Changes that i think needed in the show - Page 7

Originally posted by: captainplus

antara jaap has been too much since starting🥱 it's nt necessary to mention her in everything...& it's going beyond nw!!

Smooth & normal dial can make scene amazing & impactful otherwise it looks like "speech" & I'm nt fan of TV shows' a long speech!!

maybe but currently since past 2 weeks, it was Antra's barsi & then Antra's murder case, AJ is in jail for that. So how it it supposed to move forward without mentioning her ?

& the dialogues in jail was one sentence at a time which doesn't come in "speech" category & the answer to AJ questions couldn't have been impactful with normal plain ones, it needed weight.

yaar, I clearly STATE since "Starting" ...& Mostly what annoying is Since last 2 wks, it has been all abt antara jaap:(...antara ki jagah...antara ka yeh fav...antara ko iss tarah ka pasand tha...antara ke liye yeh karo..voh karo...tumne antara ko dhoka diya..antara ki jagah kisi aur ko di, antara ko bhul gay...antara ko kabi pyaar nahi kiya...antara ko hum baat kare voh pasand tha...tumhara haarna antara ko pasand tha & it's going on & on...Long list...!!

Normal means simple yaar... no rolling eyes type..

Remember that epi where Aj took class of guddan 4 being careless n giving charge to saru & that problem...there i liked each & every dial of Aj...i was like ohooo

even after that when Aj got emotional remembering that he could nt save antara & the way guddu handled situation & Aj, gave 2 Big thumbs up from me bt Here it was missing, that what I mean!!

here the scene & circumstance was different & if we get same & similar scene again, complain will arise on repetition, same thing, story not moving, no progress, etc.

Story needs to move from that stage, here AJ is in jail, he knows he is innocent & Guddu is feeling helpless seeing him there.

I just gave examples!! I know circumstances are diff!!

My points are neither abt changes nor her upbringing, i can't get how can it be related?

but points were about Guddu not behaving like her 22 year old self & it is related to her upbringing & her changing her nature according to situations.

Subtly agree..so unlike others, there is no one to correct her & improve her mistakes!! Bt it doesn't mean she will give lecture like 40+ !!

hahaha Sry bt snatching gun from enemy isn't new thing 4 fl😆 i hv seen it in so many shows!!

hahaha, when did I say, "its new" ? This was my statement :

"no 40+ year old grabs a gun like that & threaten a police officer in a police station"

Are Ishima & gopi bahu under 40?????😆

Even if hubby doesn't accept or treat fl as his wife, fl be like bold & strong in front of Villain like meri shuhag ki nishani hai &...How dare u think to harm my dear hubby & seeing that hubby gets so much pleased!!😆

& here we go back to square one again. So just cause hubby-wife have haven't consummated their marriage, she should just leave her husband rot in jail, be her jhalli self ?

Akshan as husband wife have not been vocal to each other but have clearly accepted each other & have fulfilled their responsibilities as husband-wife.

Only thing left in their relation is love realization, confession & consummation. AJ has never failed as a husband & Guddu is doing the same, not failing as his wife. They are becoming a hubby-wife before lovers.

You're absolutely right,going back to square one again!! Both are fulfilling it as you said,bt only 1 diff, Guddan is doing it from heart where Aj, just as a duty of hubby!! (i know reasons...he isn't vocal...nt come out from past & ...)

it should be entertainment, not more will complain!!+ve & funny characters must be needed, it will help the show!!

agree or not then, people will definitely complain citing about "unwanted" joke & comedy completely irrelevant to the story & show becoming a complete comedy. Main thing is, the one who like to complain will find a reason to complain no matter what cause complaining is way easier than appreciating.

Diff people, Diff view...I don't know abt anyone, I just know abt me, When I find episode Amazing, I appreciate it & when nt, i wait n watch whole wk silently & @ wk ends, i pen down my frustration...this wk, i did the same!! I don't find anything wrong here!!

i want impactful that's why I'm saying...bt anyway I doubt cv will even show guddu as working!! Aj ko nahi dikhya guddu ko kya dikhayege😆

I choose to be optimistic as whatever will happen will happen in future & cribbing today won't change the future.

Just said to keep it intrigue!!

Originally posted by: rs-shailu29

well said cv's not interested in showing independent girl working ...

gopi2 in the making ..

they can show office politics, conflict bt no🥱

there is no side story ...only bahu's bakwas,guddan getting in trouble aj helping her out ,fashion show festivity and some psyco akshan saving ppl and bahu's..

😕

trust me there is no story just for the heck they are running the show...

rawat track we had hopes that to went waste ......

Exactly yaar, we had so much hope bt it turned out diff!!🥱

akshan bond has improved not the story ...

nothing exciting predictable screen play we know akshan scenes how it will be ...

half of show festivity eats up rest with no logic tracks..

highly disappointed wondering why cv's drag tracks for a week half of the week wasted

That's why b4 getting excited, will like to see something new, amusing!!

