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Part 1
It in was a stormy night in Jindal bhawan a big toofan was about to enter there life ... guddan and akshat were sleeping peacefully after consuming there marriage in true sense....it was past 12 with loudest sound of thunder rain started at that time someone knock the door of Jindal bhawan....lights on and everyone was out of room to see who was here at this odd hours of night .. guddan open the door and wat she saw she was shock...yes it was antra with a doctor and two nurses.... everyone was delighted seeing antra alive...when doctor narreted that she was found almost dead in River but she some how servive and was sleep in coma for whole 15years...just a day ago she woke up and inform us about you all and ur address...so congratulations everyone...and Mrs Jindal enjoy ur new life.... saying Dr and nurses went away...antra just come to akshat and hug him tightly....tears were streaming from 3 pair of eyes ..one with happiness...one with confusion and one with devastations... guddan went from there to her room...she clear the mess...change the wardrobe, curtains, and took her mom's picture and remove haar from antra's picture...and with heavy heart she left her room....and shifted to her poolside be tent....Durga come to guddan... seeing her so broken Durga just hugged her...at that moment she realized wat a grave mistake she has done in past by doing bad with guddan...she just let her cry in her embrace...she also cried with her...all the hatered for guddan was washed out ..while crying in her arm guddan sleep hugging her tight...Durga slightly cress her hair and laid her on bad...kiss her forehead and left from there....as both antra and akshat enter there room antra was happy while akshat was shocked...at that moment her remember guddan his life ...just a while ago they were lost in each other's arm....and now they are far apart from each other....askshat so wanted to be with guddan right now but he can't left antra alone also...so he just waited for antra to sleep but she was in no mood to sleep...she was on bed with akshat side hugging him and talking non-stop how she miss everyone and all...but akshat was not at all interested in the talks right now so he was just nodding his head but soon he also sleep...as antra saw him sleeping she crasses his face and kissed his forehead and sleep on his chest....
In the mandir guddan was doing arti... everyone was present there....at that time antra and akshat came....and she took a than from guddan's hand to do arti ...both antra and akshat did arti together... seeing this guddan eyes were welled up .. still she Managed to smile...after finishing arti antra asked about guddan...as akshat was about to tell her Guddan spoke...
Guddan:- hum guddan hai... guddan Gupta Dadi ki caretaker....
It prick yes it is...akshat control him self and was about to left for restaurant when both called him together...
Antra:- akshat ..
Guddan:- Jindal Saab....
Both look at each other then akshat and then antra ask him to do breakfast... guddan do ishara to him to eat ...then he sat there...after finishing nashta guddan come with gajar ka halwa for everyone....as antra was about to feed him halva akshat hurrydly started eating...and left the house....he was restless...he was all antra's in those years and now he finally move on ..why this?? He was head over Hill in love with guddan...antra was his past and guddan is his present and future....as akshat decide to talk to antra.. he received a text msg from guddan...
Guddan:- Jindal Saab hum jante he k aap kiss kashmakash me fase ho aur yeh b jante he k aap humse bAhot pyar krte he...par aapki yeh mushkil aasan Karne k liye humne ek fesla liya he.....abhi to nahi batayega par jaldi he hum jarur batayenge aapko...aur ha aap kuch b fesla q na le yeh guddan humesha aapka sath degi aur itna to guddan se jarur ho payega....aapki guddan
Akshat smile reading the text....he thought that indeed his guddan is mature...and she will fix everything for them....
Days started passing antra was doing her duty perfectly...she was the best saas...best mother.best bAhu and wife...but akshat distance him self from her...here guddan was also doing her work...she was not feeling well from quite a few days ...so she just went to Dr for chk up...when reports come it shows she was 3 months pregnant....she was so happy she just run to akshat room to inform him about the good news but wat she saw there she back out from there and runaway crying vigorously.....
Hear akshat has told everything to antra and she was now hugging him to make him calm and antra was just consoling him ..so at that moment guddan so them in Deep hug and left the place...she packed her bag and call airport to book ticket for herself....she left a letter in mondir and left the Jindal's house...as akshat come running to inform guddan about antra....He search everywhere but she was nowhere to b seen....when finally he saw a letter near Kanna murti....he began to read...
Guddan:- hum ja rahe he Jindal Saab...aap humesha antra di se pyar kariyega....unhone Jo khoya he itne Salome Sab ki kami Puri kariyega....hum nahi chahte the k aap aise ghut ghut Kar jiye isliye hum ja rahe he aapse dur....humse aapk Bina rehna to na ho payega Jindal saab par ab shayad yahi humari kismat he...hum kabhi fir milenge ya nhi pata nahi par aapki yaad aur aapka ehsas humesha humare sath rahega....aapki guddan aapse bAhot pyar krti he aur marte dum Tak aapki he rahegi...waise hum aapko thank you kajena chahte the Hume sahi mayno me aapki patni banane k liye...apna khayal rakhiyega akshatji aur gharme sabko humara dher Sara pyar dijiyega...aur ha Dadi..durgaji.... Lakshmiji. Saruji aur humare Bate Sabse kahiyega yeh guddan un Saab se bAhot pyar krti he....accha ab Hume Jana he...aap apna khayal rakhiyega aur plz Hume dhundiyega nahi....aapki guddan❤️🔥😻
A lone tears escape from...his eyes And Everyone also crying remembering guddan...tmantra console everyone and said that hum Sab mil Kar guddan ki le ayege yaha.... everyone just noded and left to there room ...while antra just saw to kanhaji and said...
Antra:- Maine bAhot der kardi na kanha aate ate??aaj yeh Mera parivar Mera na hokar guddan ka he...mere pati Jo mujhe diwano ki tarah chahte the aaj wo guddan k Jane k gam me jaise jima he bhul Gaye ho ...Mera Ghar...Mera pati...aur mere Ghar wale Saab guddan k ho chuke he aur me in sabko unki guddan se jarur milvaungi.... guddan me is gharki jaan basti he itna to main jaan he chuki hu ...aur is gharki jaan aur mere akshat k chahre ki khushiue wapas lane k liye me Saab kuch karungi...aur kanha tumhe Meri madad karni hogi....
At the other side.... guddan landed to the beautiful place in Simla.....where Vikram rawat and majnu both come to pick her... guddan has told everything to rawat....first he denied but then guddan ki kasam ne unhe Mana liye...and majnu was working with rawat so he also come to greet her chote... guddan hug both of them and they went to home.....
So guys how it??? Do let me know...next part is last part....and plz help me with the name guys....
Waiting for ur views guys.....
Ignore the typos....
Index
Part-1 above
Part-2 page no-7
Part-3 page no-12
Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
