Teri Yaad Saath Hai (SS) Part 13 on pg15 below - Page 5

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Awesome update

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Heyya! I'm back with seventh part of my SS. Hope you all like it.


During the time when tests of Guddan were going on, Doctor called Akshat in his cabin,

D- Mr. Jindal mujhe aapko batate hue behad afsos ho rha h ki ur wife is suffering from last stage of blood cancer.Well unka blood group bhi bohot zyada rare h isliye unhe hum nhi bacha skte.

A- (with broken voice) Please Doctor, aap aisa mat kahiye. Koi to rasta hoga? Please save her. Me..meine.. pehle hi Antra ko kho diya h, agar ab Guddan ko kho diya toh mein ji nhi paunga. Please...

D- dekhiye Mr. Jindal agar aap iss tarah se tut jayenge toh Mrs. Jindal ko kaun sambhalega. Hum apni taraf se donor dhundhne ki poori koshish kar rhe h. Aap bhi koshish kijiye koi donor dhundhne ki, agar hume unke bone marrow se match ho vaisa koi mil jaye tab hum unki jaan bacha skte h.

A- Ji Doctor, mein Guddan ki jaan bachane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu. Doctor aur koi special care lene ki zaroorat h?

D- Yes! Aap try kijiye ki voh zyada se zyada khush rhe. No stress to her and medicines and checkup ka bhi khayal rkhiye ga. Other than that unki therapies se hone waale reaction ke liye bhi aapko tayaar rhna hoga so that you can console her.

A- Yes Doctor. Thanks.

D- Ur welcome. Take care of her and be strong.

A- Hmmm.

Akshat after that took her back to home.

Everyone welcomed her like a newly wedded bride. She was sitting in living room with everyone but she noticed that Lakshmi was standing alone their in a corner.

G- Lakshmi bahu! Aap ab bhi humse baad naaraz h.

L- N..nhi Sa..Sasumaa, aur.. aisi koi baat nhi h.

G- toh phir aap humse baat kyu nhi kar rhi.

Lakshmi just hugged her. She also hugged her back

G- galti aapki nhi humari h. Please hume maaf kar dijiye.

L- Nhi Sasumaa. Galti meri h ki meine aapko zidd karke roka nhi.

A- Nhi Lakshmi bahu! Guddan sahi keh rhi h, apki koi galti nhi h. I'm sorry ki meine aap par aur Saru bahu par bewajah gussa kar liya.

L- Nhi AJ. Please aap humse maafi maangkar hume aur sharminda mat kijiye.

S- sahi keh rhi h Lakshmi dii. AJ aap humse maafi maangkar hume aur sharminda kar rhe h. Aur Sasumaa Lakshmi dii ne apna vada nhi toda, voh mein thi ki jisne aapki saari naa sun li thi aur sabko bata bhi diya, SORRY.

G- Nhi Saru bahu aap humse maafi mat mangiye. Aur vaise bhi ab aap humare dost ban gyi h toh dost se bhala kaun maafi maangta h?

On listening this both Lakshmi and Saru hugged her. Revati also joined them. Durga was looking at them with guilty in her eyes.

G- Durga bahu!

D- Ha..haaa..😔😔

G- Aap nhi hug karegi hume. Humse abhi bhi aap gussa h?

On like this Durga ran and hugged her and apologised her for her mistake and also promised her to complete all her duties towards her and family.

Vardan took a picture of all five of them. Whole of the family once again started laughing and talking forgetting about sorrows.


Akshat went to his room. He went near Antra's painting to light up diya but there he saw a letter. It was the same letter which Guddan kept before leaving. He started reading the letter.

(Tears started flowing down his cheeks)

(It's reprise version by Deepiksha Raina {movie Rustom})

Tere bina jeena kya

Tere bina jeena kyu

Tere bina jeena kya

tere bina jeena kyu


Dear Antraji,

SORRY par aaj hum yeh letter apko apna dard batne ke liye likh rhe h. Pehle toh hum apko dher saara THANKYOU kehna chahte h kyunki aapke wajah se hi hume humari zindagi ka sabse anmol tohfa mila, Jindal Sahab! Aap ko hum bata nhi sakte ki aapka yeh tohfa mere liye kitna zyada anmol h. Aapka diya hua yeh tohfa itna anmol h ki ab hum iss tohfe ko hamesha hamesha ke liye chhodkar bohot durr ja rhe h!

