Journey From Khadoos Jindal to Romantic Jindal {Completed} - Page 30

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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful update dear
Loved it
Loved akshan convo and akshat so protective about guddan that he cannot see her in. Pain
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Waiting
Please update soon😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
Haaye...😳
Awesome yarr
Thnx for writing this ff..👏

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Posted: 6 years ago
Patience please!!!!!!
Just a bit busy.
Will try to update sooner😊😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshan5148

Patience please!!!!!!

Just a bit busy.
Will try to update sooner 😊😊

okay😊😊actually this FF is too good so can't wait to read further
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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 27

It's been a week since that horrible incident. Guddan is comparatively better now. Nimisha has completed her 3rd month. It's a Sunday today.

AJ wakes up and sees guddan sleeping peacefully. He smirks and starts playing with her hair.

Guddan: akshat sone dijiye na kya kar rahe hain. Aapne to kal kaha tha aaj sunday hai aur aapko nai jana hai office. (While pushing his hand away)

AJ: main kya kar raha hoon. (Kissing her ears).

Guddan: akshat(in a sleeepy voice) aap itni jaldi kaise uth gaye.(while pulling the blanket above her face).

AJ: (slowly pulling the blanket down and kissing her cheek) bas yunhi jaag gaya aur dekha ek khoobsurat si ladki soyi hai mere side pe to usse thoda pareshaan kar loon.

Guddan: matlab aap mujhe sone nahi denge.

AJ: not really. Do you remember what you did to me 2 days back and places kisses on her neck.

Guddan: matlab ab aap mujhse badla lenge while lifting his head.

He only smirks.

Flashback Starts

Its early morning akshan are sleeping. AJ's phone starts ringing and guddan wakes up. She is about to wake up AJ but sees him sleeping peacefully. She then herself gets up to check the phone. She sees its from office and receives.

Guddan: hello

Person: hello mam, wo AJ Sir ki bahut important meeting thi aaj 4 baje but ab wo reschedule hogayi hai 11 baje.

Guddan: theek hai i will let him know.

Person: thank you mam.

Guddan: (sitting by his side) akshat aapke office se phone tha. You have an important meeting at 11.

AJ: abhi time hai let me sleep and puts his head in her lap.

Guddan: (caressing his hair) aapko he late hojayega. Phir kahenge aap tumne uthaya kyun nahi.

AJ: (while holding her hand) aajao tum bhi sojao. Itni subah subah kya krna hai tumhe.

Guddan: nai ab main uth he gayi hoon to I will freshen up and kisses his forehead.

AJ: suno take care. Though the wound has healed but phir bhi.

Guddan: ok

Guddan sees its 8: 30 only and goes to washroom. When she comes out she sees AJ is still sleeping and realises he will get late for the office. She thinks of an idea.

She goes near him and opens the two buttons of his kurta.

AJ: (eyes closed) dekhiye madam agar aapko lagta hai ki aapke ye sab krne se hum uth jaayenge to aap galat and he turns away from her snuggling more into the pillow.

Guddan turns him towards her and opens her hair which was wrapped in towel and shakes her head on his face and water drips down from his face down to his body as she had opened the buttons too.

Before AJ could react she rushes and opens the bolt of the door. But before she could leave the room he catches her and pins her to the wall.

AJ: pata haina tumhe mujhe thande paani se nafrat hai(water dripping down his face)

Guddan: akshat suniye na wo main wo

AJ: kya hua Guddan Akshat Jindal itni gabrahat (while taking her dupatta and wiping his face clean).

Just then aarti enters the room

Aarti: bhabhi wo mujhe aapki... (Turns around closing her eyes) sorry sorry sorry.

Guddan pushes AJ and goes to aarti.

Guddan: chal aaru kya bol rahi thi tu and leaves the room winking at AJ and passing him a flying kiss.

Flashback Ends.

Guddan: akshat please nahi na. Hogaya na ab woh. Bhool jao na ab.

AJ: no way Mrs. Jindal and pulls her above him and locks his hand on her waist.

Her hair completely falls on him from both side. He tucks her hair behind her ears. She buries her face in the crook of his neck.

AJ: wo main soch raha tha tumne us din exactly kiya kya tha.

Guddan: kuch b to nahi utna.

AJ: utna, acha madam. Haan yaad aagaya mujhe, button khole thay tumne mere kurte k.

Guddan: (lifts her face from his neck) to uska kya matlab hai, aap bhi with widened eyes.

AJ: main bhi ka kya matlab hai, jab tum kar sakti ho main kyun nahi. Aaj kal to waise bhi gender equality ka zamana hai.

Guddan: (trying to release herself from his hold) aap aisa kuch bhi nahi karenge.

AJ: main bilkul aisa he karunga, in fact soch raha hoon us din se thoda kuch zyada he kar loon.

Guddan: (gulping hard) zyada matlab???

AJ: bolne main wo maza nai hai jo kar k dikhane main hai and with that he opens the first button of her shirt.

Guddan: akshat dekhiye wo main kya keh rahi thi...

AJ: (placing a finger on her lips) ssshhh... Opens the second button.

Guddan closes her eyes and in that very moment AJ kisses her on the lips deeply.

AJ: (while parting) i would never do anything without your will and permission.

Guddan: thankyou and I lov... And bits her tongue.

AJ: kya kaha tumne abhi

Guddan: kya, thankyou.

