Apology-TS[Akshan] chapter 9 last part updated on 4 march - Page 9

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Posted: 6 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Yeh hui na baat.

Yeh lo naam maa ka baate aur salaah bhi maa jaisi aur madam ko mummy bola toh gussa aa jata hai.

Yaar I am seriously irritated of this PUBg. ek toh ye clgwaale din bhar training main bore marte hain and ghar pe my brother didn't even let touch me my own phone .
Will try for tonight or tomorrow.
Thanks!

its not called maa vali salah overall carrear is important.& jahan tak rahi baat studies ki to i dont know you & u dont know me.so mujhe kaise pta hoga how u irritated from ur studies.
I think iss bar kuch jyada ho gya so better hain ki hum log personal baatein naa krein aapko jab dena ho tab update dijiye.
Ab aage meri taraf se koi reply nahi aayega.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Secretfollower

its not called maa vali salah overall carrear is important.& jahan tak rahi baat studies ki to i dont know you & u dont know me.so mujhe kaise pta hoga how u irritated from ur studies.

I think iss bar kuch jyada ho gya so better hain ki hum log personal baatein naa krein aapko jab dena ho tab update dijiye.
Ab aage meri taraf se koi reply nahi aayega.

Maine maa waali salaah nahi maa jaise I mean the concern my mother has bola
and I wrote that I have got irritated from PUBG which is a online game u must be knowing studies nahi.

Agar taang kheech rahe ho toh u succeeded but agar serious ho toh sorry but I think I didn't wrote anything which hurted you and if it did Sorry.

But hum baat kyun nahi karenge? main concern ki baat kar rahi thi but fir bhi aapko bura laga ho ya irritate huwa ho toh sorry and meri workshop studies par nahi it's about soft skills toh issiliye mujhe jyaada bore hota hai aisa main keh rahi thi.

But still Sorry but aisa mat bolo ki aap baat nahi karoge.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Maine maa waali salaah nahi maa jaise I mean the concern my mother has bola

and I wrote that I have got irritated from PUBG which is a online game u must be knowing studies nahi.

Agar taang kheech rahe ho toh u succeeded but agar serious ho toh sorry but I think I didn't wrote anything which hurted you and if it did Sorry.

But hum baat kyun nahi karenge? main concern ki baat kar rahi thi but fir bhi aapko bura laga ho ya irritate huwa ho toh sorry and meri workshop studies par nahi it's about soft skills toh issiliye mujhe jyaada bore hota hai aisa main keh rahi thi.

But still Sorry but aisa mat bolo ki aap baat nahi karoge.

s traninning to bore hi lagta hai i know well mn tang nahi kheench rahi thi yes ye maa vaali baat mujhe thodi irritaing lagi & jahan tak rahi baat nkarne vali baat so dear mne iss topic par na reply vali baat kahi thi na ki mne aapse ye kaha hai ki aapse baat nahi karongi.mn nahi chahati thi ki iss baat ko mn jyada extend karon.
But now you cleared what was ur actual meaning now i m ok.don' t be sorry.i don't play pubg yes i know its a game.
& pls ab sorry & thanks mat bolna jab bhi hum mn se koi bolta hai to baat extend hoti hai & fir serious ho jati hai.so we should ignore both these two words thank u & sorry.
Ab mn gussa nahi hn & na naaraz hn.aap bhi na ho pareahan & agar nahi ho to achi baat hai. 😳
Mn definately baat karongi aapse😊

Edited by Secretfollower - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 4

As she runned through stairs towards her room. At the entrance of their room she collided with Durga who was coming out of the room.
Guddan- Sorry Durga bahu who main thoda jaldi main thi.
Durga [smilingly] -It's Ok guddan,I can understand., I know. But fir bhi thoda toh bachpana kam karo ,now you are saas of us.
While saying this Durga has naughty expressions in her eyes to which Guddan blushed and hugged her.

Durga- with a soft voice-- It's Ok, it happens now do you have any plan to be in room or you are going to spend this time along me. Soch lo thodi der main AJ office ke liye nikal jayenge.
Guddan blushed and went to her room. While Durga smiled looking her- "Idiot".


When Durga came downstairs Saru,Lakshmi and Vardaan who were still laughing on the incidence and how they managed to encash the opportunity and teased Guddan told Durga about the incidence.
Durga somehow managed her strict expression and scolded the three of them.
Durga-Saru,Lakshmi Vardaan Kya ho gaya hai tum 3 on ko? Didn't you have work?
jab dekho Guddan ko pareshaan karte ho.Don't forget she is elder than you in terms of relation.

The 3 got tensed and after few seconds Durga bursted into laughter.to which they all laughed.
Saru-Kyaa Durga Di,you literally scared me.
Vardaan- haa Bhabhi even I too got scared.
Durga still laughing- hai naa, ab Guddan ke saath reh reh ke uski sangat ka itna asar toh hona hi tha.
Look at your faces you got so scared.my God trying to control her laughter.
Lakshmi- Aur nahi toh kya Durga Di Aapne toh sach main dara diya waise bhi AJ ko toh hum kuch keh nahi sakte toh hum Guddan se hi kaam chala lete hai and anyways she is younger than us mana rishte main nahi but umar main toh hai.
Saru- Aur nahi toh kya and Durga Di look how fortunate we are baaki gharon main Saas Sasur ya baaki log bahuoon ko tease karte hai romance par and we got chance to tease our own saas.
Vardaan- offcourse you know yesterday papa was very disturbed he didn't said anything but without Guddan he won't exist. Guddan has became his necessity.
baaki gharon main bete maa-papa se chup kar romance karte hain and humare yahaan
humare mom dad ka romance parwaan chad raha hai.