(Tears were rolling down his cheeks continuesly)


Tujhe kaise bataun yaara

Tere bin mujhpe kya gujri

Wo jindigi hai hi nahi

Jo tujhse juda gujre


Dadi ne hume aapke baare mein bohot kuch bataya aur aap humesha sab kuch sahi kehti thi. Sach kaha tha apne ki Jindal Sahab hai hi aise ki koi bhi unse pyaar kar baithe.

(He was very happy after reading this)


Dhal jaun main tujhme

Ghul jaun main tujhme

Mil jaun main tujhme

Yaara..

Dhal jaun main tujhme

Ghul jaun main tujhme

Mil jaun main tujhme

Yaara..


Haa sahi kaha tha aapne kyunki mujh jaisi galtiyon ki dukaan ko bhi pyaar ho gya unse. Bohot zyada pyaar ho gya par hum unhe yeh bata nhi sakte kyunki ab humare pass zyada time nhi bacha h. Sahi suna aapne hum jald hi aapke aur Maa ke pass aane wale h. Hume maaf kar dijiye kyunki hum apko diya hua waada todkr Jindal Sahab ko hamesha hamesha ke liye chhodkar bohot durr ja rhe h.

(He sit on the bed holding the letter)


kahin se bhi chalun main

kahin se gujrun main

Tujhse hi aa milun main

Yaara..


Humari maanzeelein nahi pata tha ki iss tarah milegi par ab waqt aa gya h ki woh manzeelein alag ho jaye. Issi mein sabki khushi h. Hum unhe aapna yeh raaz batakar aur dukhi nhi kar skte kyunki aapke jaane ka asar aaj tak un par he. Bas kuch aakhri khwahishen meri thi jo mein poori karna chahti thi unke saath par ab mere pass unke liye bhi time nhi bacha.

(He was totally engrossed in reading the letter)


Jara si sirfiri hoon

Jara si baabri hoon

Jaisi bhi hoon teri hoon

Yaara…


Hum aapse voh saari khwahishen share karna chahte h kyunki aapse hi aaj tak apni saari baatein batakar humne humara mann halka kiya h.

(He was smile a bit on reading all of them)


Teri palko tale meri sanse chale

mere saanse chale tere dam se


Hum unhe batana chahte the ki hum unse kitna pyaar krte h aur yeh bhi jaana chahte the ki voh humse pyaar krte h ki nhi, unki saath pehli baarish mein dance karna chahte the, humne jo sapne apni shaadi ke liye dekhe the voh unke saath poore karna chahte the, unke saath thand mein barf se khelna chahte the, unke saath long drive par jana chahte the, apni bahuon ke sapne poore hote hue dekhna chahte the aur aapka aur Jindal Sahab ka sapna poora karna chahte the.

(He was shocked after reading this)


Dhal jaun main tujhme

Ghul jaun main tujhme

Mil jaun main tujhme

Yaara..


Haa Dadi ne hume bataya ki Jindal Sahab ko aapse ek beti chahiye thi par aap ke pass waqt nhi tha aur shayad unka yeh khwaab hum bhi poora nhi kar aayenge.Maafi chahte hum aapse ki hum aapse kiya hua waada tod rhe h.

(He slowly wiped his tears)


Dhal jaun main tujhme

Ghul jaun main tujhme

Mil jaun main tujhme

Yaara..


Aapse apni mann ki baat share karke bohot accha laga.

Aapki pyaari,

Guddan.


He kept the letter in his pocket and went to washroom and washed his face. He came out and lighted up the diya in front of Antra's and his mother in law's painting and promised them to fulfil all her wishes.




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plmzaq thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Superb update

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful

Bt it was too short

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Posted: 6 years ago
#45

Finally Durga hugged Guddan and Akshat reading Guddan's letter was emotional

Nice update

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Posted: 6 years ago
#46

It's heart wrenching for Akshat. ...💔

But I know Akshat guddan ki sari wishes poori karega...

Or main janti Hu ki guddan ....antara or Akshat ki wish ki b poora karegi...☺️


Just love the way u write.....

N Ur lyrics selection is just awsm.... Do continue sooooooooooon ....n update Ur write up in contents list too

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Posted: 6 years ago
#47

You made me emotional....

It was so heart touching...

Hope unko beti ho Jaye ..

Continue soon ..

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Superb

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#49

👏👏

Superb

My fav song❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
#50

Absolutely amazing story..read all the chapters in one go..plz cont...all d bezztt...

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