Teri Yaad Saath Hai (SS) Part 13 on pg15 below - Page 3

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So guys here is the fourth part. Hope you all like it.


Akshat saw that Guddan was not there in the room. He thought for a while and went to terrace. He saw Guddan was sitting near poolside. He went to her he kept his hand on her shoulder. Guddan gave a smile to him and asked him to sit. Akshat sit near her.

G- Jindal Sahab! Aapse ek baat puchni thi. Kya hum puch sakte h?

A- Haa Guddan! Dost hu mein tumhara aur saath mein pati bhi hu. Kya baat he batao Guddan.

He held her hands in his.

G- Jindal Sahab. Agar kabhi kissi majboori ke karan hume aapse durr jana pade toh aap humse nafrat nhi karenge na??

A- Yeh tum kya bol rhi ho Guddan? Tum durr jane ki baat kyu kar rhi ho? Kya tum mujhse koi baat chupa rhi ho?? Bolo Guddan? Chup kyu ho?

Guddan realised what she said.

G- Voh Jindal Sahab ghabra ne waali koi baat nhi h. Voh actually humari dost h Vaishnavi, yhi Bhopal mein rhti h. Voh usne kal chota sa getogether rkha h isliye hum usse milne jaana chahte h. Bas yhi baat h.

A- Agar yhi baat h to thike. Kal hum tumhari dost ke ghar chalenge.

G- (shocked) Kya? (hesitantly) Mera matlab h ki hum sirf ladkiyaan waha milne waali h! Bohot time baad hum apni saari saheliyon se milne waale h. Please hume jaane dijiye.

A- thike. Subah tumhe driver chhod dega. Par mein tumhe shaam ko pick kar lunga aur iss baat ke liye tum mujhe mana nhi kar skti.

G- thik he Jindal Sahab.

He asked her to get back to their room.

As they were about to go back to their room Guddan's leg got twisted. She was about to fall but Akshat hold her.

A- Tum kabhi nhi sudhrogi. Moch aagyi tumhare pair mein. Let me help you.

Before she could speak something, Akshat pick her up and started moving towards their room. Akshat applied ointment on her leg, gave her a pain killer and helped her to sleep on bed. For the first time there was no pillow boundary between them. Akshat switch off the lights and slept on his side facing towards her.

It was really a long but precious night for Guddan becoz this was the last time she was sleeping with him before her death. Guddan started thinking about how they met, how they were hating eachother and how that hate turn into affection. Slowly affection turned into friendship and now it has changed into love. Yes she was indeed in love with her Jindal Sahab and When she realised it and decided to confess it her life gave her the biggest pain. Now she can't confess it to him.

She stood up and moved towards Antra's painting. She took a pen and paper and wrote something. She kept the letter near Antra's painting below the flowers and started packing her luggage.

She packed her luggage, she also kept a photo album which she made herself consisting all her photos with her precious gem , her Jindal Sahab and her family. She also kept a small picture of her mother and Antra. She kept all the gifts in her bag which was given by her Jindal Sahab to her.

She got ready and went near Akshat.

G- (sobbing) Sorry Jindal Sahab. Hum apko chhodkar nhi jana chahte par hum majboor h. Aap apna aur poore parivaar ka acche se khayal rkhiye ga.

With this she kissed his forehead and moved out of the room with her luggage.

It was early morning 5 o'clock. Everyone in house were in deep sleep becoz of effect of sleep pill which she and Lakshmi added in kheer last night.

Lakshmi was waiting for her in living room. She saw her coming down with her luggage. She helped her in keeping her luggage in taxi. She hugged her and cried, also insisted her not to leave but Guddan was firm at her decision. Final time she saw the house and said goodbye to Lakshmi.

