||Secrets & Lies||- AkshAn SS (Part 16 PG 41) (27 May) - Page 32

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Posted: 6 years ago

O bete ki.....

Kya tha yeh ......

SAPNE me b guddan ki aise imagine nahi Kiya tha mene....

Waise Aisa lag Raha that jaise koi action movie he chal rahi ho....

And guddan k dilouges to bhari hote he...

Last Wala nishana accha tha waise guddan ka....

Hope at the end accha ho sab...

Aur yeh Dubai k prince k yaha koi rayta na fele to accha hoga....

Waise I like this GK....

Kabhi guddan ko aise dekhna chahungi show me aise action to nahi milege but that look though and styling like gk would be best...

Continue soon ...

And good luck for next part q k aise bhari bharkham writing k liye to crocine khani he padti hogi....

All the best dear...

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Glad to know you liked it😃

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Posted: 6 years ago

As Saru of our forum says *clearing throat* Nish Dil Jigar Jaan sab le lo it was that amazing and about lack of romance who cares if this is what we are gonna get. I like it no I loved now I am just busy imagining the reactions of Jindal's when they come to know of this and how ruthlessly dangerous GK can be when she wants to be specially my *favourite Durga*😈. I am gonna enjoy it soooooo much😈. About GK's work so I was right about her being like Tony Stark in terms of work and business dealing and manufacturing arms hence on being targeted because of that (being in that perticuler field). About killings as long as it's all legal I am fine. About her wiping the Mafia would like read about that.

PS Nish do think about turning this ss into ff. You know I was thinking just with a mere change of characterisation and background of Guddan everything changes there is so much you can do every action, reaction is gonna be different making the outcome different, equation between the characters different. There is just much to play with. So do think about it even if not I am cool reading anything coming from you (as long as it doesn't have tragic of depressing ending).😃

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Posted: 6 years ago

Woah 😱😱

Wow it was stupendous❤️

The action scenes were breathtaking

Loved it

Plzz update soooon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Prerna30

Well you nailed it!

Thanks for the praise😃

The fighting scenes were greatly described.

Content to know that😃

Loved the update ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago

Thankss😃

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona1991

O bete ki.....

Kya tha yeh ......

SAPNE me b guddan ki aise imagine nahi Kiya tha mene....

Waise Aisa lag Raha that jaise koi action movie he chal rahi ho....

That's a big compliment. I am glad to accept it

And guddan k dilouges to bhari hote he...

I like to make it deep! Philosophy is my forte!

Last Wala nishana accha tha waise guddan ka....

😃thanks!

Hope at the end accha ho sab...

Aur yeh Dubai k prince k yaha koi rayta na fele to accha hoga....

Tension na lo! Let me quell your fear, dubai k prince is just an extra character😆

Waise I like this GK....

Kabhi guddan ko aise dekhna chahungi show me aise action to nahi milege but that look though and styling like gk would be best...

I'd like to too! But seems impossible!

Continue soon ...

And good luck for next part q k aise bhari bharkham writing k liye to crocine khani he padti hogi....

*chuckles* crocine toh nhi khani padi but irritation kafi ho rhi thi!

All the best dear...

Thanks!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sobiya153

Woah 😱😱

Wow it was stupendous❤️

The action scenes were breathtaking

Loved it

Plzz update soooon

Glad to know you liked it😃 I am more of an emotional writer so complimentsregarding something different means a lot!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: BhataktiAtma.

As Saru of our forum says *clearing throat* Nish Dil Jigar Jaan sab le lo it was that amazing and about lack of romance who cares if this is what we are gonna get. I like it no I loved now I am just busy imagining the reactions of Jindal's when they come to know of this and how ruthlessly dangerous GK can be when she wants to be specially my *favourite Durga*😈. I am gonna enjoy it soooooo much😈.

You are more of a devil than I could've ever imagined!!😆

About GK's work so I was right about her being like Tony Stark in terms of work and business dealing and manufacturing arms hence on being targeted because of that (being in that perticuler field). About killings as long as it's all legal I am fine. About her wiping the Mafia would like read about that.

Chalo! Someone mentioned her profession. GK had to be a Badass otherwise she would loose her sass😎

PS Nish do think about turning this ss into ff. You know I was thinking just with a mere change of characterisation and background of Guddan everything changes there is so much you can do every action, reaction is gonna be different making the outcome different, equation between the characters different. There is just much to play with. So do think about it even if not I am cool reading anything coming from you (as long as it doesn't have tragic of depressing ending).😃

Honestly, I'm nit sure how ss and ff are different. I just wrote it an SS because i wasn't and still not sure how long this story will go. Thiis is the story where i just know the plot and my destination, and regarding the path to that manzil, i carve it on the go😆

Tragic ending! Neverr!🤓life is a tragedy in itself, real nhi toh reel world mein toh main sirf sukoon aur happy endings prefer karti hu.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hey hey!

When are you updating this one next!

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