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Superb u write so well😊
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It was very emotional part...
Everyone was in pain expect dayan...
Saru b sudhar gayi...
Hope she did ek accha kaam...
The song perfectly suits in the situation...
Everyone's emotions were on point...
Plz continue soon
Hey gurlz! I'm back with sixth part of my SS.
Well I didn't expected that I would be able to impress you all to such an extent, So THANKS to all of you for ur SUPPORT.
Suddenly Lakshmi's phone rang. She pick up the call without looking,
L- (sobbing) Hello, Kon bol rha h?
Driver - (in Hurry) Madamji mein Taxi Driver bol rha hu. Aapke ghar se subah jis Madam ko lekar mein Airport ke liye nikla tha unhe achanak se nose bleeding start ho gyi, Maine unhe kaha ki mein unhe hospital lekar chalta hu par unhone mujhe mana kar diya. Abhi kuch der pehle unki tabiyat aur bhi kharab ho gyi isliye mein unhe hospital lekar aa gya. Yeh unke phone se hi meine aapko call kiya h!
L- (loudly with shocked) Kya??
Everyone got tensed. The phone was about to fall from her hand but Akshat hold it. Akshat saw it was Guddan's call,
A- (sobbing) Guddan! Kaha ho tum? Dekho mujhe sab pata chal gya h, isliye t..tumhe mein khi nhi jaane dunga? Kaha ho tum? Tum jaha ho waha ruk..ko.. me..mein.. tumhe lene aa rha hu. Hello tu..tum.. kuch bol kyu nhi rhi ho? Dekho mein tumse bilkul gussa nhi hu. Please vapas aajao. Please...😢😢
Everyone told him to ask her to come back. Vardan took phone from his hand and kept the phone on speaker,
Driver spoke up everything whatever he told to Lakshmi. Akshat heart was shattered into millions of peices. Kishore holded him. Durga pick up the phone and asked,
D- Hello! Yeh jinka phone h mein unki bahu bol rhi hu. Please aap hume bataiye ki aap unhe lekar konse hospital gye h?
Driver gave her address and whole of the family went to the hospital.
Meanwhile on the way Akshat didn't talked to anyone.
As they reached hospital Lakshmi saw driver and asked,
L- Driver ji, Sasumaa kaha h ?
Driver told them that her treatment was going on and showed them the way to the room where her treatment was going on.
Everyone saw her through mirror. Akshat couldn't bear this anymore and went inside the room.
Doctor told him that her condition is getting worse day by day, he need to take extreme care of her but for the time it was necessary for her body to give response to the treatment as her body wasn't responding. He asked him to try to wake her up.
Akshat went near her and sit on the stool next to her. He holded her hand carefully,
(It's the Arijit Singh's version same played in series)
He asks her - (sobbing) Apne aap ko bohot smart samajhti ho tum? Par ek baat sunlo, duniya ki sabse zyada bewakoof ladki ho tum! K..kya.. socha tumne mujhse itni jldi picha chuda dogi aur woh bhi mujhe bina bataye, toh tumne bilkul galat socha.. , ky..kyunki.. mujhse picha chudana itna aasaan nhi h. Samjhi...
(He saw her connected through various machines and cried out)
Na maregi deewangi meri
Na maregi aawargi meri
Ki maregi zyada mujhe
Maut se narazagi teri
Dadi came inside the room and kept her hand on his shoulder. He saw her,
A- Dekho tumhari wajah se Maa kitni pareshan h , baaki s..sab.. bhi bahar bohot pareshan h aur ek tum ho ki jo sabko pareshan karke yaha khud aaraam se so rhi ho! Bohot so liya tumne chalo ab utho, meine kaha utho...!😭😭.
He shook her but no response from her side.
Kyun itna hua hai tu khafa
Hai zidd kis baat ki teri
Ki maregi zyada mujhe
Maut se narazagi teri
He was not able to bear this and started crying vigorously hugging Dadi. Dadi also cried hugging him back. Outside the room whole family was also broken seeing her in this state.
Jaan nisaar hai jaan ‘nisaar
Tere pyar pe mere yaar
Jaan nisaar hai, hmmhmmm…
He stood up and started moving towards temple. Everyone followed him and prayed for her. He took some sindoor from their and went back to the room. He filled her vermillion with it. He promised her that he will never leave her in any situation.
Duniya jamaane se
Rishte mitaye hai
Tujhse hi yaari hai hamari
Ek baar toh aa..
He started telling her all best things and best memories of her with him and started laughing remembering them , but no response from her. He pleaded her to wake up and a tear felled down from his eyes on her hand ,
Maine nibhaya hai
Kar ke dikhaya hai
Le teri baari
Ek vaari tu bhi pyar nibha
Suddenly her fingers showed some movement which was noticed by him.
Tu bhi pyar nibha
Oo yaara..!!
She slowly opened her eyes and saw him in front of her. She slowly spoke up,
G- Aap aaj phir humare sapne mein aa gyi. Hum ab aapko sapne mein dekhkr hi apna mann bhar l..lenge..
Akshat kept his hand on her cheeks and kissed her forehead. That was the moment when she realised he was really their.
Teri berukhi se hai badi
Umar intezar ki meri
Ki maregi zyada mujhe
Maut se narazagi teri
She turned her face away from him. He again made her look towards him . Tears were rolling down her cheeks, he carefully wiped them and holded her hand.
Kyun itna hua hai tu khafa
Hai zidd kis baat ki teri
Ki maregi zyada mujhe
Maut se narazagi teri
He just hugged her and she also responded it. Both of them released all their pain in each other's arms.
Jaan nisaar hai jaan ‘nisaar
Tere pyar pe mere yaar
Jaan nisaar hai jaan ‘nisaar
Tere pyar pe mere yaar
Both of them parted and wiped each other's tears. They joined their forehead and promised eachother to never get separate.
Jaan nisaar hai, hmmhmmm…!!
After sometime doctor came inside and informed that they can now take her back to home and asked everyone, especially Akshat to take care of her.
Everyone went home and started preparations for her welcome. Akshat was with her in hospital as some more tests of her was needed to be completed.
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Beautiful update😭😭
You have used my favourite song from kedarnath
😢😢😢😢😢 don't separate them
Beautifully written...
Loved the song....
And hope next part me guddu k survival chances b pata chal Jaye akshatko ...
Plz continue soon
Beautiful and u added my fav song
Update the nxt part soon
you expressed their pain with a beautiful song..keep it up dear..and continue soon..
Emotional update
The song was perfect for the situation of Akshan and please koi magic kar ke Guddan Ko thik kar do
Fantastic +emotional 😭😭
Well written
Loved it
Plz update soon