Originally posted by: dattu21

Originally posted by: dattu21

Diff people, Diff view...I don't know abt anyone, I just know abt me, When I find episode Amazing, I appreciate it & when nt, i wait n watch whole wk silently & @ wk ends, i pen down my frustration...this wk, i did the same!! I don't find anything wrong here!!

Originally posted by: dattu21

Originally posted by: captainplus

yaar, I clearly STATE since "Starting" ...& Mostly what annoying is Since last 2 wks, it has been all abt antara jaap:(...antara ki jagah...antara ka yeh fav...antara ko iss tarah ka pasand tha...antara ke liye yeh karo..voh karo...tumne antara ko dhoka diya..antara ki jagah kisi aur ko di, antara ko bhul gay...antara ko kabi pyaar nahi kiya...antara ko hum baat kare voh pasand tha...tumhara haarna antara ko pasand tha & it's going on & on...Long list...!!

Normal means simple yaar... no rolling eyes type..

what else do you expect from, Rawat a CBI inspector investigating His own Sister's murder ? Track is revolving around Antra's murder !

i had expected antara topic would be closed forever, mystrey would be solved, Aj would come out from past, his guilt would be vanished, new starting, bt i got disappointed!!

I just gave examples!! I know circumstances are diff!!

In those examples, 1st AJ was scolding Guddu cause she made a blunder by taking decision in haste.

2nd AJ was broken & Guddu was consoling him

Now AJ is confident of his innocence but Guddu is feeling restless & helpless seeing him their. SO they are behaving appropriately according to circumstances

Yup, I hv nt denied it!!

Subtly agree..so unlike others, there is no one to correct her & improve her mistakes!! Bt it doesn't mean she will give lecture like 40+ !!

She is handling the situation maturely, she is growing as a character & those dialogues don't sound like a 40+ lecture but something appropriate for the situation.The situation couldn't have been managed better otherwise.

It sounded heavy just like typical fl(sounded mahaan repeating) & simple straight won't be that much boring!!

Are Ishima & gopi bahu under 40?????😆

Nope but those acts of their are like immature teens.

You're absolutely right,going back to square one again!! Both are fulfilling it as you said,bt only 1 diff, Guddan is doing it from heart where Aj, just as a duty of hubby!! (i know reasons...he isn't vocal...nt come out from past & ...)

Just because he isn't expressing it as such doesn't mean he isn't doing that from heart. He is always thoughtful & took a long time to answer when dadi questioned him. Guddu is expressive about her feeling but he isn't. He has already accepted her from heart but is in denial with himself.

He is going on 2 boats...though everyone he has accepted guddan as his wife, bt denying it in accepting in public ...Till nw, has he done anything 4 guddu as his wife?????gifted necklace, bcoz he saw her sad face & thought she felt bad bcoz he didn't give her anything so farz nibhaya, where as Guddu 1st gifted him baby pink shirt then specs without any force or duty, bt from heart!! Anyone Que his wife on their relation, he silently stood there:(

Everytime there is something abt couple, he brings antara in betn...antara ke liye yeh, antara ke liye voh...bhai you 're married, your wife is hearing whatever you r saying, doesn't guddu feel awkward?????it's indirect insult...then sympathy look does't need!! that's why i said he is doing it as just duty!!

Diff people, Diff view...I don't know abt anyone, I just know abt me, When I find episode Amazing, I appreciate it & when nt, i wait n watch whole wk silently & @ wk ends, i pen down my frustration...this wk, i did the same!! I don't find anything wrong here!!

offcourse, there is nothing wrong in expressing freedom of speech & being a human. You are giving your views & I am giving mine & will keep doing so...

Originally posted by: rs-shailu29

u have all the rights to express ..

🤗honest views helps ..how will cv's know what's not working ..

Exactly yaar, after all we all r fans & watching the show 4 entertainment, just giving our views, what's disappointing & what we're expecting!!

forum is for all ...

debate is welcomed 👏

Yeah, Thank you!!🤗

Originally posted by: dattu21

He is going on 2 boats...though everyone he has accepted guddan as his wife, bt denying it in accepting in public ...Till nw, has he done anything 4 guddu as his wife?????gifted necklace, bcoz he saw her sad face & thought she felt bad bcoz he didn't give her anything so farz nibhaya, where as Guddu 1st gifted him baby pink shirt then specs without any force or duty, bt from heart!! Anyone Que his wife on their relation, he silently stood there:(
Everytime there is something abt couple, he brings antara in betn...antara ke liye yeh, antara ke liye voh...bhai you 're married, your wife is hearing whatever you r saying, doesn't guddu feel awkward?????it's indirect insult...then sympathy look does't need!! that's why i said he is doing it as just duty!!

Originally posted by: dattu21

i had expected antara topic would be closed forever, mystrey would be solved, Aj would come out from past, his guilt would be vanished, new starting, bt i got disappointed!!