uski khushiya chini he...wo sare pal chine he jisk wo hakdaar he...jab Hume unki aur unhe humari sabse jyada jarurat thi tab hum unhe chod Kar aa gaye....Hume unka samna karnese dar lag Raha he rawatji...hum gunhegaar he unki...aur ab shayad yahi humari saza he k Hume unk Bina he jeena hoga humesha....

Rawat:- yeh kaisi bate Kar rahi ho tum guddan....yadi tum prayatna karogi to shayad tumse Sab ho payega guddan....bus hua ab hum parso Indore k liye nikal rahe he..humne akshu ka admission waha Kara Diya he...aur waise b humari badli Indore me he Hui hai....to Hume waha Jana he hoga....aur isbaar tum b chalogi hum kuch nhi sunge...Jao aur apna aur akshu ka saman bandho...hum Siddharth se kahenge tumhari sahayta Kar de...

Guddan:- Kya aap Hume such me le jayege?? Aap nahi mange??plz na rawatji humse na ho payega yeh ....

Rawat:- me kuch nhi sunne Wala tumhara....hum ja rahe he aur yeh nirnay pakka he...

Guddan:-majnu....o majnu....Chalo humari help Kar do packing me.....Sab k Sab Hume khadus he mile he...pahele Jindal saab...fir yeh rawatji....yeh dono Kam the k Lord Krishna ne chote uncle k roopme akshu ko bhej Diya...wo to Maha khadus he....

Rawat:- guddan Kya badbada rahi ho?? Chalo jaldi kaam par Lago..tumhe akshu k b packing b karni he aur pata he na wo kaisa hai.....

Guddan:- are baapre rawatji...hum jate he... saying she literally run away from there.....

Hear rawat was seeing a beautiful red rose plant which was planted by guddan....he was admiring the flowers and was lost in him self....

Rawat(POV):- guddan sirf yeh me he janta hu k tumhe akshat k pas bhejte hue mujhe kitni taklif ho rahi he...pichle 5 saalome tumhari mujhe adat ho gayi he....tumhari masumiyat...tumhari muskurahat...tumhari wo Dil khush karne wali hasi...aur ankho me dikhti sacchai...sabse Hume prem ho Gaya he...ha guddan hum tumse bAhot prem karte he...itna ki tumhe khone k khayalse kaanp uthte he....yeh jante hue ki tum akshat k alava kisi aurko pyar Kar he nahi sakti fir b pata nhi kaise par mujhe tumse beintha mohabbat ho gayi he.....aur Meri he mohabbat Meri dushman na ban Jaye...Mera junun na ban Jaye isliye tumhara akshat k pas Jana he thik rahega...warna jab Mera prem diwangi ki had paar krne lagega tab tumhe humse dur karna humse na ho payega guddan....aur hum sach me swarthi nhi bana chahte...isi liye tumhara aur akshu ka wapas apne Ghar Lautna he sahi hoga......

Saying he left for packing his stuff......

So that's all guys...hope you all will like it....

Plz share ur views about this part guys....kaisa lAga....will eagarly wait for the feed back...

Ignore the typos guys.....

Edited by Shona1991 - 6 years ago

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Shona1991

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Posted: 6 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95
Update kab milega ????

Updated...have a look

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Shona1991

@Shona1991

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Posted: 6 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Akshananju
pata nahi yaar kab milega 😒shayad subah mil jayega

Hehehe updated...

Hope you will like this part...plz share ur view

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Shona1991

@Shona1991

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Posted: 6 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Chit15
Hi just read your story
Ohho so emotional and heart breaking for Akshan hope they meet soon😭 and enjoy good news of Guddan

Glad u like it....

Yes it is emotional...

Waise updated next part have look and do share ur views