Apology-TS[Akshan] chapter 9 last part updated on 4 march - Page 6

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Secretfollower

Nice dear

AJ ke gusse mn BHI pyaar hai
Lovely
Continue soon

😊
So toh hai
Keep loving
Will try to
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Posted: 6 years ago
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thank you cheese😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Summerlight

Awesome update...

This is for you 👏👏

Ohh Thank you so much
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Zaroor may be tomorrow as mera project slot hai and I usually remains at home in this slot so there are more possibilities
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Chapter 3

As they both had an long and tight hug Akshat while hugging her.
Akshat- How can you even think of that?
Now guddan bursted into tears

Guddan- aur nahi toh kya aapko pata hai aapki naraazgi bardaasht karne se pehle hum maut ko gale laga na pasand kar lenge.
listening this he just closed her mouth with his palms.and nodded in NO
Akshat-still covering her mouth. - Pagal soch bhi kaise leti ho yeh baate I can't even imagine a single second without you aur tum marne ki baat kar rahi ho.
Didn't you even thought of ki mera kya hoga? Abhi toh jeene laga hoon aur tum meri zindagi cheenne ki baat kar rhi ho.

to which she kissed his palm and both again got engaged in a hug
Akshat-
"main tumhe apne aap se dur kabhi nahi jaane dunga.kabhi bhi nahi".
Guddan-Toh aap humse narraz mat huaa kariye,bhale hi agar zyaada gussa aaye toh yahi data lijiyega yaa yeh keh dijiyega ki tumse na ho payega but aise naraaz mat huaa kariyega,pata hai humari jaan nikal jaati hai.

Akshat wiping her tears- Aye don't cry ab toh naraazgi mit gayi na. Aur tum bhi mujhse kuch chupaaya mat karo.
and he firstly kissed her forehead then wiping her tears he kissed her eyelids thenher cheek and finally her lips.
Her tears again rolled off her cheek wiping it he smiled.
Akshat- Agar itni takleef hoti hai toh aise kaam karti kyun ho?
Guddan-What I did?

Akshat-Why you hided that invitation and on top of that you informed the organizer's that we won't be able to come.
Guddan-bite her tongue and started to look here and there.
Haan toh who NGO ke function ka bhi kaam hai,Aap bhi itne busy hai toh waise bhi it won't be possible for us.
Akshat- Nothing is impossible Guddan as the word itself says you I am possible.toh don't lie and honestly tell me Is Kabir the reason?

Guddan- Acchaa Ok abhi abhi toh patch up huaa hai phirse aapka humare saath ladne ka iraada hai kya?
Hume bohot neend aa rahi hai and tomorrow I have lot of work.
so she started to get towards bed he holded her wrist and pulled her closer and carried her in his arms to bed and they both sleep in each other's arms staring each other.

The very next morning Akshat got up early made a call to someone and ordered somethong on his phone. Then he brought a bed coffee for Guddan.
When Guddan woke up she saw him smiling with a tray in his hand.
Akshat-Smilingly Chef Akshat Jindal is at your service mam,Would you like to have some bed coffee?
Offering her the coffee mug.
She nodded in no
Akshat- To the shock But you like coffee and now you are denying it Ok so what you want tell me I will just go and make it.
Guddan-Nothing Chef Akshat Jindal when I will need I will order you,filhaal hum iss coffee se hi kaam chala lenge.

Sipping coffee she made a puppy face telling he didn't addea sugar in it.
Akshat-No Guddan I have added it.
Guddan-No Akshatji just have an try.after he sipped the coffee he told look it's pefect.
Guddan- Really? and then she sipped ahh actually while conversing he noticed her smile and then he got to know her actual intentions as she was sipping the coffee.
He took mug from her hand
Sipping the coffee he again returned her back the mug.

