Apology-TS[Akshan] chapter 9 last part updated on 4 march

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nish_vir

@nish_vir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#61

That cofee scene was cute😆

Akshan ki mohabbatein dekhkar kahin main diabetes se na mar jaun😆

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floral

@floral

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Posted: 6 years ago

#62

Beautiful update dear

Especially that coffee part sipping coffee from same cup

Oh I see AJ brought That gown for her 😆

Loving their bond kissi ki nazar nah lagega inpar

Plzzz do continue soon

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Gayatri9

@Gayatri9

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: KajalTiwari
Nice one waiting for the next part

Ohh Thank you keep showering your priceless feedback

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Gayatri9

@Gayatri9

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Nice update
Love it
Continue soon

Aww

keep loving more and more and keep showering it on me

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Gayatri9

@Gayatri9

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: nahtani88
Fantastic
Update Soon
Thanks For The PM

Thanks!

Will try for as from Friday I have my face training for a week so let's see main kitna time chura pati hoon

I have already mentioned you don't need to thank for it as issme mera apna hi swarth hai do read my other stories also as you liked this I will suggest you to have look on Just for me and Merry Christmas as you liked this maybe you will like them too.

and about FF I won't say anything as I am quite convinced ki who kitne ghatiya hai but as many of the forum members have liked those both OS so I think you too will like it

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Gayatri9

@Gayatri9

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Secretfollower
U describe best akshan emotions in hindi😳
I was just smiling.bcoz i was just literally imagine their sip wala romance😆
I want to see that scene in the show also aj bed coffee ya tea leke aaye guddan ke liye...
Awesome
Pls contiunue soon

I know hindi jyaada ho gayi and dil se sorry for it but I thought ki hindi main ache se feelings convey hogi

that's why I wrote it in Hindi

Haa I knew kisiko acchaa lage na lage aapko zaroor lagega as yeh scene type karte waqt mere dimag main aaya maine pehle se nahi socha tha but I think it was worth as from comments I can conclude that everyone of us liked it and Why didn't you wished me new year? Gussa aaya ho toh sorry.but yaar 2018 ki last leg pulling thi

Hum aur hamare expecttations Ved raj uncle pagal ho jayenge agar har scene dikhayenge jo hum chaahte hai.

Issi liye toh hum yahaan par apni adhuri khwaisshein puri karte hai

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Gayatri9

@Gayatri9

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Angelsanvika08
Nice chapter dear
Like the romance between akshan

Please update soon

Thank you Saanuu

waise bohot dinon se kehna chahti thi but aaj keh rahi hoon I loved your profile pic

and if you showered your love like this I will definitely continue soon Thanks!

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Gayatri9

@Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: nish_vir
That cofee scene was cute😆
Akshan ki mohabbatein dekhkar kahin main diabetes se na mar jaun😆

Aww thank you actually while typing it came to my mind and I felt that it will go with the flow so I wrote it but I am glad as by reading comments I can conclude that everyone of us liked it.

Nahhi as I am not near to you to close your mouth as Akshat did but I will stick the same dialogue

"How can you even think of that Didn't you thoughtof meonce".

Sorry but as I have wrote the chapter today itself so I am still in that zone

but keep showering your priceless feedback

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Gayatri9

@Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: kusharberry
Beautiful update dear
Especially that coffee part sipping coffee from same cup
Oh I see AJ brought That gown for her 😆
Loving their bond kissi ki nazar nah lagega inpar
Plzzz do continue soon

😊 Thanks look I compeleted my promise

haaye lagta hai sabhi ko who hi acchha laga

Haa ji AJ bought a gown for her

Nahi nahi kisi ki nazar nahi lagegi buss aapko further updates dragging nalage as you have readmy each and every part and even praised I will try my level best to keep it fresh but still let's see how it goes

Thanks!