FF : Mr & Mrs Akshat Jindal revenge love lust Part 13 Jan 27 pg 12 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Hi Sudha loved all Ur updates it's a request that when u update the new part pls go to edit post at first Pg n make the title edited so we can catch it easily
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Both the updates are awesome
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
Read all your updates in one go and must say they're awesome😃
The pillow fight and rani padmavati scenes in it were funny 😆
Update soon😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Hi Sudha
Wishing you and your family a happy Deepawali 🤗
The good thing about any fiction story is that writers can make changes to the shows characters n write the stories in any way.

Love your Akshat he is so understanding n mature, love how Guddan is talking with him n being honest. I wish the show Akshat was like this.

love using n comparing Guddans to Rani Padmavati n love the cute pillow fight between the couple

Please write soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Beautiful update dear
Really loved this AJ
Oh I really loved that pillow fight part aur now they find peace too glad to see them sharing bed
Plzzz do continue soon
So will AJ dug out the mystery soon behind the kidnapping and why guddan was asked to marry him
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
I like how AJ is friendly and supportive here
Akshat-Guddan, they r so cute
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
PART 6
It was bright new early morning and everything was perfect at the Jindal House

Except 1 thing perfectionist Akshat Jindal was not yet downstairs to have his breakfast and do morning aarthi by 7:30 A. M

Aur woh niche aye bhi toh kis liye janab toh apni nayi naveli dulhan ke saath itne ache se so jo rahe the

They were both still hugging and sleeping where guddan had her head rested upon akshat's shoulder and he was holding her by the waist

DOWNSTAIRS DINING TABLE

Lakshmi and Saru : durga di

Durga : Haan bolo

Lakshmi : aaj hum Der se aye hain kya nashta Karne?

Durga : nahi toh time teek hi toh hain kyu

Saru : durga di AJ abhi tak niche nahi aye hain aur iss ghar mein hamari shaadi ko itne saal ho gaye ek din bhi eisa nahi hua ki kabhi AJ ne apna breakfast ya time pe niche na aaye ho

Durga : baat toh sahi Bola hai tumne saru waise bhi kal raat jo hungama hua aur use baad jo awaaz unke kamre mein se aa rahe the kuch b teek nahi tha

Chalo chal ke dekh lete hain

Dadi : koi kahin nahi jayega

Durga : lekin dadi

Dadi : Mera beta bahut saal baad aaram Kar raha hain usse sone do

Durga : lekin dadi Rohan ( sorry guys I don't know the names of akshat's sons) please assume that rohan is durga's husband
Toh bol rahe the ki unhe aur AJ ko koi important meeting hain

Dadi : 11 hone main abhi waqt hain agar woh niche na aaye toh 9 baje jaa ke unhe Uta lena aaj ki pooja hum Kar lete hain chalo

All 3 bahus ji dadi

AJ'S ROOM

Both of them were still sleeping

AJ was the first one to wake up

He felt refreshed since he had sound sleep after so many years

He looked around and found that guddan still asleep clinging to him

He looked at her serene angelic face and thought that kaise bachoon ki tarah so rahi hain and removed the strand of hair from her face, he felt the urge to kiss her so he kissed her forehead

Guddan woke from her sleep because of this but she kept her eyes closed

AJ : main nahi jaanta ki joh bhi hua woh kyu hua aur main tume apne patni hone ka haq kabhi du ya nahi par main humesa tume khush rakhe ki koshish karunga

Guddan felt happy hearing this and stirred a little from her sleep

AJ noticed this and pretended to be asleep

Guddan too like AJ admired him and caressed his face and said bale hi humne apse dokhe se shaadi Kiya ho hum iss shaadi ko puri imandhari ke saath nibayenge saying so she too kissed his forehead

AJ was happy hearing the same meanwhile someone started to knock the door guddan soon pretended to be asleep

Hearing someone knock on the door AJ started to wake guddan

AJ : Guddan utho koi darwaaze par kada hain

Guddan : pretending sone dijiye na

AJ : aare tum so jao magar mujhe toh chod do saying so he started to shake her


OUTSIDE AJ'S ROOM

Durga lakshmi and saru hum kitne der se darwaaze par khade hain par yeh log toh darwaza kolne ka naam hi nahi le rahe

Durga : AJ darwaza koliye office ke liye bahut dher ho gaya hain

AJ : oh shit Mera meeting and looked at the time it was 8:45 A. M
Thank God abhi bhi time hain

Iss kumbkaran ki behen ko kaise utaoon itna tightly hug kya hain jaise main kahin baag ke chala jaun

Suddenly AJ remembered something

AJ : Guddan jaldi utho bed pe chipkali hain

On hearing this guddan woke up in a jiff and kahan hai chipkali

AJ laughed out loud itni badi hogayi par chipkali se darti ho

Guddan : uncle apki Jaan leke rahungi main aaj ek toh mujhe daraya aur upar se hass rahe hain and started to chase him

Let me tell you guys guddan is still in AJ'S shirt and her choli while AJ had a lipstick mark on his forehead because of the kiss that guddan gave him earlier

While chasing to escape from guddan he opened the door of his room and came face to face with his 3 bahus

Upon seeing AJ they had the shock of their life

Here was their perfect sasur who slept till late with tousled hair and above all with lipstick marks on his forehead

Guddan came and hugged AJ from side and said aaj ke baad aisa Kiya na toh mujse bura koi nahi hoga

AJ : teek hain meri maa nahi karunga

While the bahus had the 2nd heart attack of the day seeing guddan covered in their sasur's shirt
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Beautiful update dear
Really enjoyed it
Loved this bind between AJ and guddan
Hihi so three bahus got mini heart attack with the scene they saw
Plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Hi Sudha great update
I love this bond of friendship n closeness of AJ n Guddan
Please write soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Sudha it's a wonderful update 😳
Do continue soon



By the way are u the same SUDHA PERUMAL
I had seen you as a writer at a site and messaged u too there

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