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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part-2


They both were trying hard to suppress the thoughts which was making them restless. They both were trying hard to sleep ...to find some peace. But it is said that " jab Dil me toofan uthta ho to ankhon me neend Nahi Hoti."

Guddan was half lied on the bed. She was looking at the wound on her hand which was craven on her hand by a steel rod during the rescue of revati.


She was remembering how Akshat scold her...


A- pagal ho kya ..tum .. agar Kuch ho Jata to... Mana k revati ko bachane zaruri tha lekin us k liye tum unn logo ko Nahi bhool Sakti jinko tumse farq padta hai... Do u understand that...


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Akshat was lying he turned on the light n looked at antara's picture which was on the side table.


He was remembering guddan's face when Vijay Khanna asked her to say I love you to Akshat.

He was remembering the way she was saying him to hold the mask n take some breath. The way she lied herself on him ...


The words were echoing in the ears of them ...


"Tum dono Ka pyaar sachchaa hai you both love each other isiliye tum log pass hue."


Akshat looked at antara's picture.


He got up n reach to poolside.


Guddan heard some footsteps so she closed her eyes. Akshat reached to the bed side n found her lying with closed eyes.


He turned away.but his steps were stopped...


G- Kuch baatein Kar Lene se Dil halka ho jaTa hai...

He turned n found her standing behind him. He looked her with all the pain he has suffered since antara's demise.

Guddan came forward n this time she was determined she holded his both hands by her own n asked...

G- kya BAAT hai ki aap itna Pareshan Hain??? Kis BAAT Ka dard hai ... BATA dijiye hame pls... Pls... Kyon iss Tarah se Khud ko til til Kar maar rahe Hain aap.


Kya hai aisa Jo aapko khul k saans b Nahi Lene deta...

Akshat took her to the poolside they settled themselves n drop their legs in the pool. At all this duration she was noticing him his expression n the thoughts running in his mind.

A- guddan ... Antara Ka katil main Hu


G- aisa aapko Lagta hai..


A- ye sach hai ..


G- main janti hu ye jhooth hai...


A- tumhe kaise pata ki ye jhooth hai...


G- mujhe bhaiya ... I mean Vikram ji me sabkuch bataya hai...

She came closer to him.. put her hand on his shoulder n said looking into his eyes.

G - Akshat ji.. Main janti hu ki aap ko iss BAAT Ka dukh hai ki aap USS din antara ji ko nahi bacha paye magar iss me Aapka koi dosh Nahi hai ... Aapne aisa koi kaam Nahi Kiya hai ki aapko apni nazarein jhukani pade... Aapko Khud ko kosne ki koi zarurat nahi hai...

A- guddan main...


G- agar phir b apko aisa Lagta hai ki aap doshi hai to thik h ... Mujhe ye bataiye ki aap sabse zyada pyaar kissed karte Hain


Antara ji se naa to phir aap hi bataiye ki aapko iss Tarah Khud ko takleef dete dekhkar kya unhe Khushi hogi... Kya wo chain se rah payenge...

Akshat looked into her eyes n found that the girl which he used to think is clumsy, rugged n jhalli is so mature ...

G- dekhiye main janti hu ki ham jinse pyaar karte hai unhe khone Ka dard kya Hota hai... Magar iss Tarah Khud ko bikhra hua banakar ham hamare apno ko takleef dete Hain.

Main ye Nahi kahti ki aap Zindagi ki nayi shuruaat kijiye... Ya phir iss rishtey me... Nahi bilkul b Nahi... Buss aap Khud ko dhoondh lijiye pls... Wo Akshat ji jisse antara ji pyaar Karti this... Wo Akshat jinse maa itna pyaar Karti h ... Use waapis le aaiye pls...

Pls ... Khud ko or apni Zindagi ko ek mauka dijiye...

A- yeh itna aasan Nahi hai guddan.. Khud ko phir se dhoondhne Ka MATLAB hai saikdo guthe hue dhaago ko suljhana.

G- saikdo Yani hundreds of right ... Ye no. Infinity se Kam hai... Definite hai.. aaj Nahi to kal ginti khatam hogi... Magar aap shuru to kijiye...

A- guddan...


G- Akshat ji main Nahi janti ki Mera aap par kya haq hai... Ya phir koi haq hai BHI ki Nahi magar pls... Pahli Baar iss rishtey me apna haq maang Rahi Hu ...

She holded his both hands n looking into her eyes said...

G- Akshat ... Mujhe Apne saare dard de dijiye...

A tear dropped from his left eye. She wiped it. They looked into each others eyes.


Akshat lied himself in her lap. Guddan didn't resist she caressed her hairs.


Akshat holded her right hand tightly.

As he never wanted to let her go. He wanted her to stay wid him always.


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Sorry forumwaasiyon itna hi likh paai. Much soojha Nahi abhi jab dimaag me aayega to next update b AA Jayega.

Bataiyega zarur Kaisa laga...

N a happy valentine's Day to alll...