Durga-Anyways we all are happy that he has started living his own life,Thanks to Guddan who brought happiness in his life and this house and they all had a family hug.

IN AKshan's room-
Akshat was getting ready as he was wearing tie Guddan went and hugged him from his back.
Guddan- If I would have known earlier that you will compensate this so beautifully. I won't have told you to get upset from me.
Akshat holding her hands- So.gift kaisa laga?
Guddan-Awesome I loved it.
Akshat- Mujhse bhi jyaada.
guddan-pretending to think
While Akshat started tickling her Achha bachuu toh ab tum iss par sochogi.

guddan apologized him and they both shared a hug.
Akshat- I will comeearly from office.Just be ready we have to go out.
Guddan- What? you planneda date for us.
you should have asked me once I have yet lot of preparations of the functions which are yet to be done.
Akshat-Don't worry I have asked Durga bahu and she has happily agreed for it.
So now stop worrying and be ready I will be back till 7 then we will go out.
Guddan- Wow Ok but where are we going?.Please don't tell me that you are gonna take me to the masala factory you took me last time.
I mean I like to spend time with you but who takes his wife to masala factory.
Akshat- Mrs Guddan Jindal if you remember we didn't went to Masala factory for date but just to let you know how food is prepared in order to make you realize how much efforts it takes to make even a single dish.

Guddan-Ok Ok fine.But where are we going? Let me guess,Movie
Akshat-No
Guddan-Umm- Restaurant,nahi please if you took me to our restaurant instead of spending time together you ended up working and if we went to some another restaurant the visitors don't let us spend time together and they all get busy having selfies with you.

Akshat- wait Mrs Jindal Sun toh liya karo Neither we are going for a date nor movie.
Guddan-So where are we going?
Akshat- To your college reunion.
To which she remained shocked...
TO be contd





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Posted: 6 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Secretfollower

studies ho ya traninning ho bore hi lagta hai i know well mn tang nahi kheench rahi thi yes ye maa vaali baat mujhe irritating lagi & jahan tak rahi baat na karne vali baat so dear mne iss topic par na reply vali baat kahi thi na ki mne aapse ye kaha hai ki aapse baat nahi karongi.mn nahi chahati thi ki iss baat ko mn jyada extend karon.

But now you cleared what was ur actual meaning now i m ok.don' t be sorry.i don't play pubg yes i know its a game.
& pls ab sorry & thanks mat bolna jab bhi hum mn se koi bolta hai to baat extend hoti hai & fir serious ho jati hai.so we should ignore both these two words thank u & sorry.
Ab mn gussa nahi hn & na naaraz hn.aap bhi na ho pareahan & agar nahi ho to achi baat hai. 😳
Mn definately baat karongi aapse😊

Thank god pata hai thodi der main main ro deti but quite relieved and maa waali baat toh maine taang kheechne ke liye kari thi Sorry as this time you felt it irritating but trust me I didn't intended to irritate or hurt you.
I think you are right hum yeh personal chit chat chod kar akshan par hi concentrate karte hai it will be better for both of us.
Naa taang khichayi hogi na baat extend hogi So we will discuss only about show and our own perspectives

Ab shayad mujhe neend aaye itni besabri se maine aaj tak kabhi forum stalk nahi kiya jitna last 1.5 hrs main kiya Update type karte waqt mera dhyaan update par kum aur reply aaya ki nahi iss par zyaada tha but trust me agar abhi yeh misunderstanding clear nahi hoti na maybe I would have ended up crying as I am really possessive about my friends and hurting them is actually like a Sin may be unknowingly.

Thanks and aage se not to stretch it issiliye ise bhi lambaa nahi kheechungi. ut still last time Sorry.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Thank god pata hai thodi der main main ro deti but quite relieved and maa waali baat toh maine taang kheechne ke liye kari thi Sorry as this time you felt it irritating but trust me I didn't intended to irritate or hurt you.

I think you are right hum yeh personal chit chat chod kar akshan par hi concentrate karte hai it will be better for both of us.
Naa taang khichayi hogi na baat extend hogi So we will discuss only about show and our own perspectives

Ab shayad mujhe neend aaye itni besabri se maine aaj tak kabhi forum stalk nahi kiya jitna last 1.5 hrs main kiya Update type karte waqt mera dhyaan update par kum aur reply aaya ki nahi iss par zyaada tha but trust me agar abhi yeh misunderstanding clear nahi hoti na maybe I would have ended up crying as I am really possessive about my friends and hurting them is actually like a Sin may be unknowingly.

Thanks and aage se not to stretch it issiliye ise bhi lambaa nahi kheechungi. ut still last time Sorry.

oo seriously 😆 aapka dhyan reply par tha & mujhe pta nahi tha koi itna beshabari se reply ka intezaar kar raha tha.
Even i m also very possessive about my frndz.& its not a sin (tang kichayi) kai baar mn bhi karti hn to mre frndz ko bhi bura lag jata ha mn unhe treat de deti hn😆😊
I know ur itention is not hurting me.now i m compeletely ok & pls aap bhi relieved ho jao ok.
& mujhe bura to laga so u will have to pay for this.i want treat (tang kichai k i bharpai).& treat ke naam par mujhe update chahiye revenge ki & college love story ki issi week.& & ek romantic os akshan ka saath mn.
If its possible dear😊
Edited by Secretfollower - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Superb
Update Soon
Thanks For The PM
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Posted: 6 years ago
#88
Family members Teasing Guddan was sweet
Good update
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Was actually imagining AKSHAN through ur story and dialogues 😆
Loved it continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Every family members teasing guddan its actually lovely.😛...vow
I enjoy ur whole update
Pls continue soon

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