She sit inside the taxi and as the taxi was going away from house, she started crying vigorously ,

(It's the reprise version by Shreya Ghoshal)


(She started remembering how he saved her when she was locked in a room inside cardboard box)


Aankho Mein Tere Sayeh

Chahu Toh Naa Paye

Yado Se Teri Fasla Haye


(She remembered how he wore pink shirt gifted by her and also how he consoled her inside cupboard)


Jake Bhi Tu Naa Jaye

Thehara Tu Dil Mein Haye

Hasrat Sa Banke Kyu Bhala


(She remembers her marriage and how he saved her from dutta)


Kyu Yaad Karti Hu

Mitti Hu Banti Hu

Mujhko Tu Laya Yeh Kaha


(She remembers how he saved her at goa on the beach from drowning, how they got entangled in dori during makarsankratri )


Benaam Rishta

Benaam Rishta Ho Bechian Karta Jo

Ho Na Sake Jo Darmiyaan


(She remembers how he helped her with her blouse by closing his eyes with her palm and also remembered how he helped her with her saare pallu)


Darmiyaan Darmiyaan

Darmiyaan Darmiyaan

Kuch Toh Tha Tere Mere Darmiyaan


(She remembered how he fed her mango and how he did her checkup when she was ill)


Darmiyaan Darmiyaan

Darmiyaan Darmiyaan

Kuch Toh Tha Tere Mere Darmiyaan


(And with this she cried out all her pain into tears)


Kuch Toh Tha Tere Mere Darmiyaan.....



I know that it was not up to the mark.

But still share me how is it!

And Guess this questions!

Are akshan really gonna get separate or has destiny planned something else for them?

Who was the one who overheard their conversation?

What was in the letter?

Also guys did you noticed something different in my SS??🤔🤔

Edited by riddy254 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome please update next part soon very saddened story 😢😢😢

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Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update

I m really excite about the peraon who has heard their convo i wish ki vo akshat ho

Plz dont separate Akshan and continue asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey guys!

I'm back and here is the fifth part of my SS.Hope you all like it.



Late Morning :-

Akshat woke up with jerk when he saw time.

A- Guddan 10 baj gye aur tumne mujhe uthaya nhi?

There was no response from other side.

A- Guddan mein tumse baat kar rha hu (He turned to her side and was shocked not to find her next to him)

A- (to himself) Yeh Guddan kaha chali gyi?Let me check.

He stood up and checked every corner of the room but she was not there. He heard some voices from living room so he went there.

In living room Akshat and every family members were equally shocked as they all woke up too late.

Da- Lala! Tu bhi itni der se utha? Chal koi baat nhi Guddan ko utha de.

A- Kya? Mera matlab h ki Guddan niche hi h na?

R- Nhi Jiju. Dii toh niche nhi h. Hume laga ki voh aapke saath kamre mein h.

B- Haa Damadji. Guddan to niche nhi h.

A- Papa , Maa , Revati Guddan kamre mein bhi nhi h. Mein ne usse poore kamre mein dhoondh liya par voh khi nhi mili.

V- Papa, Guddan Maa aise bina bataye toh kahi nhi jaati. Shayad aapko unhone bataya ho aur aap bhul gye ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai. Aap yaad karne ki koshish kijiye.

Akshat remembers how last night she took his permission to go at her friend's place.

A- Haa yaad aaya. Guddan kal apni kissi dost shayad Vaishnavi naam ki dost ke ghar jaane ki baat kar rhi thi. Bhopal mein.

R- Par Jiju, dii ki Vaishnavi naam ki koi dost hi nhi h. Jab tak mujhe pata h dii ki sirf ek hi dost h Anjali jo ki USA shift ho gyi h apne husband ke saath.

Akshat was shocked after hearing this. He was thinking that where did Guddan went and why did she told him lie. Everyone were worried about Guddan but Lakshmi was standing their alone in a corner, emotionless and in her own world.

Suddenly Durga came from upstairs and spoke,

D- Meine pehle hi sabko kaha tha ki uss Guddan par bharosa mat karo, par kissi ne meri baat nhi suni. Ab dekh liya natija bhaag gyi voh aurat ghar chodke.