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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Nice chapter kavya
Guddan ne kitne ache se samjhaya akshat ko

Love their conversation

Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Nice chapter
Loved their conversation
Update soon..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14
Arre waah Guddan kitne ache se Akshat Ko samjha aur samjhaya and the best line was "Akshat ... Mujhe Apne saare dard de dijiye..."
Awesome update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15
Amazing update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Part -3


The sun rays enlightened the Jindal Bhawan. The glow of the lights were something else. The happiness which was reaching the each corner of the house was making the atmosphere as pure as a heart of a child.

When the light ray reached to her she opened her eyes. N a big smile appeared on her lips. She found her world in her arms. Yesss guddan found Akshat sleeping in her lap they both were holding their hands n they were like this all over the night.

Due to light he also woke up n found himself in her lap. he looked up n found her staring at him with a lovely smile.

A- GM Mrs.jindal..


G- GM Mr. Jindal...


They went to their room n got ready...


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When Akshat came out of washroom she found her preparing tea... He asked..

A- ye aap kya Kar rahi hain...


G- main ... Main na kadha Bana Rahi Hu... Are yrrr chai hai...

Saying this she gave him a cup of tea.


Akshat looked at the cup n then her. He does not want to make her upset ... But

A- guddan...


G- jante Hain ham ki aap Roz subah coffee hi Peena Pasand karte Hain or wo b black but... Aaj hamne chai banai hai ...aap try na karna chahe to koi BAAT Nahi...hamara haq hi kya hai...

Saying this she was about to move when he hold her wrist n took the cup... He sipped the tea n was amazed...

A- ye chai tumne banai hai...


G- Nahi Assam k baagano se mangwai hai...


A- guddan ... Tumhe pata hai jab main chay Piya karta tha na ... to mujhe aisi hi masala chay Pasand aati thi...

A broad smile reached her n he said..


A- guddan kya tum kal se Roz mere liye chay banaogi...pls...


G- kal se na Likh k application deni padegi... Arre chay k liye pls kon bolta hai

They had their tea together n then Akshat left to the restaurant...


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Guddan went to maa's room n found her reading a book of Radha Krishna...


G- maa


M- arre puttar AA na andar AAA...


G- maa aap kya padh Rahi hai..ye to koi Radha Krishna ki Kitab lagti hai...


M- haa ...ye ek Katha sangrah hai Shri Krishna Ka ...


Pata hai isme kya Likha hai...


G- kya???


M- sunn... Ham sabhi jante Hain ki Krishna hamesha hi jagat Ka Kalyan karte the ...par Kabhi Kabhi sansaar ki is nafrat se unka Mann dukhta tha ...to wo Apne PREM Yani apni Radha k sath samay bitate ...

G- maa ... Kya pyaar har zakhm ko Bhar deta hai...


M- ha mere bachche ... Log kahte h ki waqt se BADA koi malham Nahi...magar sabse BADA malham pyaar Ka Hota hai...

After a chit chat she left from maa's room.


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It was 11 in the night when Akshat came home. He found her sitting on the sofa n watching a horror movie .


He doesn't know why but he tiptoes went behind her n just hold her back...


She screamed at the highest pitch of her throat... N turned around to find a laughter ...

G- apko...apko sharam Nahi aati ... Aisi ek bechari akeli ladki ko darate hue...

A- achcha..MATLAB tum Karo to prank or main Karu to sharminda... Waah bahut achcha equality equation hai...

G- achcha ye Sab chhodiye... Ye koi waqt hai Ghar aane Ka ... How could u be careless... Itna b Nahi hota ki Ghar me phone hi Kar do ...guddan aaj mujhe late ho Jayega... Nahi Mr. Akshat Jindal to mahaan hai na unko kya farq padta hai...biwi baithe h to baithe rahe bhookhi h to bhookhi rahe ... Ham to aayenge Apne samay se...

Akshat was looking her silently a smile appeared on his face n said

G- ab Dekho muskura rahe Hain...isme kon si BAAT h muskurane ki...


A- aaj bahut Dino baad Kisi se late aane par daant khayi h achcha laga...


G- agar kal se late Aaye Na to dant k sath maar b padegi...


A- kya...


G- aap hame Dara Sakte h ham apko maar b Nahi Sakte...

He hold his ears n said


A- sorry Baba kal se late Nahi Hoga or agar Hoga to tumhe call Kar dunga.

G- jaiye fresh ho k aaiye Khana garam Karti hu...they had their dinner together..


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Mereko mat maarna pls abhi exams chal rahe h phir BHI I tried to update...


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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
Best of luck for ur exam
Cute update
Akhir darra hi diya guddu ne the greatbmr jindal ko
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Nice chapter kavya
Guddan ne apne sher khan ko dara diya

Paki sherni hai wo

All the best for exams

Update soon after your exam finished
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Posted: 6 years ago
#19
Nice update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20
i loved that part where guddan is watching horror movie and akshat holds her from behind and she screams 🤣

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