AJ: nai uske baad

Guddan: kuch b to nahi (lowering her head)

AJ: Maine to kuch suna

Guddan: kya suna bataye zara

AJ: wo maine, wo tumne kaha...

Guddan: kya hua boliye na

AJ: kuch bhi nahi maine he galat suna hoga.

Guddan: dekha maine B to kaha tha and hugs him. Chaliye aap fresh hojaye. Phir neeche B jaana hai.

AJ: ok. In the washroom he thinks i am pretty sure she said something I love but Y would she deny it then. But i have actually not proposed her yet.

Guddan: (thinking and blushing) pagal guddan ye kya krne jaa rahi thi.

He comes out of the washroom.

AJ: guddan tum fresh ho jao main neeche jaata hoon. I will make breakfast today.

Guddan: ok.

Once done guddan goes to the kitchen and sees AJ preparing the breakfast.

Guddan: is it too early koi bahar kyun nai aaya hai.

AJ: may be its Sunday.

Guddan: hmmm. May i help.

AJ: you only see (while frying something).

Guddan: ok as you wish.

AJ: ouch (while holding his eye).

Guddan: (gets down from the counter) akshat kya hua zara dikhaye (removing his hand).

Guddan turns of the gas and sees its not his eye but cheek that burnt due to the oil splatter. She makes him sit on the chair.

Guddan: zara dekhne dijiye and blows on it.

AJ: guddan bahut jal raha hai.

Guddan: rukiye main ice laati hoon.

She gets an ice cube and and while walking towards AJ her dupatta gets stuck in the table and she falls on his lap. She tries to get up but AJ holds her tight.

Guddan: akshat chodiye na mujhe ice lagana hai.

AJ: to lagao Maine kab mana kiya. Maine haath thodi pakde hain tumhare.

She rubs the ice cube slowly on his cheek while constantly blowing it. All this while AJ is staring at her and he kisses her neck.

Guddan: akshat kya kar rahe hain aap. Ye kitchen hai aapka bedroom nahi. Koi dekh lega. Aur please pehle mujhe ye krne dijiye.

AJ: ok with a sad pout

When she is done she kisses the slight burn mark and cleans the water left on his cheek due to the ice.

Guddan: dard kuch kam hua.

AJ: haan thoda better hai.

Guddan: chaliye chhodiye mujhe. Main breakfast ready krti hoon. Abi sab uth rahe honge.

AJ: wo main keh raha tha (while tucking her hair behind the ears)

Angad: (while entering the kitchen) sorry sorry sorry (turning around) kya bhai aap log bhi. Ye kitchen hai aapka room nai. Yahan sab log aate jaate hain.

On the other hand guddan pinches him on the chest and gets up from his lap. He too stands and before angad turns he pecks her lips.

Angad: hogaya. Can i turn?

AJ: haan to humne kab kaha tha tu turn kar aur kya hogaya, kuch bhi to nahi kar rahe thay hum.

Angad: haan bhai main he jhoot bol raha hoon. Bhabhi wo nimisha ko bhook lag rahi hai.

Guddan: haan ruk i will make shake for her.

During the day guddan was super busy either with aarti Or nimisha Or maa. So post lunch AJ takes her to the doctor for general check up.

Dr: Mrs. Jindal is perfectly fine now. Lagta hai Mr. Jindal has been a good caretaker. Aap chaliye main aapki dressing nikal deti hoon.

Once they leave the hospital AJ takes guddan to a shopping mall.

Guddan: hum yahan kyun aaye hain. Ghar pe sab wait kar rahe honge.

AJ: kitna bolti ho tum. Koi nai wait kar raha, i have told them we will be late.

Guddan: lekin kyun.

AJ: tum chalo main batata hoon.

He takes her to a saree shop and asks her to select a saree.

Guddan: kis k liye

AJ: gives her WTH look. Wo actually i have an extra marital affair. So samjh nahi aaraha tha use kya gift doon is liye socha tum se pooch loon.

Guddan: (looks at him in disbelief and hits his chest) kya matlab hai aapka.

AJ: Arre mazak kar raha tha. Tum sawal he aise krti ho. Chalo ab bina koi sawal k liye ek achhi c saree select karo apne liye. Wait take these 2 and try them.

Guddan: par...

AJ: chalo jaldi and sends her to trial room.

She wears both the sarees but he likes none.

Guddan: akshat main thak gayi aapko kuch pasand he nahi aaraha. Main bahar aarahi hoon ab.

AJ: ruko ruko one last and hands her a saree.

She comes out of the trial room and she is looking mesmerizing. She is wearing a black blouse with a red saree which has a black lace.

AJ: perfect.

Guddan: finally, chaliye main nikal deti hoon.

AJ: nai aise he chalo. I have made the payment before only. I knew this would suit you.

Guddan: aise kyun

AJ: tum chalo main batata hoon.

Guddan: akshat ye to ghar ka raasta nahi hai, hum kahan jaa rahe hain.

AJ: surprise Mrs. Jindal and winks.

Edited by Akshan5148 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Superb Superb Superb☺️
What a romance filled update
I think now he is gonna propose her 😳
Kaash yeh sab serial mein hota
Waiting for next update😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Amazing dear
Thanks for the akshan scenes
Shayad Aj guddan ko propose krne wala hai
Plz update the nxt part soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Omg it was too Good
Update next part soon plzz
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Amazing dear

Thanks for the akshan scenes
Shayad Aj guddan ko propose krne wala hai
Plz update the nxt part soon

yes even i think ki he is going to propose guddan😛

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