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Posted: 6 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: attiya1.3


Welcome dear...
And thanks for reply😃

Thank you for the welcome this means a lot as it's my first forum
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Posted: 6 years ago
#72
Salam and hi guys..
So this is it...I have never written such big continuation of any story( big for me atleast 😆)

I am very glad from how this part turned out...kiya pyara likha main n ( nazar Na lgay mujhay😆)

Though you are free to disagree.

So honeymoon period if off guyz...love how you ppl appreciated it, loved it and motivate me...thank you so much🤗

AKSHAN OS- chapter 5 ( THE END) : honeymoon diaries


" ghomne chalay"
It was 12 noon. After deciding that they will act as friends, AJ made breakfast for guddan, cleaned their respective rooms and between it, passed delicate smiles to each other.after it ,AJ picked his laptop while guddan surf the channels. After 5 minutes, she got bored and turned her face towards him and make a pout.he didn't notice. Then she cough. Again ! No importance. Finally ,she said to go out.

Akshat moved his neck in trance and looked straight into her eyes.
" ghoomne?"

" han Na please. Raat ki tickets apne karwadi hain to last time Ankara dekh lete hain. "

" nahi"

" kun? Please Na. Achay patti nahi ho ap meray?"

" yeh bura patti konsa hai tumhara?"

" ohh! Achay dost nahi ho meray. Jis Jaga ap bolo gay wahin jayainge uncle."

Akshat took a deep breath " guddan main kam karraha"

" daadi aur hmaray bahu betoon k liye gifts lenge Na please "

" 5 mins. Get ready"

" yahooo" and again a friendly hug!

" kahin main n dosti kar k ghalti to nahi kardi" akshat could only think.

...
After 30 minutes ,they were at one of the most expensive mall of Ankara .guddan entered into one shop and looked for things.she picked one bag and show it to akshat.
" yeh acha haina?"

" han"

" yh 5000 lira kitna hoga?"

" around 60-65000 rs"

" zabardast"

And she continue to picked expensive stuff.bags, jewelry, watches, shoes.on other hand, akshat was a bit taken back with guddan shopping amount.after marriage, he had never thought of guddan way of getting married to him but, this spree of spending money.
After 2 hours, they went to food court to get recharged.

" Sab to lelya hum ne. Ab kuch aur nahi chayay."

" yeh shawl kitni achi haina?"

" hmmm"

" itni soft"

" hmmm"

" daadi kitni achi lagay GI Na is main"

" hmmm" after few seconds, akshat realize what she said.

" main samjha yeh tum n apne liye liya hai"

" itni mehngi shops hain yeh"

" to woh baqi chezain?"

" bahuon k liye. Dekhiye durga bahu k liye bags, lakshmi k liye makeup or jewelry ,saru bahu k liye shoes ,perfumes or baqi chezyn kishore ji or vardaan k liye."

Akshat was out of words. " aur apne liye?"

" kaha to mehnga hai Sab."

" to un Sab k liye kun liya?"

" uncle, woh Sab jindal parivaar k log hain. Akshat jindal ki maa, akshat jindal ki bahuain. Ab yeh log Sab brands hi pehntay hongay.Ab gift denay walay ki nahi jisko de rahay us ki pasand ka hona chayay Na uncle."

" kha liya tum ne?"

" han ,kun?"

" utho."

" kahan ja rahay?" She picked her stuff and almost ran behind him.he took her to a shop and started his shopping spree. Guddan was only allowed to try things and not to utter a single word. When he was paying bill, guddan head almost spin.
" uncle nahi, is main to main Indore ka koi shopping mall khareed lungi."

" shhh! Not a single word" he payed the bill and next stations were shoes, bags, accessories . guddan just glare him with every item.

" uncle Basss! Ab aur nahi. 5 saal ki shopping hogayi meri. "

" hmmm ! OK .dekho aur kuch to nahi lena." Akshat hands unintentionally pointed towards a shop and when guddan looked into his direction, her eyes were wide open.

" agayay uncle apni jawani main" heart popped up.

" kia hua?" Akshat looked where she was looking and wanted to bang his head.it was a lingerie and nighty shop.

" akshat yeh kia kardya"
He turned towards guddan who was staring him with all doubts.

" it was unintentional. Woh tum Indore s lelena."

" MATLAB? Ap chatay main yeah Sab lun?"

" aray nahi.MATLAB daily walay..."
Akshat wanted to stop his tongue.

Guddan crossed him and rushed towards car.

" Ab tharki buddhay ka medal mil hi jayay ga mujhay." Akshat could only think this.
...
It was evening. Akshat hop into car and found her straight face.

" look , I didn't mean that shop. "

" mujhay pata hai."

" to phir mun kun bana hua?"

" ap ne itnay paisay kun zaya karay? "

" listen, jindal parivaar k loog brands pehntay ,to ap bhool rahi hn k ap bhi jindal hain. Air sirf jindal nahi, guddan akshat jindal. Baat saastay mehngay ki nahi hai ,baat yeh hai k agar meri bahuain woh Sab pehnay GI to meri biwi bhi usi standard par rahay GI. Wese bhi in s zyada meri biwi ka meri kamai lar haq hai"

Guddan felt a sense of ownership from other end.someone is there to fulfil her void.she smiled looking at him.they reached home at 7 and akshat informed her that we have to leave airport at 9. Both went to there respective rooms and packed there bags.it took almost 1 hour to do so.akshat cleaned the kitchen while guddan locked all rooms.while doing so, both were thinking of their memories at every point.locked guddan door, hall ,kitchen that sofa where they friendzone each other. Smile crept on their faces. Akshat put bags in car and locked main door.

" guddan?"
He stopped her while sitting in car.

" gift samne walay ki pasand ka hona chayay.so, tumhain woh Sab to pasand nahi to abhi k lye yeh theek hai?" He plucked quite a bunch of white lilies from the garden and forwarded towards guddan. And akshat concluded that he win this time.the glow on her face said the whole story.

" bilkul! " guddan takes them.

" magar maine koi farewell gift nahi liya." Suddenly ,she forwarded that bunch towards him.

" is gift main samne wali ki pasand kahan hai?"

" kabhi kabhi apni pasand samne walay par zabardasti chipka deni chaye" guddan said with a wink and akshat laugh his heart out and if somebody ask guddan what is the most beautiful moment that stick your mind and she can quickly say
" this laughter."

Akshat took the flowers, they didn't talk in way towards airport .both were contended in their space. Akshat informed durga that they are coming back.he picked his book in airplane while guddan watched movie.after few moments ,guddan was leaning on his shoulder and he continued to read his book with a smile and a thought.

" this vacation was worth it"

The end!😃

Edited by attiya1.3 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#73
Fantastic update 👏
It was written twice by mistake...😆 so, I thought why do I feel like I have already read this before when I started reading that repeated one😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Fantastic update 👏

It was written twice by mistake...😆 so, I thought why do I feel like I have already read this before when I started reading that repeated one😛


What's written twice ??

Thanks dear😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: attiya1.3


What's written twice ??

Thanks dear😛


Today's update ...
U wrote it twice one after the other😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan


Today's update ...
U wrote it twice one after the other😆


Tabhi yh itni lambi thi😆

Thanks for pointing out😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: attiya1.3


Tabhi yh itni lambi thi😆

Thanks for pointing out😃


Thanks mat bolo
Next update aaj hi de do😛😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#78
very beautiful end.. loved reading this!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan


Thanks mat bolo
Next update aaj hi de do😛😆

Its the end...😆
Next os will come when I have any new idea
Edited by attiya1.3 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

very beautiful end.. loved reading this!


Thanks dear😃

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