Lakshmi's trance was broken by her voice and she folded her fist in anger on listening her words .

Akshat- (with anger) Bass kijiye Durga bahu. Guddan aapki Saas h . Tamiz se baat kijiye unke baare mein. Aur yeh kya keh rhi h aap. Guddan ghar chhodkar kyu jayegi? Aap apni maryada bhulye mat warna mujhe apni maryada bhulni padegi.😡😡😡

K- Durga! Papa sahi keh rhi h. Tum Guddan Maa par aise kaise ilzaam lga rhi ho. Tum abhi kamre mein chli jao. Sab pehle se hi bohot pareshan h, tum aur pareshan mat karo.

D- Nhi Kishorji, aaj mein na hi chup rhungi aur na hi yha se jaaungi. Chahe aaj bhale mujhe AJ hi dhamki kyu na de mein chup nhi rhungi.

Lakshmi was fuming with anger but she realised her promise to Guddan and tried to calm down herself.

A- Aap kis saboot ki buniyaat par Guddan par yeh ilzaam lga rhi h?

D- (smirking) Saboot , huhh...! Saboot toh apke kamre mein hi h AJ. Guddan ka saaman aapke room mein se gayab h. Apne abhi poora room check kiya tha na toh kya aapne yeh notice nhi kiya.

Akshat thought for a while and realised that indeed Guddan's stuff was not present in their room. He remained silent.

D- Chup kyu h AJ. Boliye. Areee aap kya bolenge, ab mein bolti hu. Bhaag gyi woh property aur restaurant apne naam karvake, kaha tha meine chor h voh ladki. Sirf paison ke liye shaadi ki aapse par kissi ne meri baat nhi suni aur yeh mein aise hi nhi bol rhi hu. AJ abhi kuch hi din pehle aapne aapki saari property ke rights Guddan ke naam par kar diye the. Uska toh kaam ho gya isliye bhaag gyi voh aurat. Uske jaise beraham aur bikaoo aurat toh meine aaj tak nhi dekhi.

Lakshmi anger was out of her hold. She came in front and was about to speak but someone from door spoke up,

S- bass kijiye Durga dii. Aur kitna kharab bolegi aap Sasumaa ke baare mein?

Everyone were shocked to see Saru standing on the door with lawyer and some files in her hand.

D- Saru tum? Kaha gyi thi tum itni subah aur tumhe pata bhi h ki ghar mein kya hua h? Voh Guddan..

Durga was about to speak but Saru showed her hand and ask her to stop.

S- bass Durga dii. Bohot bol liya aapne aur bohot sun liya sab ne. Bass ab aur nhi. Aur AJ aap kyu chup khade khade Durga dii ki baatein sun rhe h? Aap toh jante h na ki Sasumaa aisa kuch nhi kar skti. Aur Sasumaa ne koi chori nhi ki h, aur iss ka Saboot mein dungi. Yeh rhe papers jiske hissab se Sasumaa ne kal hi property ke saare rights vapas AJ ke naam par kar diya.

Lawyer showed papers to everyone and told them how she yesterday met him and transferred property back to Akshat.

Saru faced towards Lakshmi and asked her,

S- sahi kaha na meine Lakshmi dii ( a lone tear escaped her eyes which was noticed by everyone)

Akshat realised something and asked Lakshmi,

A- Lakshmi bahu aap ko pata h ki Guddan kaha h?

Lakshmi was standing their without any expression.

S- Main jaanti hu ki aap sab mujhpar bharosa nhi karte par bhai ke diye hue dhoke k baad jab Sasumaa ne mujhe bachaya tab se mein Sasumaa ki shukrguzaar hu isliye ab mein unke baare mein kuch galat nhi sunungi. Aur aap Lakshmi dii boliye na , kaha h Sasumaa. Please boliye and she started crying.