Guddan-What was you doing?
Akshat-Nothing I was just checking the amount of cardamom powder.
To which she stared him and both bursted in laughter.
Akshat-Idiot Sidhe sidhe nahi bata sakti thi that you wanted to have coffee with me I ha brought an another cup for me.

guddan-I knew you would have brought another cup tabhi toh nahi batayaa if I would have told you you would never have sipped it from my cup.
To which he smiled and they both had cup sip by sip.One sip Guddan and another of Akshat from the same mug.

As the coffee ended he kissed her forehead and asked her to get ready fast as they both had to join family for the breakfast.
She went and got ready.

At the breakfast table-
As everydat there was happy go lucky family time.Along with breakfast they were discussing the preparations of the function.
The door bell rang as Lakshmi started to get up to open door.Akshat denied
Akshat-Lakshmi bahu aap baithiye Guddan dekh legi.
Guddan-Koi baat nahi Main kholu yaa Lakshmi bahu kya farq padta hai?
To which Lakshmi agreed and again start to get up but she stopped seein AJ's angry gaze.
Lakshmi[stammeringly]- scratching back of her neck as she usually does Saasu maa aap hi dekh lijiye.

Guddan looked disappointedly towards Akshat while he ordered from his gaze to go and get it.
As she opened the door the delivery boy handed her the parcel took her signatures and went off.
Guddan-What is this?
Durga-Guddan baad main dekh lena pele finish your breakfast.

Akshat finished his breakfast and went to his room
Meanwhile others finished the breakfast as they finished the breakfast they unwrapped the parcel.The 3 DIL's along with Vardaan too joined Guddan actually Kishore too wanted to join them but as the proposal was urgent he left to his room.

The parcel contained a beautiful bright orange party gown.
All the 3 DIl's praised her choice but she replied that she didn't ordered it.the 3 DILs also told that they too didn't ordered it?
The 3 DIl along with Guddan looked at vardaan who too refused and said as Lakshmi doesn't likes clothes of his choice Why would he order it?
Lakshmi-Haan waise bhi itna achha taste Vardaan ka nahi ho sakta.
3 DIls-If you didn't ordered it.we didn't ,then who?
Meanwhile Akshat called Durga in his room just for curiosity to make sure who bought that gown Saraswati called the company and said.
Saraswati- I think by mistake you delivered someone else's order The person took the order no and told that the order has been placed at right address.
Guddan-But none of us ordered this.

Saraswati asked about the person who has ordered as the phone was on speaker everyone got shocked to listen the name of person who ordered it.
No points for guessing he was none other than MR Akshat Jindal.

Saru and Lakshmi started to tease Guddan while she just blushed.
Guddan-in her mind Hume nahi pata tha ki Uncle ka taste itna achha hai warna each time I would have took him along with me for shopping.
Lakshmi-Dekha babyboo sarra din jin papa ke naam ka jaap karte ho na sikho kuch unse.

As guddan couldn'tbear all this and she had already been red due to her blush she started to rush towards her room but then look back when Saru and Lakshmi taunted her ki koi baat nahi Saasu Maa Hum samajh sakte haiaapko Aj ko thanksbhi toh bolna hoga and ache se thanks boliyegaa Saasu Maa.

She actually didn't know where to hide her face and rushed in the room.

Well maine socha tha that this story will get end in 3 parts but I actually didn't know how many more parts it will take So agar jyaada boring lag rahi ho toh bata do to stop or Should I continue
and Sorry as I wrote most of the part in Hindi but I thought that their emotions will be best conveyed in Hindi.So Sorry toh waise main comments ke liyemaska nahi marne waali but jaisi bhi lage bata zaroor dena


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Posted: 6 years ago
#56
Nice one waiting for the next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
#57
Nice update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#58
Fantastic
Update Soon
Thanks For The PM
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Posted: 6 years ago
#59
U describe best akshan emotions in hindi😳
I was just smiling.bcoz i was just literally imagine their sip wala romance😆
I want to see that scene in the show also aj bed coffee ya tea leke aaye guddan ke liye...
Awesome
Pls contiunue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#60
Nice chapter dear
Like the romance between akshan

Please update soon

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