Lakshmi was unable to bear this and she also started crying vigorously hugging Saru. Everyone over their were shocked to see them like this but slowly Akshat spoke up,

A- Kya chupa rahi hai aap dono? Boliye kaha h Guddan? Dekhye mera mann bohot ghabra rha h, please bataiye kaha h Guddan? Please (tears started forming in his eyes)

S- (sobbing) AJ voh Sasumaa, voh...voh...😭😭

A- Voh kya Saru bahu? Boliye!

S- AJ voh Sasumaa hamesha ke liye ghar chhodkar chli gyi h.😢😢

Akshat stepped back on listening her words.

A- Yeh aap kya keh rhi h Saru bahu, Guddan aisa kyu karegi bhala? Aap ko shayad koi galatfehmli hui h. Dekhiye ne Maa yeh kya keh rhi h? Nhi Guddan aisa kuch nhi karegi.

But soon he realised her words which she spoke last night.

S- Nhi AJ, mein sach keh rhi hu aur Sasumaa kis kaaran se ghar chhodkar kar gyi h yeh bhi mujhe pata h.

Lakshmi was looking at her with shocked expression and Saru replied to her,

S- Haa Lakshmi dii, Kal meine aap ki aur Sasumaa ki saari baatein sun li thi.

A- Konsi baat? (raising voice) Kahiye!

S- ( Handing medical reports of Guddan which she brought from hospital to him ) AJ Sasumaa ko blood cancer ka last stage h. Au..aur... doctor ne kaha ki unke bachne ka koi zaariya nhi h , un..unke.. pass akhri teen mahine bache h😭😭😭

Everyone was shocked after hearing this, Dadi was about to fall but Kaushalya and Siddhi holded her , Durga was standing emotionless, Kishore and Vardan were consoling Bhushan, Angad was consoling Revati, Saru and Lakshmi were crying vigorously hugging eachother while Akshat sit on the floor with thud. Tears were rolling down his cheeks on remembering Saru's words.

(It's sad version by Atif Aslam and Shreya Ghoshal)


(He started remembering how they met first time)(He rememberd how their arguments)

O Re Piya

O...


(He remembered how they got married and how she was leaving him and his house after truth of their marriage came out)


In Faaslo Ka Ye Faisla Kyun

Dil Ne Mere Kar Liya

Khud Hi Na Jaane Kaise Jeeyega

Hoke Ye Tumse Juda


(He remembers her smile, her mistakes and mess created by her in their room)


Main Waari Jaawan

Main Waari Jaawan

Saath Ho Ke Ho Ya

Ve Kasoor Re


(He remembered the moment when he helped her removing biggest fear of her life , her chits)


Naadaan Se Dil Ki

Har Khwahish Roothi

Sapne Huye Hai Saare Choor


(He remembered how she consoled him during fufaji's death)


Piya O Re Piya

Piya Re Piya Re Piya


(He also remembers how she left Jindal Mansion and him becoz of blame on her to kill Durga)


Piya O Re Piya

Piya Re Piya Re Piya...


He shouted her name from bottom of his guts and cried,

A- GUDAAAANN.......😭😭😭


But suddenly Lakshmi's phone rang,

L- (sobbing) Hello! Kya??? 😨😨


Must share how is it!


Who was the mystery caller?

Why was Lakshmi shocked?

Was this the end of Akshan's love story?


Note:- Nobody answered my yesterday's question! Didn't you guys noticed something different in my SS??

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Saru bahu v sudhar gyi

U always add beautifull lyrics in ur ss it suits them so perfectly

It was emotional chapter

Plz plz continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Saru bahu v sudhar gyi

U always add beautifull lyrics in ur ss it suits them so perfectly

It was emotional chapter

Plz plz continue soon

@bold- true! U got it!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Good update

Saru sudhar gayi chalo acha hai.hope Akshat finds Guddan soon and takes care of her

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Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

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Beautiful update😭😳

Continue soon

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